Your Loyalty Begins at the Guillotine!

Let's read some about chasing. Chase is very important. You can't do it without chasing.

It can be seen that the writing style is still relatively immature, but it is gradually growing. The theme is the relatively rare lower class people resisting tyranny. The protagonist's cheats focus on auxiliary, and there is currently no poisonous point.

Is it okay if the Witch explodes? I want to see Fran and the Witch make sweets.

As the title states, the book is good, the writing is comfortable, the plot is good, it is not too witty, and the character of the protagonist is also OK. The cheat settings are not a problem either, providing help without being ridiculously powerful. However, the relationship between the characters is too second-guessing, and it's also the kind of otaku-type second-game. The main characters/heroes are all female. It's not that you can't have females, but you can't have all females, and you don't plan to write a harem novel. Why do you have so many females?

Bold words at the end of the month Nonsense at the beginning of the month Silence in the middle of the month

I like male protagonists who are just, just and kind, and I appreciate this kind of person.

I just received a recommendation for this book today. Isn't it a bit outrageous? 😅. There were some problems with the camp scenes at first, but later on it became smoother and more humorous. The characters are different and the protagonist's mentality changes well. The plug-ins don't steal the show. The battle scenes are reasonable and brilliant. The whole reading experience is very suitable for me as a long-time reader. Good luck to the author! ! !

When I saw the latest chapter, it was not my favorite subject matter but it still attracted me and I finished reading it. It was identified as high-quality food But there is one thing I am concerned about: the difficulty and cruelty of the game were over-emphasized in the early stage. From the description, it was so difficult that hardcore players would have to take lives and die suddenly at any time even if SL snowballed. I think this setting is a bit too much. When reality really comes to the game timeline, I think there are three situations: 1. The setting is out of touch with the expressiveness, and the difficulty cannot be written (although it is developed early, it is not as simple and SL as the game, there is no reason to be any easier than the game) 2. The victory really starts (can readers accept it? ) 3. Upgrade to Golden Finger (I personally think it is more appropriate, and it makes sense logically. But it is also difficult to issue a golden finger without causing any objection) In short, it is very good so far, let's continue reading, I want to see what kind of monster appears at the start of the game.

It feels okay, but it's not very popular. I'm really afraid that your book will die.

So far, it is fully booked, all monthly tickets have been voted in, and automatic subscription has been turned on. Although I haven't started reading it yet, I just hope that this book can achieve greater glory and become bigger and stronger, and the author must not forget about the witch after it becomes popular😭. You must fill in the pitfalls of the previous book, otherwise I will never forget you even if I am a ghost! I will scratch the soles of your feet hard! On every night!

🎬 Plot: Four stars, classic plot of kingly rebellion. ✒️Writing: Two stars, too ordinary, straightforward narrative, which is the biggest obstacle to reading. 🎭 Character design: Samsung, obviously the writing is quite good, but it just feels a bit too formulaic.

As the title states, we are really making a revolution seriously, taking it step by step, seeking truth from facts and adapting to local conditions, and elements such as system panels are not too obtrusive. Well done. Please update to the end (o´Д`o)ノ

Although the focus is different, what the author wrote reminded me of the feeling I had when I read "Let You Farm and You Become the Emperor of the Empire" before. I just hope it doesn't end up being a eunuch like that book 😭. It would be nice if there were more specific war scenes later. It would also be nice to manipulate the enemy at your fingertips, but the head-on battle with large armies still makes people excited 😍

What I like most about this book is the writing style. Such a concise and concise writing style fascinates me so much.

The protagonist is well portrayed, and you can really feel his personality charm, especially when recruiting Elena

There are currently three known hero units, the Bow Girl, the Gun Girl and the Imperial Afterglow. The Bow Girl currently seems to be able to fight up to ten in melee combat. If you shoot arrows from a distance, you can double or triple the number as appropriate. According to the description, the Gun Girl can only fight one against a hundred when she is fully equipped with divine equipment in the later stage. Currently, the former It should be enough to defeat thirty of them with a broken armor and novice outfit. After finishing the game, the male protagonist said that it would be no problem for Imperial Yuhui to fight the two girls with bows and spears alone, and this guy seems to have a high hidden attribute. Even if he is not the main battle unit but the command unit, the gun girl can't do it alone. Based on the Pengci, when it develops in the later stage, it should be able to hit three or four hundred. In the early stage, it looks like it can at least hit fifty. From this, it can be inferred that the limit of the main battle hero unit in this book should be one to one thousand. But the best thing is that this Diao Shu has a horse-stepping god, and the god can also do it. God's Chosen One, I'm a little confused just looking at it. At least the hero unit should not be chosen by God, but the hero. When the hero looks for the gun girl, the hero name is not displayed on the panel at the beginning. It is estimated that the hero unit is a mortal's special attribute and is not a gift from God.

The combination of the rebel's natural justice and the protagonist's charming determination becomes the most shining point.

It's beautiful, I love watching it. The protagonist is completely capable, and his IQ crushes his opponent's. And rely on a little bit of full-picture perspective. It's a little off-putting, but the whole thing relies on the protagonist's powerful wisdom to supplement it.

If an author opens a new book, why don't he promote it in the old book? (Sad)

It feels like it's about to be cut 😢

No, I was growing vegetables on the farm and suddenly found that there were no more people 🙂

Yes, he has been a eunuch, so he is suitable for fattening and then slaughtering.

I have a question. The protagonist started a year ago in the main plot. So after a year, will there be a situation where there are not many players, three to five players, and then the empire will be conquered and then the elves will fight players, or will there be thousands of player organizations behind it?

The book is good, but have you ever thought about changing the title? ()

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It's pretty good. Although the protagonist is currently in a difficult situation, he has a very charming personality.

This book has the potential to be a hit, but how can you make it so popular with your update speed? It's okay if you can't update more than a dozen chapters in just one day after it was released. In the past few days since it was released, you have been updating three or four chapters a day for four or five days in a row. This update is too slow.

The main character is very likable and I hope he is happy.

I quite like the plot of interacting with the heroine, and there are quite a few. In addition to fighting, I also want to see more 😍

I think the author's story is very good, a typical grassroots rise. I like it very much, but I have a few suggestions. I don't know if it's my imagination, but the author's writing style seems a bit too... Concise? Both the character dialogue and the plot gave me this feeling, resulting in the characters' emotions and plot not being full enough. As an example of dialogue, if someone tells Lear bad news, his reaction is probably as follows: He said: "I know." It's just one sentence, some are too short. And most of the dialogue is written in the "xx said" dialogue, but I think the author can try to write it like this: Lear was silent for a moment and closed his eyes. "I know." That's about it? On the one hand, it won't read in a cookie-cutter or dry way, and on the other hand, you can also feel the emotions of the characters (of course, I think there should be better ways to express it, this is just an example of starting a story) In terms of plot, some events ended too quickly or the foreshadowing was slightly insufficient. As a result, although it is enjoyable to read, it is not completely satisfying. For example, the protagonist's trump card for defeating Ian is because there is not enough foreshadowing or clues revealed to the reader to turn defeat into victory. As a result, when the protagonist defeats Ian, it is a bit... It cannot be said to be a cheat, but it is a very deliberate arrangement. There is also a feeling of abrupt or abrupt ending when Aphra betrays her adoptive father and Ravel's death. Of course, the above are just my suggestions as a reader. Regardless of whether the author adopts it or not, I will continue to read it and witness the rise of the protagonist Lear!