Mom, Do We Still Want More Land?

The natives used to be so awesome when they woke up, how can you be more sophisticated later? The lords of another world, the top management are all elementary school students, they will fool you in everything, they don't have any brains😰

As the title says, Gate of Two Worlds has almost seventy chapters, but the content of the transaction is never mentioned. The protagonist is obviously a trader, but he just goes to farm. Then if you do this, can't you start farming if you don't come to your door? There is no need to have a slave contract. The slave contract has no restrictions at all. Why else can the protagonist find Guo Jia and just use the slave outside?        ，，，？ How does the protagonist become stronger? And you asked Guo Jia for help, why are almost all the ideas proposed by the protagonist? Then what is the use of the experts you asked Guo Jia for help? Just a passerby? It's enough to mention your life secretary chapter, but you still need two chapters? What genre is your book in? What everyone sees is the collision of two worlds, not this. The setting has always been a fantasy, the protagonist has never actively traded, and the trade between the two worlds has not been carried out.

I originally thought it was a complete novel, but I kept saying that I haven't gotten into the main text for a long time, so I suggested that I change the name. I can't stand it anymore, goodbye

In fact, the writing is good, but it is a bit verbose. If the author were more verbose, the shortcomings could be solved. I suggest that the author change the title of the book and it may be better.

We can't say that the author writes well. It's not like those novels where nothing is written in one chapter. This novel is about writing everything in detail, or in other words, the author doesn't know how to go into detail. The author just wants to show the world he has set up in detail. The writing is very simple, that is, a straightforward narrative, so many readers say it is poorly written. In fact, the writing level is not enough. For the same detailed content, if the author can disrupt the world setting and straightforward plot development, or insert it into the main story line in a different way, and bring it out bit by bit, it will not be called watery. Let me give you an example. The opening chapter describes how the protagonist entered the National Security Bureau, and then wrote more than ten chapters where the protagonist explained the various settings of the different world to the expert team. Is it necessary? Can all the settings of more than ten chapters be used before the first big story? Why can't I leave it blank? Briefly write about the weeks of discussions and preparations that the protagonist had with the expert team, and then skip the time and mention the general situation of the other world. The country has learned all the information that the protagonist knows from the protagonist, and then formulated plans and preparations. After a chapter or two, briefly mention it, and then directly start to describe that the country is ready. The protagonist will follow the team to go to the other world. What is the goal and action of the first step, and the information and the other world that set the first step. Let's talk about the boundary setting and the country's response. Leave other information and settings related to the subsequent plot blank. In this way, reading about some countries' preparations, but obviously not the equipment, plans, and actions prepared for the first step, can be understood by readers as foreshadowing or arousing interest. In this way, you can also see the readers' guesses or speculations, and you can use the good guesses and improve them into the settings or outline. In fact, it just changed the order and inserted various settings into the corresponding paragraphs. However, this writing method of inserting settings is a test of writing skills. At least it is much more difficult to read than the current straight-forward narrative that throws out the settings and plot development. The author has put a lot of thought into the setting of this book. There are pictures of all the equipment he brings, but it is useless. What we read in novels is not the setting, but whether the story is well told. A good story will definitely make a mediocre setting come alive, and one that is not told well No matter how fancy the setting is, not many people will read the story. The setting is to serve the story, and the story depends on whether the telling is wonderful, that is, whether the writing is wonderful or not. The same is about a boy meeting a girl. Japanese anime revolve around this core. How many wonderful stories have been written? How many vulgar stories have you written? I wonder if the author has read "My Sister"? The female character Wu Geng Liuli is in the same situation as you. The story was written as a setting collection. In summary, the author's writing skills are not enough, and there is no outstanding story arrangement. Writing is not just about designing the plot. How to write interesting dialogues, how to keep readers interested in the settings, how to leave blank spaces, how to abbreviate, and how to put an old bottle of wine into a new bottle. These are all writing skills. The authors are sincere, but their writing style is average and their shortcomings are obvious. They cannot elaborate properly and can only tell the story in a straightforward manner (in fact, it can be seen from the introduction that the author is worried that readers will miss even a little bit of content, so he has to write everything down). If you can accept this for sure, you can try to read it. Anyway, there are free chapters. But evaluation requires book friend status, which is a very bad review for me. All reviews that require book friend status must be long and lengthy. If I am not allowed to comment at will, I will complain in a straight and straightforward narrative without details.

Because

After seeing 217, I finally couldn't stand it anymore. I defeated the Archmage in seconds after meditating for the first time. Drinking tea can improve your mental power, and eating compressed energy bars can improve your fighting spirit. Is this different from the earliest I am the Archmage who eats sweet potatoes to support the Dharma God?

After reading about twenty chapters, I finally understood what "the gold content of 13 books at level 5" means. There is a reason why you can't be popular or become a god.

He was said to be verbose, and a group of people were there to maintain it. The first 15 pictures can be solved in one piece, which not only reduces bugs, but also prevents some people from looking for details. Luo Liba wrote a lot

Too verbose, and I often think that my IQ is lower than that of others.

To be honest, your profile is written like a dog💩

I find that books on this type of subject are very wordy and ink-laden. There were dozens of pictures but none of them got to the point.

Three golden chapters, three golden chapters. You are an old author after all. Chapter 28 is all about introducing the background and you haven't even started yet.

One sentence conclusion: This set of dragoon armor can be prototyped and tested in 2026, but it cannot be mass-produced and installed; it belongs to the level of "laboratory + military prototype" and is still 3-5 years away from actual combat installation. 1. Which materials/components can be made now (✅ Mature) - Titanium sponge + titanium alloy skeleton: completely mature, used in batches in aviation/military industry, processing, welding, and forming are no problem. - Airgel cushioning/insulation: already in mass production, can be used as a flexible sandwich/lining, extremely light weight (whole body ≈ 2–3kg). - Non-Newtonian fluid buffer layer: It has been used in body armor/protective equipment and can be made into a flexible interlayer with stable energy absorption effect. - Military warrior exoskeleton: There are prototypes/test versions in China, Russia and the United States, with a load capacity of 90-110kg, a battery life of 8-12 hours, and the ability to run, climb and bear weight. 2. What cannot be done now/extremely difficult (⚠️ stuck in the neck) - Crystalline two-dimensional interlocking materials (the "crystalline materials" you said): - The laboratory has samples (graphene-like/two-dimensional crystalline), but they cannot be molded into large-area, low-cost, high-strength armors. - Problems: small size, high brittleness, sky-high cost, and inability to make complex surfaces/joints. - Overall integration and reliability: - 95kg heavy armor + exoskeleton + multi-layer buffering, joint matching, human-machine collaboration, fatigue resistance, and battlefield reliability have not been verified. - Power supply, cooling, maintenance, and modular replacement are all engineering problems. - Cost and mass production: - The prototype cost may be tens of millions per set and mass production is not possible. 3. Real capability boundary in 2026 - ✅ Can do: 1:1 prototype, laboratory testing, static display, short-distance maneuvering. - ❌ Cannot do: long-term actual combat, flying on a dragon, continuous combat on complex terrain, and large-scale deployment. - Real level: equivalent to the prototype stage of the US Army's "Future Warrior"/Russian Army's "Warrior-3", which is stronger than the current equipment, but has not yet been finalized. IV. One-sentence summary (for setting purposes) This set of dragoon armor can be built, worn, run, and fought in 2026, but it is a "laboratory prototype + military industry verification" and is still 3-5 years away from actual deployment; it is the direction of individual heavy armor in the future, but it cannot be used on the battlefield on a large scale yet. Would you like me to compile a simplified plan for the "2026 Realizable Version" of the Dragon Cavalry Armor for you, replacing the crystalline material with the existing high-performance composite material, so that it fully meets the current technical level? I asked Ai

It's not like a country opening up wasteland. There are too many descriptions of the protagonist. It gives me the feeling that the master of the earth has gone to another world to show off. I write whatever comes to mind without an outline.

Crazy introduction to the local customs, please, I'm here to read the novel, not the setting collection

It was okay at first, but then I just let myself go and wrote all kinds of wisdom.

I have been talking about the world view and introducing the background. What can I remember after talking so much? The mention of a name will expand the character, family, and history narrative for several chapters, making you forget that this is a novel.

The more it gets written, the more rubbish it becomes. A city manager wrote two pages and even imitated a movie scene. I was speechless. Not as good as the previous career introduction

Ouch, it turned out that I was right not to subscribe yesterday morning. I obviously started writing randomly. What I wrote the day before yesterday suddenly became very difficult. Sure enough, something is going to go wrong. The author often lets himself go too much, and the plot outline feels poorly designed. If you don't know how to write, throwing the dice and refilling it is better than writing blindly and letting yourself go.

The protagonist's performance at the beginning is quite good, he is brave and resourceful, calm in doing things, and has a feeling of being in control of the overall situation, but then things change a bit, don't you think the author thinks? To put it simply, let's talk about the changes in the protagonist before and after, the difference between a senior person who controls the overall situation and has excellent psychological quality and a young man. What does the author think? Furthermore, the country written by the author seems to be incapable of adapting. When dealing with other worlds, he still treats the real world with the same gentle behavior, which makes the country a bit rigid. It can be said that no one who can reach the top is soft-hearted. The country's apparent moderation is not really moderation, but a political need. Since ancient times, there has been no development without bloodshed. If the author writes about the country and the protagonist too naively, the book will not be interesting to read. Rivers of blood are the only way to scare all the villains. In this kind of plane development, only by letting others see your iron-blooded skills and strength, others will become good gentlemen and sit down with you to do business. Also, the author thinks that our army is too benevolent. Can such a benevolent army be used in wartime? No army can have any kindness or compassion when facing the enemy. We have arrived in another world. Faced with the overpopulation of kobolds, we still want to treat the prisoners preferentially, so the writing is a bit frowning. The protagonist also reveals a gentle feeling when dealing with creatures from other worlds. Since the protagonist chooses to develop in an pioneering way, he is not allowed to have such a thing as kindness. The best development now is to kill a few pirates in the surrounding area first to deter the pirates in the surrounding area. Then slaughter all the creatures on this island, and firmly control this island to use it as a base. No creatures that can harm ordinary people from the earth can be left in the base. Then the country will set up a force similar to a trading house, and slowly open shops in cities in various countries. These shops will serve as a trade window, and then they will knock down the island next to it, control all the creatures inside, and then build a walled city, similar to ancient cities. Moreover, this is the seaside, which is most conducive to specializing in trade and trading bulk commodities. The bulk commodities traded from this city must pass through the protagonist's hands. It is equivalent to the protagonist buying all the commodities from the country and then buying them out from the protagonist's hands. This is equivalent to the protagonist trading back and forth twice. In the future, all transactions completed in this city must go through the protagonist's hands. Isn't it easy for the protagonist to become stronger? And the country can also gain a lot of territory here. The author should stop writing about the country like a virgin. It is not realistic or logical at all.

First of all, there is nothing wrong with the setting of this book, but the author's writing power is limited and he cannot write all kinds of deep interactions between the characters. What can be seen so far is only superficial interactions, which can shock this native and shock that native. And there is another point. In the current chapter, my country's diplomat is written as if he is mentally retarded to highlight the protagonist's IQ. I really can't stand it, brother. Who can be a national diplomat who is not a thousand-year-old fox? From the beginning, you know that this is a feudal society similar to that of Europe in the past. It would be outrageous for you to ask diplomats to be polite and show off the courtesy of a great country.

The title of your book is well chosen. Everyone on both sides was shocked when they saw it. I see that there are already quite a few people in the comment section for team building.

The word "mother" changes from master to son

There are too few plots, and there are still a lot of settings on the shelves, which is not interesting at all. Who wants to watch you? Compared with the settings, I want to see less of the motherland promotion and trading.

It's no longer worth reading. It doesn't have an outline, it doesn't know how to write hydrology, it doesn't know how to write Dihua, and it doesn't know how to copy jokes and borrow historical stories. The updates are starting to be unstable, which proves that the ink in the belly is over.

That is, our current space is closely monitored. There are a lot of satellites in space, and various astronomical telescopes are constantly looking into space. Especially like our space station, various observation methods around the world are watching it every day. You have greatly deformed the space station and are still developing it on the moon. Are the satellites in space and the various astronomical telescopes on the earth all blind? ? ? ? ?

From the first chapter to the 200th chapter, the world view introduction accounts for at least 40 pictures. I feel that most of them don't need to be introduced in such detail. Either don't introduce it at all or just simplify it. Let me introduce it as an extra (personal suggestion). Moreover, the intrigues and intrigues were not written out. It's more about showing off in modern society than in ancient times. How well you eat and how well you dress. (But I don't deny that we do eat well and wear well now.) And you, as a new force. When dealing with established forces, there should be some friction. Just like the United States' discovery of the New World, it took more than 150 years from discovery to occupation and more than 200 years to fully master it. Considering that the protagonist is an immortal species, there is no need to worry about time. It is completely possible to bring back materials from other worlds for development, and then create higher technologies and invade them from the opposite side. In addition to writing about different worlds, you can also write about modern times. How have those materials changed since they were used? How did it change the present? Aren't you able to improve your own abilities just by influencing the bilateral world? It doesn't have to be a different world, this world can also be used. Then feed it back to another world. Kill all those pirates and use them as an outpost. Didn't your story set up a continent that was directly destroyed by a great magician? This is the world of high magic, so it is impossible for you to invade. Isn't China the best at diplomacy and transactions? Didn't you write about the Plane Silk Road in it? You can also write deals with the five countries and send envoys to other continents. Then resell the items, and then think of ways to set up a space door or something like that. Let's develop other high-magic worlds. Isn't this just the initial level 7? Then look for a higher level 7. Go directly to outside sales middlemen. Then develop the materials from the other world to the contemporary Blue Star. When the neighbor on the other side feels something is wrong and wants to launch nuclear weapons, you can just destroy the stars with your hands. Or a hole was opened directly in the inland mountains, and the enchanted spaceship flew out of the other world (shielding any detection and being able to become invisible) and appeared above the Black Palace. Of course, there are still many immature aspects in my above ideas. There are many things you can write about, such as going to other different worlds. There is also the protagonist's mental growth journey as an immortal species. From Aba, Aba to contact with all kinds of outstanding talents and what I learned, I became a scholar, a businessman, a diplomat, and a politician who knew everything. Passively absorbing knowledge is fine. Of course, it is recommended that the above be written according to the author's actual situation.

After reading Chapter 30, I kept getting introduced, introduced, introduced, introduced, I was really numb, the plot was so slow.

After enduring the boring setting for more than 40 chapters, I was defeated by the author's God-given sentence. For a moment, I didn't know whether it was the author who was Mo Zuoren or whether he was deliberately attracting Mo Zuoren. As a normal person, I can only run away.