The Rise of the Shen Clan

I've seen a lot of family abortions, so I'd like to make some comments. The style of the family flow is generally stable, but stable does not mean dull. For example, let's take a plug-in. It's always better to have one. It doesn't need to be too outrageous. It just makes people a little happy and has a little expectation. The suspense and tension of several triggering events are well written, but the protagonist's sense of presence is too low. The first time was about picking up the slack, and the last two times were about following the elders. Personally, I think it's better to try to write some protagonist-oriented events. The family is the face and the protagonist is the point. Don't waste the point because of the appearance. The first side job of alchemy is not fully written enough, and there are too few triggering events surrounding alchemy. Generally speaking, it is neither the best nor the worst among the family streams, just average. In fact, Immortal Evergreen also has many shortcomings, but the overall rhythm is pretty good. Is there any other book in the family series that can reach the level of a pioneering work like Mortal.

Alas, it's not easy for the author. It hasn't been put on the shelves yet, but I can still keep going. Come on, author. We will always support you 🙏

I am a 15-year-old bookworm, and this book is so well written! It is better than Immortal Evergreen, Desert, Qinglian and other family streams. It truly captures the essence of the family stream! The former, no matter whether it was the desert or Qinglian, he became a lone ranger as he kept going. He kept going to new places, constantly finding relics with unlucky luck, and then killing people and grabbing treasures to get rich. It turned into a routine of fighting monsters and upgrading, and the family became a burden and became dispensable. This book undoubtedly revolves around the family. Family members support each other and each supporting role plays an important role. This is undoubtedly more realistic! It truly shows that there is strength in numbers! I saw some comments from readers before saying that the protagonist's leveling up is too slow. I strongly disagree! Family novels are more exciting when they are slow in pace, because they need to use a lot of pen and ink to describe the supporting roles of each family member, and use realistic techniques to describe the development process of the family's quantitative changes leading to qualitative changes. If you want to see a quick upgrade, you can watch the monster-killing upgrade flow, because every time you kill a monster, you will definitely be able to level up, and the pace is naturally very fast. The family flow is undoubtedly more realistic than the Lone Ranger. Even if the Lone Ranger is unlucky, it should not be able to compare with the thousands of years of accumulation of a big family. I have read a Lone Ranger novel before. The protagonist travels through time and his spiritual consciousness is far higher than that of the same level. By chance, he gets a divine consciousness attack spell and becomes invincible at the same level. Killing the children of sects and powerful people is like killing pigs. This kind of plot feels very nonsense! There are many similar poisonous points in the traditional monster-fighting and upgrade flow! Divine consciousness is so important, don't even the big powers pay attention to it? Their core disciples should have practiced various inherited secret techniques since they were young. Their physical strength far exceeds those of the same level, and their various magic weapon configurations are also more powerful than you, the Lone Ranger. This is the reality in the world of cultivation!

As a bookworm for more than ten years (although I am not old), I have recently been reading novels about Xiuxian families and sects. I came across this book when I was looking for a book. After reading all the chapters, I will share my feelings. I hope it will be useful to new authors. First, the idea is very good. Recently, books about cultivating families and sects have become popular. The author probably started writing after reading books. I have to say that in this type of novel, the author's new ideas are very surprising and different from others. This is a good point. For example, leaving behind a contracted spirit beast protector Protecting the Family, I haven't seen anything like this in other books. Not only do bottlenecks occur in the middle and late stages of Qi Refining, but also in the later stages of Qi Refining, small and medium-sized people will also have bottlenecks due to excessive consumption of elixirs. This is a good point. Other books don't say that they don't have such small bottlenecks, but most of them don't have small bottlenecks for this reason. Second, don't learn routines. It's a good idea to read more similar books, check for omissions, and compare yourself. But don't copy other people's routines. Although the names, places, causes of events, etc. Have been changed, for me, as a reader, I have read several similar books and they all have the same things or routines. I will instantly feel disgusted with these books. It does not mean that all events must be novel and weird. If the author can be the same as the first point, more Thinking of a few new ideas, mixed with the old routines, will give people a feeling of novelty from time to time, which is very attractive for new authors to read the book. Third, typos, confusing word order, and suddenly a large paragraph is not divided into sections. These are just small mistakes that new authors will make. Although they do not have a big impact, for readers, just starting the book like this will definitely have a negative impact on people. I hope the author can take a closer look after writing a chapter. Four, because there are too few chapters, I can't see other points, so I will add them later... Finally, I hope the author will work hard and the new book will get better and better. This month's last investment will be given to (๑‾̀◡‾́)σ»

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Family Map

Collect names 1. Spiritual flowers, spiritual grasses, spiritual fruits, heavenly materials and earthly treasures 2. Demonic beasts 3. Magical weapons, spiritual weapons, talismans 4. Various magical powers and spells 5. Names of dragon sets, sect monks, family monks, casual cultivators... Can all be used

Come on, author, I don't care how you write, just keep writing well. If you stick to it, you will win. We will always support you.

It's well written. It's written about a cultivating family. It's a bit new. Although there is a protagonist, it's more interesting to have group portraits. Come on

I think the next plot should be the protagonist's wedding. The protagonist and Ouyang's marriage will definitely be a great event in Lingnan. It will break away from the clouds of war. In addition, it will also be a strong display of soft power to the outside world. With the three Jindan, it is really necessary to think carefully about moving the Shen family. The second step is the abdication of the patriarch and the protagonist as the patriarch. After all, it is a Jindan family. Jindan is a nuclear deterrent. After marriage, the protagonist will take charge of the outside world and the female will take charge of the family, developing the family.