The King

Really, the protagonist doesn't look like a time traveler at all, but a native. It's almost two hundred chapters in, and it feels like he doesn't have the experience of a time traveler at all. It was quite primitive in the age of feudalism, and many modern measures can be implemented to strengthen one's national power. There is no need to follow the ancients and take so many detours. There are obviously shortcuts, but you have to take detours, compete with others, and weaken other people's IQ. For example, tax reform, for example, can guide export and import goods through tariffs. The purpose of tax reform is not for money, but to better coordinate and regulate the country's power, so as to better develop the country's financial system, rather than breaking it at a stroke. For example (During the Spring and Autumn Period, Qi Henggong wanted to punish the Lu State, but did not want to send troops directly. As a result, Guan Zhong gave Qi Henggong a note. He asked Qi Henggong to lead the nobles to wear mink clothes and other luxury goods, and buy them from Lu on a large scale. As a result, everyone in Lu gave up farming and went hunting. In the second year, Qi suddenly banned the import of luxury goods from Lu. Finally, because Lu neglected its grain fields, the price of Lu's grain rose sharply, and many people went bankrupt or starved to death). All products of slavery are owned by the lord, so its innate enthusiasm is destined to be impossible to compare with private ownership, which hinders development in disguise. If the feudal system is reformed in the future, for example, it will be modified with reference to the Qin Dynasty's military industrial system. For example, slaves can be granted the status of freedmen through war or farming. However, freedmen cannot be granted noble status after participating in wars. The acres can only be inherited, not sold, and can only be sold to lords. When a person owns a certain number of acres, he will perform meritorious service, develop some titles, and receive the prescribed currency every year. After his death, he will be succeeded by demotion or directly exempted. And as time goes by, when the wasteland where the protagonist belongs is fully developed, how to solve the overcapacity of food production, how to export steel to capture the market, and to provide employment for the people in the territory. In the event of a famine, how to control domestic food prices and how to prevent dumping by other countries are all inseparable from tariffs. There is also currency reform. In the context of your story, even many nobles sometimes lack money, and the nobles themselves have the right to mint coins. You can issue your own currency and link the currency to iron. Or be linked to table salt in the future. Moreover, the currency itself is relatively equivalent to gold, silver, and copper. During the Spring and Autumn and Warring States Periods in my country, which was the feudal system era, each country had its own currency, and even some countries (such as the State of Lu) had no gold, silver, copper and other materials in their early days. They even used shells as currency, but that small country was not beaten for this. Lowering its costs through advantages of scale has allowed its profits to be less than one percent. The original intention of making currency is not to make money, but to promote employment and development in the territory and surrounding territories. On the one hand, it improves one's own popularity, so as to better promote one's products. On the other hand, currency itself is equivalent to a commodity. Although the profit is only maintained at 1%, the process of making currency is still profitable due to the advantage of scale. And by making currency, the territorial residents can also obtain profits through labor, by purchasing minerals, coal, slaves from allies, and even through subcontracting, with allies acting as modern human intermediaries. He organizes people to work, and you give him money and let it be distributed to the employees of his organization, and attract people through benefit sharing and binding. On the other hand, if you encounter extreme circumstances, you can intercept some of the materials from the enemy forces and use them in the war. At the same time, we established economic alliances with some nobles, providing preferential treatment internally and maintaining the original price externally. Let them open up the market for you, and when they are suppressed in the future, they will also help you openly or covertly for their own benefit. Also make its economy single and dependent on you. For example, if you are making weapons, if an ally has coal, he will mine it himself, but he will also purchase his coal in large quantities and sell grain at a low price. When the profit from coal is higher than the profit from crops, they will go to media, and you can purchase their land at a low price. When you turn against him, you can punish him at any time. Not only coal, but also some low-end agricultural tools and weapon production lines of low-quality goods can be moved to their territory or their territory residents can be recruited, and the profits of the extra goods produced and sold in their territory will be shared with them. You control Source Iron. Refining iron ore into iron bricks and then processing them. For areas with rich land, you can also purchase their food in an all-round way. Make it dependent on you. You can even use the principles of futures to set traps for hostile opponents, thereby attacking them. I also feel that people who write lord novels seem to like to describe wars by comparing themselves to others to show off their own strength. In fact, as modern people, we can learn from many ancient tactics and formation methods. There is no need to suppress the opponent to show off. Serfs are used in the same way as serfs, and elites are used in other ways. This is the meaning of the existence of the formation. No matter in any war, the essence is to achieve a situation where more people fight less. I'm not talking about total force, but creating a local situation where more can defeat less. In this way, the small ones lead the big ones, forming a comprehensive victory. This is also the basis for the birth of formations and tactics. Whether it is in the era of cold weapons or the era of hot weapons, it is just in different eras This is the test based on social changes and the progress of weapons, gradual evolution and upgrading. In ancient times, duels were fought because of the need to rely on people. When the two sides fought, often only the people in the front row fought, and the people in the back could not fight at all. Therefore, based on this basis, the existence of this type of formations was derived. However, as time goes by, the development of firearms gives a new evolution of formations. Changes, matchlocks, etc., Because of the inconvenience of filling and poor range, can only be carried out gradually through volley fire. However, as weapons become more and more modern, this method has also been eliminated. After all, weapons have evolved to have longer ranges and longer ranges, so barbed wire and trench warfare were invented. Later, the three-three system and short-sold assault tactics evolved, as well as the furnace tactics, blitz warfare and large-depth strategic tactics, coupled with modern, four-position integrated tactics, these are all tests of the soldier's ability. Peasant armies overthrew regular armies everywhere. You don't know some of the more complex formations, but some simple formations shouldn't be difficult either. For example, circular array, square array, long snake array, cone array, flying geese array, and turtle array. It shouldn't be difficult, right? There is also the reform of the military system. Select smart and strong people. You can completely raise a group of completely off-duty soldiers, double the training, and be supported and paid by the lord's mansion to make them elite. Then compulsory military service is implemented, and those who are twenty years old are required to cultivate the land for three years, carry food for one year, and serve in the local area for one year to become familiar with the most basic weapon operations, physical training, military formation training, and obey the orders of the corps commander. He served another year and went to the frontier for service. (Don't say it can't be done, it was basically like this in ancient times.) Even modern conscripts last for two years. No matter how complicated it is, it can't be more complicated than modern warfare. Suppose you train 121 regular troops, that is, guards or elites. Once a war breaks out, let the 121 elites be decentralized into a hundred corps commanders, 20 commanders, and five centurions. Each corps commander commands four people, and you can lead an army of 500. After a battle, another 200 corps commanders will be promoted as standing troops and elites for training. The next time it will be an army of 1,000, then 400, then 2,000, and so on. When the army reaches 20,000 people, the commanders will be trained and maintained as elites. Only 2,000 elites need to be maintained, and veterans will serve as corps commanders during wartime. As for the formation, it is not difficult. Use the shield first, then grab the gun, and then kill in the gap between the gun and the shield. The archers are thrown in the center, and the cavalry are randomly sent from three directions. They can attack at any time to go around or attack sideways, which is a round formation. The advantage of the round formation is that it is easy to defend, but the disadvantage is that it is inconvenient to move. That is to say, there is not enough attack. The Turtle Formation is also based on this foundation, adding a bow and arrow that can be released into the sky. The long snake formation is spread out like a snake. When the enemy attacks your snake head, the snake body and tail will outflank you. Attacking the snake body and snake tail is almost the same. The disadvantage is that there is no defense behind and it is easy to be stolen, so you usually have to fight against mountains and rivers. The Yanxing Formation has the Chinese army as the center and the left and right armies as the two wings. When the enemy engages the Chinese army, delay as much time as possible and use the two wings to counter-encircle, thereby attacking the enemy's two wings and rear. The cone formation is a death squad or heavy cavalry center, used in a cone formation to break through, use points to lead to areas, open up the opponent's defense line, carry out new attacks or disrupt the opponent's command system, or divide the enemy's two sides. It can be divided multiple times, and then one side defends, and the other side concentrates its superior forces to eliminate them one by one. For more complex ones, there are also blitz warfare, Tianlu tactics, Queyue Formation, Fish Scale Formation, Five Elements Formation and so on. The blitzkrieg is similar to the cone formation, but the difference lies in the speed and the use of two wings to resist the attacks of the east and west enemies. The Chinese Naoshima Huanglong is relatively tall. The Tianlu strategy is to use the Chinese army to resist the enemy's main attack with all its strength. Whether it is fighting and retreating, or defending, the purpose is to hold back the opponent's main force, while other armies attack its two wings and rear to force it to retreat. Then the Chinese army gradually presses forward and cannibalizes the opponent's rear troops. This formation requires a high degree of coordination, otherwise it will be easy to be tricked, and the central army must resist beatings, and the two wings cannot be too far apart. The Queyue Formation is based on the one-word long snake formation, with the addition of a river army or navy, with its back to the sea or the river, and archers arranged on the ship to conduct long-range attacks. Liu Yu relied on this formation to defeat more with less, and defeated the opponent's cavalry with his troops. Defeat the opponent's cavalry with an absolutely inferior force. This formation is almost unsolvable, but the conditions are too harsh. After all, temporary battles involve getting ships there, and the opponent is not a fool either, so it rarely appears in history. Needless to say, the square formation, which you should have received military training, consists of 25 people, 15 wearing armor and 10 lightly armed. The small square array is then formed into a large square array, which is a balanced type. But the weakness is that the sides are weak, because the 7-meter-long gun is not easy to turn.

I'm going to post my subjective book review. Although I haven't subscribed to all of it, there are only about 70 chapters left and I think it wouldn't be out of place to post a book review. First of all, I think this book is defined as an Internet article. I don't have any objection to this, right? So as far as online articles are concerned, reading for leisure purposes may account for the vast majority. Then the politics and economy in the article, including war and religion, will appear particularly mixed. The solution is to focus on description. In some Spring and Autumn writing methods, you have to highlight the key points, right? But I feel that the author's proportion in this aspect may be evenly divided, or the proportion may not be done well, resulting in a small audience. For example, those who want to see war feel that there is too much about economics and tactics, and those who want to see about politics feel that there are too many about economics and war, etc. Moreover, the author also wants to do his best to make the article logically consistent. Let's not talk about whether the author's own level is right or wrong, whether he is an expert or an expert; readers are required to have a little understanding of war, at least have played war games, and have some understanding of economics. At least they must take economics as an elective in college, and then they must often watch conspiracy TV series. Finally, they must be interested in history and have a certain understanding of religion... What you are picking is not Internet readers, what you are picking is definitely talents... And readers who meet these conditions will feel like you are messing around after reading your book! ? It's just nonsense! How can it be as simple as what you wrote? For example, I just saw a comment from a buddy, saying that 3,000 human infantry and cavalry defeated 1,000 Beamon cavalry... I think what they said is reasonable. Beamon is a level 7 unit in Invincible Heroes. The so-called 3,000 "cavalry" of the protagonist at that time can at best be regarded as 3,000 level 3 units, which is the gryphon level. If cross-race calculations are not easy, then let's talk about level 7 human troop angels. 1,000 Angels can't defeat 3,000 griffons, so that's a bit... Right! ? There is also economics. I have a double bachelor's degree in business economics and finance. The economic description in this novel is really difficult to describe in one sentence... It conforms to high school students' superficial understanding and cognition of economics and trade, which is hugely different from reality. Of course, the era in the article is similar to the Middle Ages. I don't understand the economic system of the Middle Ages, and the market economy is different from the system of that period, so I won't say much more. Then let's talk about it again, is this book a web novel or a sword and magic book? There's no problem with that, right? ! Dungeons and Dragons template. Then write more swords and sorcery, man! I think the volume of Sword and Sorcery may be less than 33%! So what am I looking at? Imaginary, magical, religious, Machiavellian, historical drama? I just want to read a sword and sorcery novel! No matter if you are writing a farming article or an upgrading article, you can at least write it clearly, okay? Let's not say that you started farming when I thought it was a refreshing article, you started fighting with the palace when I thought it was a farming article, and you came up with a conspiracy when I thought it was a Gong Dou article... I won't say which book, it is obviously a story about abuse of the main character, but I don't know who retaliated against society and labeled him an "invincible stream", and book friends directly called that book a eunuch.

After watching half of it, I just want to say, what is the use of the hero's status as a time traveler? The only transfers of knowledge are blast furnaces and financial levers. At the same time, in the world of swords and magic, there are very few scenes depicting fighting. It's a bit like one arrow and one sword in Mount and Blade, and the enemy is gone. And what about magic? I saw that the male protagonist is now a great magician. I recalled carefully that he only used one earth magic and one fire magic, and almost burned himself. Most of the descriptions are about recruiting people for construction, selling weapons, and engaging in politics. This kept me motivated to keep reading. I just wanted to cut and harvest, but ended up in a war! There's a war! I just can't stand it anymore so I'm here to complain. Friends who are coming later, don't be fooled by the shell of sword and magic. This is a lord battle article.

I've read half of this book, and to be honest, it doesn't give me a good impression. Every time I read a new chapter, I feel like I haven't read it yet! I read book reviews and many people felt the same way as me. The actual content is empty, and the bad thing is that there is too much nonsense. If you, the author, can't write a strategic layout like CK3, you can try a cool writing style like Dynasty Warriors.

After reading it for a long time, I couldn't stand it anymore. At first I thought it was about lord farming, but after seeing almost no farming content, I later read it as a western fantasy, but the mystery of swords and magic in western fantasy was not written. Various professions and realms were basically mentioned in one stroke. I still don't know the difference between seventh and eighth levels. Various settings were forced in, and various supporting characters did not stand out, just like a passer-by. In short, don't read this book as a western fantasy or farming novel, it is more like a plot of power.

I have no impression of the protagonist's territory. There seems to be a woman in the territory who produces weapons, and then I have no impression of it. Many book friends were attracted by the early farming of alien world territories. Now the territory is almost symbolic. The orc war in hundreds of chapters has consumed the patience of some book friends, so they are complaining. After all, the label is farming of alien lords, and the only person who has actually appeared in the book is an orc, a dwarf. To put it bluntly, the author should not know much about the traditional Western fantasy backgrounds of DND Warhammer. The Tyrannosaurus Rex and Velociraptor are really a bit of a drama... In short, I just came to see the fantasy and the dissatisfaction of farming... The advantage is that the aristocrats are well written and it is really rare for all the characters to have brains.

For a while, there was no holy territory in the entire continent. The Pope announced that it had become a holy territory. The entire continent was shocked. A group of strong men who were about to die hunted down the old Emperor Behemoth and broke down the entire orc northern frontier defense line. After a while, eight holy realms randomly attacked the Yingren tribe. There was not a single holy realm in the entire grassland, but they were able to kill four strong holy realms In the front, the eight-level strongman and a group of small soldiers were able to capture the dragon alive. In the latter part, the protagonist became As a dragon knight, it is said that as long as the entire continent wants to run away, no one can keep the dragon, and it can come and go freely The entire combat power system rises and falls, all depending on the needs of the protagonist at the time. There are too many inconsistencies 😅

The author's writing is too poor. There are no vivid characters, no tense events to promote the plot, and he just talks to himself!

Bulgaria is over after more than 600 chapters. The more than 1100 chapters of Rome are also finished. You've already reached over 700 chapters, but it looks like you're not even 3/2 yet, right? Can you speed it up? King? We haven't broken up with the Alpha Kingdom yet. When will you, the king, register?

If you look at the maps made by people who write about fantasy wars, half the number of people will read them if the author doesn't make them.

It's not a slow start. It feels like the author treats the readers as children. No matter what happens, even if it's an obvious development, it has to be explained. Basically, half of a chapter has plot development, which is very good. The key is to mix in a few lines of plot when explaining a hundred words on the water. If you skip it quickly, you will miss the progress.

This book is generally good, and the plot logic is okay. Unfortunately, it is only unfinished. There are many epic feelings in the early and middle stages, such as the catastrophe of ten thousand years, the catastrophe of 100,000 years, the seal of the inner earth world, the fall of gods and the kingdom of gods, the peek of evil gods from the outside, etc., And a series of foreshadowings, giving people the feeling that a big dish is about to be served, but in the end it feels like they have forgotten to buy the main dish. I ordered this book in its entirety, with 3.38 Million words. I read it chapter by chapter, and contributed many monthly tickets. At this late stage, I don't know why. Many details are vague. I thought it was a trade-off for the sake of the big plot, but now it seems that it is just water. The author's writing is good. I look forward to the next excellent work. Don't let it be unfinished again. The support of the readers will retreat. Money does not come from strong winds. This book is not up to standard.

Western fantasy farming novels, focusing on political struggles. The protagonist has some problems, and the appearance rate is low. The main reason is that the level improvement is not written and is passed over in one stroke. Not studying magic. There is war, but war is still a means of political expression. The entire article is a competition of political power. Don't follow technology. The center of the article is too focused on political struggle, which is 2 levels lower than Sword of the Dawn in Western Fantasy Farming. Mainly, he is a good modern young man who has no time to imitate other people's old foxes in political methods. A waste of time travel quota. Not studying the nature of magic, not pursuing technology. This is an insult to a modern man. If you are an old politician and businessman who travels back in time and compares your political skills with others, then there is no problem. The problem lies with you, a young man. Future authors should distinguish between time travel ages. Don't waste such a good spot.

The author jumps repeatedly

The main story is fully booked Summary: The early stage is good, but the plot in the middle stage is repetitive and even a bit broken (except for fighting, it is fighting. I don't understand why you can harvest tens of thousands or hundreds of thousands of young adults in less than a year of cultivation). The later stage is okay, at least there is a decent ending, but it feels very rushed, and many things are not explained clearly. Advantages: The character of the protagonist is well developed, the interpersonal relationships and interest disputes from different positions are described logically, the war scenes are vividly depicted, the overall plot does not deviate, the combat power system is also logical, and there is no situation where the protagonist takes all the blame. Disadvantages: The supporting characters are flat. The character and behavior habits of the supporting characters in this book are completely divided by race. Everyone of the same race and class has basically the same character regardless of their name, including the human race. The diversity of the human race is not shown at all. The key is to write group portraits, which makes people tired in the later stages of the book. The same routine is used to promote the plot every time. Finally, there is the problem of the golden finger.

1. The strength of the Earth Bear is unreasonable. 2. The serf soldiers trained in the early stage are actually elites. Even if they are uneducated, the background is an extraordinary world. To set off the protagonist, the noble knights are too unbearable and take it for granted. 3. The orcs were once the overlords of the continent. Even if they were driven to the north of the continent, they should have some strength and not be made so miserable by a group of old people. The orcs should not be able to compare with humans in terms of overall national strength, but a few elites should be stronger than humans.

The advantage of this novel is that the characters' IQs are online and the plot is well developed. It can almost make you think you are seeing the true journey of a nobleman rising in a different world. It's very enjoyable on a macro level! As for the weakness in the description of war scenes that everyone mentioned, I don't think it is a problem. The small flaw in the war duel is that the author described sufficient preparations before the war, and the description of the macro-situation and environment during the war. The choice of strategies can make people fully feel that I have the advantage and I should win. It may lack the intensity of a blockbuster, but it still has the atmosphere of reading an epic! The main shortcomings are that the characters are not outstanding (supporting roles), and updates are too slow! Also, because the supporting characters have no characteristics, the emotional line is weak, and I can't remember the heroine's name!

Author, just write according to your own ideas and don't be affected by the comment area. Only in this way can it be interesting to start slowly.

After abandoning the book for more than a year, I came back and saw so many people scolding me. Fortunately, I ran fast 😁 The author seemed to be lying down. I will recommend two decent Western fantasy books. I hope everyone will reciprocate and share some. "Epic of Swords" has a very period and mean style, but also has a heroic spirit (the next few books by this author are average). "Qiu Kao Fengyun Lu", the system flow, the writing style is average but more exciting, you can read it. "The Bad Lord of Skaven" is unfinished but worth watching. It seems to be a work from a studio. The writing style is not average and there are a lot of laughs. "The Epic of the Green Monster" (it seems to be called this), the writing is generally refreshing, and it can be read even if it is a bit dry. I can't remember the earlier one, please share it with me. "Why are my followers fish-men? Not bad, I saw it recently, after all, it's easy

, I haven't read this book for three days in a row. I can't find the original interest anymore. Don't know why?

I procrastinate so much every day, how about raising fish?

My feet feel good gradually, not that kind of, invincible in one second.

Why don't people in Group 2 come in?

Xinhaiyue 1, did you know that I fall asleep listening to the latest chapter of "The King" every night, and what I fear most every time is your "asking for leave"! As you said, the ending was really rushed. The length of "The King" is actually quite good, but you forget it by the end. We want to see Mr. Bear Stearns' contemptuous eyes, his arrogant words that hurt the dragon, and we also want to see Maxim's silly and cute look. Let's look at the conversation between the man, the bear, and the dragon, and see what happened to the ghost ship, and how far the monsters in the Kingdom of God will develop... Let's end it when it's over, and fix it well, plan for our next book Demonization, and make up for the pitfalls of "The King"... Will you consider writing a summoning style/beast-control style for the next novel?

This is not a refined idea

This book can be regarded as an invincible hero. It is not a bad system to have a mysterious disk attached to Hudson when he is reborn; the protagonist of Hudson relies entirely on himself and py transactions in his struggle. Of course, cute pets are also indispensable, but the cute pets are attached to the mysterious disk. Previously, Shan Di Ling Shi's chemical industry was too rough, and it was boycotted by book friends, which clearly disrupted the rhythm. (But I still have to complain that the writing is too rough) This book is too slow to update and the plot is too scattered. I hope the author will not forget to fill in the pitfalls of the mysterious compass. (Bt

To be honest, the ending is really bad, but thinking about it, Haiyue probably won't be able to write anymore. If I write any more, it will be a waste. It's good to end it abruptly. When will a new book be released?

Overall, it was good. The writing about farming, politics, and economic development were all good, and the military war was also good. However, the war scenes were too fragmented and somewhat homogeneous, so I skipped reading later. The biggest problem is that the ending is too hasty. Many pitfalls dug in the front are not explained clearly. It is a typical anticlimactic ending. Even if a few extra chapters are added later, it still fails to satisfy everyone's appetite. Another problem is that the power system is relatively sparsely written. The battle scenes are basically general expressions such as cutting a sword and casting a forbidden spell. Those who like settings such as professions and skills can ignore it. The overall evaluation is an unfinished version of "Sword of Dawn" + trade war + continental war - technology tree climbing.

Come, the author makes a solemn oath to me: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherish time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving to create brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, and steel will be refined a hundred times, worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding every day and every night.

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