The Great Luo Primordial Immortal

Given how well you wrote "The Path to Immortality," I've added it to my bookshelf. However, you abandoned it, so I'll keep it for now and read it again once you finish it. 🙂

Ah, it's the native protagonist! Run!

The author's writing style is fine, and the underlying logic is well-designed. It's just that the plot keeps unintentionally veering off course. The first book was alright, but then it became a breeding ground for clichés. This book, you, a mere Qi Refining cultivator, shouldn't keep pushing the characters to the Golden Core and Nascent Soul stages.

To be honest, it's quite well-written, better than many novels on Qidian. I hope the author keeps writing. I've finished reading "The Path to Immortality," and the writing style has improved. I couldn't get through the previous system novel.

Having read *The Path to Immortality*, I didn't like the second system-based novel. After reading this one, I felt the author's writing style was more mature.

It turns out the main character is an indigenous person. I looked for a long time and still didn't know who the main character was; he just didn't catch my eye.

It's already chapter seventeen and the protagonist still hasn't started cultivating immortality. 😡

At least your book isn't aimed at students; it's not verbose or childish, and it's readable. I've noticed you haven't updated in a year, so hurry up and start a new book! No more nonsense, I'm waiting to read it. A few monthly tickets to support you!

He didn't even have time to explain the reason.

I still prefer the writing style of "The Path to Immortality," which feels frivolous compared to "Land Journey." The author's writing often includes personal opinions, making it too disjointed.