The Immortal Path of Tianhai

Based on my 20 years of experience in reading countless online books, this book is a rare masterpiece of fairy tales. Of course, there are some minor shortcomings, such as the level of cultivation is too detailed (for example, a mid-term stage of Yuanying is divided into the early stage, the ordinary stage, the mid-term peak bottleneck, the mid-term peak, the top mid-stage, etc.), But the flaws are not outweighed. The most problematic part of this book is the first 300 chapters. It is estimated that the author's writing skills were not very good at the beginning and his writing style was relatively poor. After more than 300 chapters, his writing skills improved dramatically, and it was like a completely different person. Other aspects of the storyline, rhythm, battle scenes, war scenes, world view, etc. Are all excellent. If it were not for the influence of the first 300 chapters, the performance of this book would be far higher than the current level. It is strongly recommended that the author revise the writing of the first 300 chapters. I also recommend readers to read it patiently, it is indeed a good book.

How hard can it be for a person to persevere? Starting from 100 first orders, I wrote 5 million words and finally wrote a masterpiece. This book is the epitome of many traditional Mortal-style works. The worldview at the beginning is a regular "Sea Islands" opening. Goldfinger is more of a farming and development type, creating a strong sense of anticipation for the main line. The author has not let down the readers' expectations. He persisted little by little and wrote the entire worldview in a rich, interesting and complete way. , Not to say amazingly talented, but definitely good-looking and well-produced. Currently in the later stages of updating the human world chapter, the plot is getting more and more exciting. It is estimated that the follow-up will include the spiritual world and the fairy world. I believe it can give readers a complete and good story that can be followed for many years.

I've seen more than 90% of it, let's talk about my feelings, and let's talk about the conclusion first: In the early stage, it was really not very good to read. Later, the writing got better and better, but when it came to Yuanying, I felt that the quality had dropped again. The biggest problem is that it is too watery. I gave the entire book a rating of 65 points. If 20% of the content can be streamlined, I think it can reach 75 points. My feeling is that I can read it, but I am not willing to vote for it. It can be seen that the author's overall idea is good, but there is too much homogeneous content. I see that I have started to skip reading now, and it does not affect my continued reading. Another problem is that the classes are too dense. The higher the level of cultivation, the more tiring it becomes. It's really tiring to watch.

The author has divided the levels so confusingly that there are late stage, perfect, peak, and top. I can't even figure out the division of combat power.

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🤔 How long is the total lifespan of Yuanying? It took 300 years to break through the bottleneck of a small realm, but the protagonist is still stuck. I put it bluntly, are other people worthy of cultivating immortals? Is this reasonable?

I also made an initial subscription and then reviewed it. Does anyone have the contact information of the author so that he can refund the money and wasted 55 points on me?

Brother, this is just the transformation of gods, the combination of purgatory and the tribulation-transmitting Mahayana. How many thousands more words do you plan to write for how many years? Is it so difficult to become a Personalized God? Isn't it difficult to arrange a force that descends from the realm and grab a water-based spiritual object or a demon body? The pen is in your hand, but the opportunity is not arranged casually? How long have you been writing in the Nascent Soul stage? Most of the books were written after you ascended to the Nascent Soul stage. There are more than 7 million words. The total of the mortal world + the spiritual world is only more than 7 million words. You are a water-based practitioner. The sky is full of water. You are exhausted. Have you moved the South China Sea to Henan?

Author, you also need to shorten the space. Chapter 855 starts to advance to the Nascent Soul, but chapter 1244 has not yet reached the late Nascent Soul stage. There are almost 400 chapters already. How many chapters do you have to write for one Nascent Soul stage? The following Huashensi was also written according to Chapter 400? We can't be too watery, right?

After seven or eight hundred chapters, the writing style of this book has become more mature and stable. I hope the author will continue to work hard!