Walking the Path to Immortality

Let's get straight to the point. Readers who want to read mindless cool stories or stallion stories can leave now. The protagonist is an ordinary monk from a small family who comes to practice in the sect. He is filial, nostalgic, and has relatively sincere Taoist friends. However, he is definitely not a good person, and his qualifications are neither bad nor good. Goldfinger is to make his qualifications better, which is almost the worst protagonist. The protagonist will not be resented for no reason, because the supporting character has a brain and knows who is right and who is wrong based on emotion and reason. The protagonist will not suddenly appear on the road and ask for protection, because there is no bloody routine in this book. If there is, the protagonist will definitely not care if he does not know her, and will not understand this person. If he does, the protagonist will definitely balance the gains and losses before deciding whether to protect him. To put it bluntly, the protagonist is just a supporting character in Long Aotian's novel. There is nothing wrong with him, and there is nothing poisonous about him. The plot is very bland, very bland, because there are no crazy tricks like the ones mentioned above, and there are not many opportunities. Basically, you follow the sect and do whatever the sect asks you to do. There are some close friends, not many enemies, and most of them have hatred. It was solved on the spot, so there was no need for such a disgusting plot to arise in the middle. There was no intrigue within the sect. Few people were free to harm the protagonist, and there were no jealous disciples from the boss to steal the disciple's things overtly or covertly. However, the protagonist has always been vigilant. After all, it is necessary to guard against others. There are also some cool points. As the cultivation level increases, the existence of the protagonist himself is a kind of fun point. After the foundation building period, there will be very few bullshit and aggrieved plots like being scolded by the Golden Core Nascent Soul and being crushed. If the Golden Core Nascent Soul does not exist, it is worse than the dogs Yuanying walking around. Within the sect, there is no reason for no crime, and the Foundation Establishment monks cannot be killed casually by the Golden Core monks! Overall, it is recommended to read this novel with a relatively peaceful mind, and you will feel a different artistic conception. Looking at it, after finishing the book, I realized that I had read so much. It may be that the author's writing skills were not strong enough in the first book, and the "fairy" feeling was not obvious enough, but it is definitely there! Most of the articles on cultivating immortals do not have the feeling of immortality. They are just a running account of upgrading and fighting monsters. I am a fan of dark novels without a heroine. This book does not have a heroine yet, and it is not considered dark, but I felt very comfortable reading it. I even wanted the protagonist to find a wife and have a bunch of babies, just because it was written in my heart. In this society where demons are dancing around, everyone is busy for life and running for survival. After having a luxurious leisure time, you might as well relax and read this novel. There is not much intrigue, but there are many exciting places. Zhang Shiping is not the top genius in the world of cultivation, nor is he the worst ant. You and I do not belong to the upper class, but it is not impossible to have enough food, clothing, drive a car, and marry a wife. Zhang Shiping (we) worked hard for cultivation (survival), but we had to take time and experience to take care of his family (parents). However, the family (parents) were reluctant to make Zhang Shiping (us) suffer and tired, and they felt distressed. Recommend readers who like this type to take a look😁😁😁

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One day Zhang Shiping met Han Li: Zhang Shiping: Hello, my name is Zhang Shiping Han Li: Hello, my name is Han Li Zhang Shiping: I come from a small family, and my family is very poor Han Li: I come from a farmer, and my family is very poor Zhang Shiping: I My father's connections sent me to the Zhengyang Sect Han Li: My fourth uncle's connections sent me to the Qixuan Sect Zhang Shiping: I picked up a mysterious green lantern, which can speed up my cultivation Han Li: I picked up a mysterious green bottle, which can speed up ripening Zhang Shiping: Later The Zhengyang Sect was attacked, and the Patriarch took everyone away Han Li: Later, the Qixuan Sect was attacked, and I rescued them Zhang Shiping: The Zhengyang Sect was nowhere to be found, so I joined the Xuanyuan Sect again Han Li: Although I saved the Qixuan Sect, I still ran away. , And then voted for Huang Maple Valley Zhang Shiping: I am good at alchemy Han Li: I am also good at alchemy, and I can also make talismans Zhang Shiping: During my alchemy stage, I always dealt with the Yuanying stage, and I was bullied by them Han Li: During my alchemy stage, I always dealt with the Yuanying stage. , Were also bullied by them, but I stole their treasures and ran away Zhang Shiping: … Han Li: I have wind and thunder wings, and I can run very fast Zhang Shiping: I have Kunpeng Feather Wind Escape Technique, and I can also run very fast Han Li: I There is a kind of strange fire called dry blue ice flame Zhang Shiping: I also have a kind of strange fire called black flame Han Li: I practice a body training method called Fansheng True Demon Kung Fu Zhang Shiping: I also practice a body training method called Wucai Glazed Body Han Li: I am six hundred Chapter 34: Giving birth Zhang Shiping: I am still in the Golden Core stage Han Li: I can escape from the hands of the late Yuanying stage in the early stage of Yuanying Zhang Shiping: I am still in the Golden Core stage Han Li: I can escape from the hands of the late Yuanying stage in the late Yuanying stage Zhang Shiping: I'm still in the golden elixir stage Han Li: I can escape from the hands of Lianxu by transforming into a god Zhang Shiping: I'm still in the golden elixir stage Han Li: I can escape from the Mahayana by combining my body Zhang Shiping: I'm still in the golden elixir stage Han Li:…

Returning books are good books that are slow to update and are popular among mortals. What are the things that are written at the top of the rankings now? They are similar to the forced comedy-style routine novels of the Great Wei Scholars. Such works are very popular and have high monthly votes. What kind of taste do readers have now? Not many people read truly good books, and trashy novels are all at the top of the rankings. I am really speechless.

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I couldn't help but complain about it halfway through. I really don't know whether the author did it intentionally or unintentionally. He perfectly avoided all the cool points. He knew how to make elixirs but not refined them. He just learned a second-level tea elixir that the family had the raw materials for and then left. He didn't practice more to help the family. The monsters I raised were never used, and the effects of enchanting weapons with monster eggs were never described. The planting conditions were so good and I never wrote about my favorite part of farming. There were only a few battles in so many chapters, but the writing was not interesting at all. I didn't buy any good things at the auction house exchange meeting. I usually love my family so much that I didn't go home for so long and just immersed myself in practicing without saying goodbye to my family. As a result, I didn't see my mother for the last time. I never got any good results when I went out to explore and hunt for treasures. I also committed murders to seize treasures, and I became good friends with the people who killed each other. This is what I find very disgusting. Wouldn't it be better to write about a life-and-death friend who shares the same joys and sorrows together? It's been hundreds of chapters, and there's not even a small climax. Whenever I feel like the climax is coming, the author will cut it off right away, or is that it? The skills practiced by the protagonist really have no special features or power at all, and his temperament is average. He is either suspicious or irritable. He holds a first-level magic weapon used for Qi training and uses it until the middle stage of foundation building. He doesn't have the money to buy it, but he just doesn't buy it. It depends entirely on this. In the middle stage of foundation building, I was so frightened when I saw Lei Jie forming elixirs during foundation building. How will I be able to form elixirs in the future...

Long review of "The Road to Immortality", currently 75 chapters Advantages: 1. Mortal flow, I am more fond of this kind of novel recently, the indigenous protagonist has three spiritual roots, has a stable personality, practices hard, is relatively able, has few girls and women around him, is devoted to the Tao, during the Qi training period, the family wants to introduce marriage to the protagonist, but the protagonist refuses because he wants to concentrate on cultivation. 2. The golden finger is a lamp holder. Under the light, not only the spiritual energy is abundant, the cultivation speed is accelerated, but also it is helpful for the cultivation of exercises, wound healing, etc. The protagonist has always used it very cautiously, and his cultivation speed is equivalent to that of someone with Tianlinggen. 3. The protagonist has both parents. The family is warm and harmonious. There are many brothers and sisters. The protagonist is also very filial. It is rare that he does not have parents who worship God, and he does not have any cruel relatives and friends. (The protagonist's father went into seclusion and built the foundation by himself without the foundation-building pill. He almost thought he would be sacrificed by the author, but luckily the foundation-building was successful) Disadvantages: 1. I don't have high requirements for writing, as long as I can read it, this book is also the author's first book , I originally wanted to be more tolerant, but some things in the article are confusing and unclear, and some places are too martial arts and have no fairy spirit, which greatly affects the reading experience (the protagonist is building a foundation, facing the scornful doorman, grabbing his neck with his hand...). 2. The early stage of shaping the protagonist was really a failure. The author wanted to write about a child of a small family who joins a sect, half of the family and half of the sect, with a stable character. However, in the early stage, the protagonist is really like a mortal who accidentally stepped onto the path to immortality, and has gone through many pitfalls in cultivating immortality. 1. After leaving the market during the Qi training period, I was targeted by three casual cultivators. I suffered a big loss and ran away for two. When I returned home, I didn't say a word to my family who cared about me. It was as if nothing had happened. The next time I went to the market, there would be another problem. (Even if you don't want your mother to worry, you should at least tell Ji Zhu's father in private. After all, others want to kill you and the enemy is out there. Use the power of your family to investigate). 2. In the trial in the secret realm, he killed people and licked the bag, but he did not check the contents of the storage bag carefully after coming out. He was very careless. There was a tracking object in it. Later, he was quickly chased and surrounded by three people. Afterwards, the protagonist reflected and went to the sect to check information, only to learn that there might be something to track and check it out. (Don't your family tell your children about such an important thing?) 3. After passing the secret realm trial to obtain two foundation-building pills, normal people would build the foundation in the sect first, but the protagonist does not. With the huge sum of money from the two foundation-building pills, he hides I went to the market to repair the magic weapon and buy elixirs (can't you repair the magic weapons and buy elixirs in the sect? Besides, the sect is very stable, it's not too late to repair the magic weapons after you build the foundation). As a result, after leaving the market, they were chased and the protagonist was seriously injured, which almost ended the story. (If there is a fanfic, this is the best time to kill the protagonist. Not only can you easily get two foundation-building pills, but you can also get the protagonist's golden finger.) 4. The protagonist needs a fire demon to practice the technique. This technique is emphasized, but the protagonist is stubborn, so he has to try how he will practice without the fire demon. As a result, he is injured and needs to rest for a week. (Didn't your family tell you not to practice without permission? Are you a mortal who has just stepped into the path of immortality? You have already established a foundation, and you still make this mistake. The protagonist of this chapter is too stupid. Deleting it will not affect the subsequent chapters at all)

Your first book has no fan base. This achievement is already the envy of many authors! One bite can't eat a fat man. Is it because you are slow in updating, slow in pace, and making excuses for poor grades? Then your new book won't have any good results. Wrong payment, goodbye

See chapter fifty. Let me talk about the conclusion first. Bai Qie is not very happy, but it can be watched. From the current perspective, he is a mortal, comes from an aboriginal cultivating family, and has three spiritual roots at the beginning. He is not a waste material and fake spiritual roots. Based on this, you can continue reading. After entering the sect, there is no need to make things difficult or pretend to be in the face. Although the plot is dull, the protagonist has no highlight moments, and it is not exciting, but after all, it is a mortal stream, this is still okay, and you can still watch it. The appeal is a positive review, and the following is a neutral review. The protagonist's golden finger is obtained after the first three chapters. It can currently speed up the practice and repair the physical body and soul. This type of cheating, coupled with the protagonist's neither reckless nor meticulous character, will create a very embarrassing situation, that is, his level has gone up, but his combat effectiveness cannot keep up, and he will appear more passive. The article describes in detail the four times the protagonist left the sect before establishing his foundation. Except for one time when he followed the sect to the secret realm, the remaining three times he encountered problems. It can be said that every time he went out, he was unlucky. The first time he relied on the protagonist's halo, otherwise he would have died in Chapter 20. (It can only be said here that the author specializes in reporting worries instead of good news. He is embarrassed to write if he encounters no trouble when he goes out) And there is no benefit from this encounter, and nothing good is gained. The biggest benefit is probably combat experience. Then there is the upgrade speed of the protagonist. After eight years of training, he reached the fourth level of Qi training. After getting the golden finger, it took six years to reach the ninth level of Qi training. You can say that it is cool, but it is not bad, but the protagonist is not a waste. Without the golden finger, it would have taken more than ten years, and he would not be unable to rise to the level. And the plot seems very bland, there is no sense of ups and downs, and there is no sense of satisfaction that the protagonist gains something or improves after encountering danger. It can only be said after a plot is over, oh, there is no room for aftertaste. In general, I am taking the mid-level route. It is not a genius or a cool article template with big tricks, nor is it a real rise from the bottom to fight for life. I recommend that friends who want to watch it give it a try, maybe they will fall in love with it.