Adventurers Probably Don't Count as Heroes

I feel like there is no difference between reading these ten chapters and not reading them.

It is this self-awareness that makes the author write well. Long Aotian has seen too much. It would be great to be invincible and start fucking people, but that is a useless idea 😡

The impression of names and characters is not established. The names of some characters are all in the structure of -*er*. It is very easy to get confused when the impression of the characters is weak. Seeing that now I can't even remember the name of the protagonist, it may be a flaw. However, the story is not bad, not cliché or bad, but many characters are flat or have no sense of existence, which leads to little expectation or concern for the characters. But it's not that the author didn't try to develop the characters, but that he spent a lot of time with limited results, which is also very strange.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a comforting Western fantasy. There's no damn panel point system, there's not a bunch of boring women, and there's no male protagonist who gets into heat every time he sees a woman.

Chapters 79 to 86 are all dialogue, and there is no progress except that the protagonist rises two levels.

I have been reading this book since I was in my last reincarnation, that is, when I was following the bard master. Although the poor performance in that part caused me to rewrite it, I unexpectedly felt that the reading experience of this book alone has improved. In fact, I may consider publishing the deleted chapters as extras later

It feels like running in a group. Nowadays DND novels are basically about killing and killing, and rarely write these stories related to the world view.

It's very good. I personally feel that the shortcoming is that there are too many internal dramas and complaints from the author. I don't know if it's for the sake of word count, but it ruins the perception of the story. In addition to what you have said and what I said, the protagonists have begun to integrate into the world. It is because the internal drama is the author's idea, and he complains like breaking a wall. In the end, it seems that you are enjoying it, and a bro suddenly runs up to you and stares at your phone screen and says, "Brother, the plot of your novel is too this and that." The rest is actually okay.

The story is good and the characters are quite interesting, but when will the protagonist's mentality adapt to it?

The writing is good, and I have ordered it all. I just feel that the pace is a bit slow, but I am worried that if the pace is faster, it will not have the same flavor as now.