The Great Luo Primordial Immortal

Since your book "The Journey of Changsheng" is very good, I will add it to the bookshelf first, but you are a eunuch, so I will keep it for now and wait until you finish it before reading it 🙂

Ah, it's the indigenous protagonist, run!

There is no problem with the author's writing style, and the underlying logic design is also very good, but the plot is always unconsciously biased. The first book was okay at the beginning, but then it became a seeder. In this book, you little Karami who practices Qi, don't always focus on the characters of Jindan Yuanying. It is like writing an official novel about you, a clerk, and always describing the daily work of department and ministerial levels. Is it appropriate?

To be honest, the writing is okay, better than many novels from Qidian. , I hope the author will insist on writing more. I've finished reading The Journey of Everlasting Life, and now my writing has improved, but I can't stand the original system.

I've watched Journey to Longevity, but I didn't like the system flow of the second book. After reading this book, I feel that the author's writing style is more sophisticated.

It turned out to be an indigenous protagonist. After watching it for a long time, I didn't even know who the protagonist was. It didn't suit my eyes.

It's already been seventeen chapters and the protagonist hasn't cultivated to immortality yet 😡

At least the book you wrote is not for students. It is not verbose or childish. It is readable. You see, it has not been updated for a year, so hurry up and open a new book. No nonsense. I will wait to read it. I can support it with a few monthly votes.

I don't even have the time to say why.

I still prefer the writing style of Chang Sheng Lu Xing, which seems frivolous compared to Lu Xing's. The author's writing always contains private information from time to time, which is too out of the ordinary.