Grand Leader of the Heterogeneous Races: Starting from Being Picked Up by a Dragon Girl

Hey, I used my drawing tablet and spent three hours awkwardly drawing this. Please be gentle with your criticism. Then I got writer's block, oops. Other races and characters…that'll probably have to wait until later.

Without the Chosen Ones, Edge World is just a giant plus-sized version of Northern Myanmar. The benevolent superhuman intelligence grants players the ability to upgrade their technology and obtain STC building templates by solving problems; without this skill, the game is practically unplayable.

The first two chapters were good, leading the protagonist through chaos to build their city. However, the author seemed lost afterward, perhaps trying to attract more readers? Suddenly, adventure elements were added. Farming can have adventure, but it should serve the purpose of farming, for resources, or to understand the situation and broaden horizons.

Have you ever been a mouse? Some of this is just random writing and assumptions.

These latest chapters are really hard to read. They lack any of the elements I wanted to see, and the mice have become unlovable, losing their innocence and joy, and the spirit they had in the early chapters. All that's left is a feeling of an old-fashioned lord-themed novel. To be frank, the plot development in these recent chapters is something I've already seen in many other lord-themed novels. I hope the author will make adjustments soon.

If I say the first half of this book is reminiscent of Dawn of the Blade, I think the author would agree. If I say the book changes its flavor from the middle of the third volume, I think the author would also agree. So let me try to talk about what I think this book is lacking compared to Dawn of the Blade.

Building a mouse camp, collecting cats, petting salamanders, exploring technology, and doing daily life is fine. Why turn around and take over human territory? Isn't this a fanfiction about Ring of Eden? Taking over territory and collecting medieval serfs doesn't yield any benefits, and it's just pure sainthood. Most of us who play Ring of Eden collect passersby, organ donors, etc.

I watched the latest episode in one go, but the beginning felt a bit hellish. The ratmen are inherently weak, so having a dragon girl is quite good, but leading a group of primitive people to advance technology seems too difficult no matter how you look at it.

I've only read around chapter 300 before I'm finding it hard to continue. The more I read, the more irritated I get. I really just wanted to read about farming and developing, not this barrage of negative emotions. Can't you just give them a rampage?

It's quite a coincidence that I came across this book by the same author right after finishing Dawn for the third time (I'm building my armor first; I haven't played RimWorld, but I think this book has the potential to reach the level of Dawn or The Witcher if it's well-written, so I'll use Dawn as my main reference. This book is already quite good, but I think it could be even better).