The Cloud Spirit Immortal Path

Should the author change the protagonist to have three spiritual roots? A monk with dual spiritual roots is only 6th level at the age of 26? Isn't this mentally retarded? Will keeping the secret slow down the protagonist's cultivation speed? What kind of bullshit family is this?

It's nothing to watch. The cultivation of double spiritual roots is extremely slow, even slower than that of three spiritual roots. Moreover, the past life was in vain. Like a child, he talks about everything and keeps talking about the character of the heart. Then when the Hui family is there, he writes that he is violent inside. He also behaves like a fool at ordinary times. He doesn't know how to save his life. He is a complete robot. He only knows how to follow other people's orders and cannot think for himself. He is not a person who has lived in modern society at all. If you don't write about time travel, it really can't be understood.

The writing is good 👍 But the setting is still too cliche. The protagonist Huo Linggen looks like he is refining alchemy. Too many protagonists are practicing alchemy. In fact, the protagonist's formation is also pretty good.

You have too many harems, it's boring, and now you're having incest with Sister No. 41, It's a bit sick and disgusting, that's about it.

I gave up when I saw four women being stuffed for no apparent reason. . .

This book is really about writing whatever comes to mind. The spiritual beasts were originally not allowed to be ridden by anyone except the protagonist. However, in the end, both humans and dogs can be ridden. There are also 4 women who suddenly appeared who fell in love at first sight. They were so vicious that they opened the door to them. After reading the catalog, they even established a sect. I was really convinced.

This book is well written. When the protagonist has enough pills for his second spiritual root, he is at the same pace as his fourth spiritual root and fifth spiritual root. He is still the type who is immersed in hard work. If you ask me, he should go to the factory to twist the screws.

To be honest, it's too ugly to watch, so it's a waste of money.

This is the first time I met such a good author. The author regards writing books as a hobby and communicating with readers is a pleasure. Personal opinions. If you don't like it, please don't comment. Thank you.

I came here to see the family cultivating immortality, but when I saw the comments, you still established the sect, but gave it up instantly. If you want to write about the family, write it well, and don't deviate from the topic. If you want to write about the sect, then write about the sect. What are you thinking?