Adventurers Probably Don't Count as Heroes

These ten-odd chapters felt like reading them was no different from not reading them at all.

That self-awareness is so well written, author! I've seen too many overpowered protagonists. It might feel good to be invincible and start having sex, but that's the thinking of a complete waste. 😡

The names and characters haven't been well-established. Some character names use the "--*er*-" structure, making them very easy to confuse when character impressions are weak. I haven't even remembered the protagonist's name yet, which is probably a major flaw.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a heartwarming Western fantasy. There's no damn stat allocation system, no bunch of boring women, and no male protagonist who gets horny with every woman he sees.

Perhaps it's because there are too many major events leading to viewer fatigue, or perhaps it's because the protagonist clearly has a cheat code that allows them to be resurrected but doesn't get used, leaving a frustrating feeling like you're in the middle of taking a dump but can't finish.

It's pretty good. Personally, I feel the downside is the excessive internal monologues and author's rants. I don't know if it's for word count, but it really ruins the story. Besides the fact that everything's already said, what's left to say?

Chapters 79 to 86 consist entirely of dialogue, with no progress except for the protagonist leveling up twice.

I've been reading this book since the previous cycle, when I was following my bard master. Although that part didn't do well and had to be rewritten, surprisingly, it improved my reading experience. I might consider releasing the deleted chapters as side stories later.

It feels like watching a riddle; not knowing who the main character is or what the plot is is like not having watched it at all. 😒

The author's dreams these past two days have been a bit unrestrained.