A Fateful Journey with Immortal Wood

1 It can be seen that the author wanted to write a mortal novel but was afraid of being accused of plagiarism, so he changed some classic names, such as spiritual stone to crystal stone, immortality to cultivation, storage bag to storage bag, etc. However, in subsequent plots, he often couldn't help but use these words again, so it was nondescript 2 There is a problem with the setting. Gold and silver can be exchanged for spiritual stones. 100 Taels of silver can be exchanged for one spiritual stone. Then the author focuses on describing how it is not easy for the lower-level immortal cultivators. For example, it is distressing to hand over a spiritual stone when entering the fairy city. This is the most poisonous setting. Spiritual stones are difficult to obtain, but gold and silver are not easy to obtain. Any scum in the Qi refining period can be offered up when he returns to the mortal world; 3 The problem with the spiritual root attributes of the protagonist is that the protagonist is a pseudo-spiritual root with all five elements. The water attribute is the best (Ice Spiritual Root was later detected) and he practices water-attribute skills. However, the author just got into trouble with fire spells. Fireball, big fireball, extra fireball, super fireball, and not a single water spell. So what is the significance of the spiritual root attributes that the author spends a lot of time setting? 4. The problem of magic seals. If cultivators want to practice more advanced spells, they need to kill monsters and obtain magic seals before they can practice. Seeing this setting seems to see the style of online game novels that were popular more than ten years ago. Fighting monsters to get equipment, and grinding monsters to level up. The author said that this magic seal is rare and rare, and it is unique. As a result, every time the protagonist uses this spell, others can recognize it 5 There is a problem with the character of the protagonist. The more he cultivates, the more stupid he becomes. He keeps describing how cautious the protagonist is. However, when he is about to go to the next dungeon of a narrow escape, he doesn't even ask for the most basic dungeon information, and asks teammates to tell him. Could it be that the author's so-called caution means that he always rents a cave to stay in an inn that is a little more biased? The loss of intelligence is too serious, and it is not as good as the IQ when I was in the mine before cultivating immortality. 6 The protagonist cultivates immortality aimlessly, as if he doesn't know what he wants to do. He always waits for others to issue tasks. He doesn't make good use of the golden finger spirit wood space. He only collects the spirit grass when he occasionally thinks of it. He often cries about poverty and begs for food with a golden rice bowl? I don't know how to complete the task even if I am short of the secret technique that can be exchanged for more than 100 sect contribution points. I also talk about how I want it and wait to die all day long. 7 I don't know if the author has any special hobbies. The most common color in the book is dark green, accounting for 99% of all colors. Whether it is a spell or a magic weapon, it is dark green, dark green, dark green, show me🤮 8 The word count is too serious. A simple thing requires a long explanation. The protagonist's psychological activities account for most of it, and the dialogue between the characters is too plain, just like a composition for elementary school students. Originally, the part where the protagonist saw his family for the last time could have been more subtle and touching. It could have been written as the protagonist's father discovered the disguised protagonist, but in order not to become the protagonist's liability The whole family did not recognize each other until his death, which can better reflect the ruthlessness of the great road and the difference between immortals and mortals. The result was written as a dialogue between primary school students "Ah, my son" and "Ah, my brother". An old lady in her 50s and 60s hugged the 20-year-old protagonist and cried bitterly and called her brother. The picture was so beautiful that I couldn't imagine it 9 The most poisonous thing is: the protagonist has short hair! The main character has short hair! The main character has short hair! Say important things three times

Introduction for Newcomers Ordinary people are addicted to drugs. The author has good writing skills but lacks economic common sense. And let me say it again, half of a radius of 300 is not a radius of 150. A radius of 150 is only a quarter of 300. Use the formula for the area of ​​a circle and find it yourself. Next, this is the biggest problem I saw from the beginning: According to the author's own setting, the skill is a spiritual energy absorber. The spiritual energy can cast spells of any attribute regardless of its attributes. However, when releasing spells with mutually exclusive attributes, the power of the spell will be reduced due to the conflicting attributes (note that only mutually exclusive attributes are mentioned, that is, spells with other attributes can also be released without losing power). With this premise, let's take a look at what is written in the article. The protagonist has been practicing water/ice skills from the beginning of the Qi Refining Stage to the present (Golden Core Stage), but the main attack spells have always been fireball, big fireball, and six bursts of flames. According to the setting, the power of the skills and spells will be reduced due to the conflict between the skills and spell attributes. However, because the protagonist has practiced a cold flame secret technique that can increase the power of spells, the power of various fire spells has not been reduced. Doesn't it seem to be a problem at first glance? But have you ever considered a question, what type of exercises and spells do other people in the book practice? At most, they can also practice spells of different non-incompatible types (Tujin got a spell seal that does not meet the spell, and I want to exchange it for a spell with the same attributes.) So according to the weakening of mutual resistance, can I reasonably strengthen the same type? And according to the author's setting, the attack power of ice spells is no weaker than that of fire. The three spells of fire, ice, thunder, and gold are all famous for their powerful attack power. The protagonist also has a blessing secret skill, so why doesn't he practice ice spells? It already has skill bonuses, but with the addition of secret skills bonuses, wouldn't it make it even stronger? One more thing, regarding the setting of magic seals, in this book, in addition to basic spells that you can practice by yourself, the basic spells, intermediate spells, and advanced spells all require seals to upgrade. The seals are specialties of monsters. Only by killing monsters can they have a certain chance of being exploded (classic monster-fighting explosive equipment). And according to the settings in the book, advanced spells can be said to have super power comparable to magical powers due to the limitations of this realm. High-level monsters are born with them. Okay, here comes the question. According to the author's setting, there are more monsters than humans, and they are born with one more spells of the same level than humans in the same realm (according to the description in the book, not every Nascent Soul monk has high-level spells). Then why do high-level monsters not practice spells but cultivate their bodies? ? ? ? ? According to the author's setting, monsters have stronger spells than humans, their bodies are stronger than humans, and they are more numerous than humans. Humans are only good at secret arts and refining weapons. Then the lifespan of monsters in the Nascent Soul stage is several times that of humans, and their wisdom is not much worse. Why haven't humans been wiped out yet? ?

I have been a bookworm for thirteen years and have read hundreds of books of all kinds. My favorites are martial arts and fairy novels. Perhaps I was influenced by Jin Yong's martial arts when I was a child, and I fantasized about fighting swords across the world and rescuing people from danger. A great chivalrous person serves the country and the people. This is chivalry in the world. As a novel about Xianxia, ​​I think it should not deviate from the definition of Xiaxia. In today's world of Xianxia, ​​all the friends are dead and the poor are dead. It feels like it runs counter to the core values ​​of socialism. This is not a good phenomenon. Once a work has no soul, it cannot become a masterpiece! The author of "The Legend of Fairy Wood" writes online, the storyline is remarkable, and the fighting scenes are also fascinating. Although many settings follow old routines, they are still quite satisfactory, which is better than some online writers trying to innovate and the results are different! I just hope that when creating the protagonist or supporting role, the author can make the character more soulful and valuable, and not be influenced by the words in the comment area. Many people find it annoying that Qi Chang survived three times, but I think it was these three escapes from death that made me remember Qi Chang. This life and death enemy is very alive! Looking at the comments section, many people think that in the world of immortals, you should plot against me and me. Everyone is deep in the city, and everyone is cunning. No one can be let go. In order to seek immortality, you must do whatever it takes. Isn't this the behavior of the devil? I hope to see more immortal cultivators who can emerge from the mud and remain untainted in this world of intrigues and intrigues. They also have a chivalrous heart, and some are willing to sacrifice themselves for the common people in the world, and they will also give up the road to immortality for love! Cultivation of immortality, cultivation of Taoism, cultivation of truth. Xiao Lin is just becoming an immortal. He has no way of his own and has not found his true self. This kind of immortality is just the accumulation of mana and the continuation of his lifespan! I hope that the subsequent author can let the protagonist find his own way, sublimate Xiao Lin's character, and create a flesh-and-blood fairy world!

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After reading dozens of chapters and about 20 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. I felt that the protagonist was a hypocrite. The protagonist behaved very filially at the beginning and often worried about his sister and father. However, after the protagonist became an outer disciple, he never thought of finding an opportunity to find his sister and father. No matter whether he had the ability or not, Even if you don't look for it, you might as well be responsible for that Xiao Shi. After reaching the third floor, you didn't even have the opportunity to enter the inner door. You still didn't want to look for your sister and father. Instead, you went directly to Xian Yuan. When you have the ability, you don't arrange your relatives and just leave to cultivate immortality. This is heartless and unjust! What is there to watch about such a protagonist? You might as well set the protagonist as an orphan. Since you have arranged for relatives, don't ignore it. When you are not capable, ignore the extenuating circumstances. If you are capable, don't ignore it. What kind of protagonist is this?

The character of the protagonist is written in a coquettish way, thinking about resources and saving face. Cultivation is all about fighting for immortality. A strong person should take more. Why do you give way after finishing the dungeon and showing your strength? The plot is also a small one and a big one. The protagonist is often approached by the enemy. In the end, sometimes it is not explained how he is found. Why is there no reflection and summary by the writer? Moreover, there is only a searching spell, why is there no anti-finding spell? , And he was even speechless about the information when he went to the dungeon without collecting the information in advance and waiting for his teammates to tell him. He also didn't understand some basic common sense in advance. How could such a protagonist practice all the way? I didn't feel how smart the protagonist was, I just felt that the protagonist was lucky. For some unknown reason, you don't take the pure magic route? Afraid of being too strong? The spell mark is written in an eye-catching way. It is similar to the settings of online games. The most important thing‼ ️The protagonist's mind after taking Dan seems to be no different from when he was practicing Qi.

Poison Trial Post I was helpless after seeing Chapter 62! A person who wants to kill the protagonist is let go just because of a strong promise? I'm convinced too. I killed people for eight taels of silver before. Now you're going to make a big promise? Do you, the author, make no distinction between good and bad? Don't know what to do? Is it okay if I lie to you about a promise and then destroy your whole family? (I spent a dollar specifically to spray you 😡)

The main theme of this book is that there are many mistakes and omissions in doing whatever you want. There are more mistakes than mistakes without mistakes. If it were just inconsistency, it would be fine. At most, the author would be scolded for not having a long memory and not taking careful notes. But there are too many mistakes in plot, story, and setting. It can be said that there are so many mistakes, and there are only a few things that are right. I made a mistake at the beginning, but later I wanted to make amends and come back, so I came up with some new settings or backgrounds. The result was that I made more and more mistakes, and I never looked back... If it weren't for the good overall framework of this book, I would have given up on the book long ago. The general outline of this book is good, the storyline is acceptable but I can't read it in detail (there are too many mistakes and omissions, and it's very confusing to read carefully), and the details are completely incomprehensible.

I just read Chapter 36. I don't know if it's my misunderstanding. I feel that since the protagonist left the mine and started cultivating, especially after discovering the wonders of the Immortal Wood Space, he lost the caution he had in the mine. He loves to show off and is talkative.

This book contains ntr, please pay attention to lightning protection. The protagonist separated from his wife after becoming a god, and then the wife stayed with the protagonist's male apprentice. Later, the protagonist ascended first, and the male apprentice and the protagonist's wife ascended together. The protagonist's wife was arrested just after ascending. The male apprentice saved the protagonist's wife, but in the middle the male apprentice was injured. Then the protagonist's wife felt so distressed and called him a stupid apprentice.