I Forge Longevity with the Furnace of Ten Thousand Arts

I still think the author's first book was good, but it was unfinished.

The debut is the peak, the subsequent books are unsightly

Xuanchen Dao Zhou Geng is now on the rise. You shouldn't give up on the road to immortality at that time. The better the mortals write, the more readers they will get later.

So who is the protagonist? I'm really complaining. I don't even understand what this perspective is talking about. It feels like tmd is like AI randomly filling in the blanks. Suddenly someone appears, and suddenly something happens. Why are there so many things? There is no need to talk about cultivating immortals. There is no need for moral values, and there is no need for, well, oh, I want to be a good person, comply with God's will, protect the human race, and so on. These are fucking outdated, it's a repressive time in society. Originally tmd. Damn, it's been a hell of a long day at work. Damn, let's read some novels. If you're not a young man, you're just fucking protecting the human race. Why the hell am I reading this? What is the main point of cultivating immortality? It's about having clear thoughts, do you understand? Either it's fun or it's sexy. The three main elements of a novel about cultivating immortals are fighting monsters, leveling up, and playing with women. Then add a lot of emotions, insights and so on. The writing is really bad. It's so bad. There's no way your writing is so bad.

When the foundation is old, it can still be converted into Qi training 🤔 I seem to have seen similar settings before, but that was from many years ago.

If this book is still of the quality of Changshengluxing, it can still be read. If it still fucks someone, then I will advise you to quit again. Other good novels, such as Xuanchen Road, have been written for eight years and have been interrupted so many times. Just look at the monthly tickets and finish one book 😎

The forgotten words of mortals have all run away, so don't be stubborn. Your plot, description, and even various settings are quite unique, but if you write this kind of fairy tale, the starting point will not give you much traffic, and you are already doomed. You must break through. Either change the subject, rely on fantasy upgrades, and have fun killing and fucking, or change the system, such as classical cultivation of immortals, such as the kind where immortals enter the world to show off. Maybe I want to read about this aspect, and I think your writing style is also suitable.

Are you really not going to write anymore? What a pity, your mortal flow is so well written

For this plug-in, the best thing is for the protagonist to learn one or two skills of cultivating immortals, elixir training is the best, and drawing talismans is the second best. For elixir training, you can open a shop to help others practice elixirs, give half to others, and intercept and refine the other half yourself, and you can also get a batch of spiritual stones. Otherwise, it would be unreasonable for the protagonist to have no money. After all, readers are from God's perspective, and they all know that there are skills of cultivating immortals. It will be difficult for the protagonist to survive without learning. While practicing elixirs, draw talismans. After drawing the talismans, sell them to big shops and exchange them for spiritual stones to practice and buy various magic weapons.

I just opened a new book and I will update it every day.