Longevity: I, Cao, Can See the On-Screen Prompts

It was quite amazing at first, lsp was ecstatic when I saw it. Until the protagonist joined the sect and was soul-searched, it was easy to see. Many of the opportunities the protagonist got were with the help of Goldfinger. Not to mention, the method of refining the gods obtained by the protagonist was incomprehensible without Goldfinger, but the sect knew everything through soul-searching. Then isn't the protagonist's golden finger already known? It doesn't matter if others find out, this golden finger will make even an immortal's heart flutter!

"Chinese New Year" is a new open-world adventure game independently developed by China. The game takes place in a fantasy world called the original family, where the selected person will be awarded a ticket to return to his hometown. You will play the mysterious role of the family shame. During the free travel, you will meet relatives with different personalities. Together with them, you will gradually discover the truth that you are in your twenties and do not have a girlfriend.

I'm really disappointed. I was attracted by the Cao thief at the beginning, but gradually started to feel disappointed later I just don't understand that there are so many pictures and there is not even a little bit of the protagonist's fighting plot! Then the protagonist entering the sect is a failure! Directly collect the soul to check the memory? After watching all the things that the protagonist and the women did, especially the men, it felt like they were being cheated on. It was so disgusting🤢 How could there be such a sect? Finally, what's the cool part? There are plug-ins, but their functions are limited. The protagonist has just acquired a base. Is the protagonist's enemy's family forming a pill? ? The protagonist immediately started feeling aggrieved! ! It's really hard to calm down. Han Paopao knows about changing his face and name. The protagonist doesn't know? After the foundation was applied, it was too thin. There were no techniques to improve escape skills, and I didn't know how to buy one! ? Don't you want to buy Feijian or Xiao Lingzhou? Don't you want to buy a one-time magic weapon? You only know how to engage in interpersonal relationships? ? Can you learn from Han Li? You are writing an article about cultivating immortals as an official article! I wrote some ideas before about how the protagonist and other spiritual roots have different cultivation speeds. The supporting characters all have brains, but they are too brainy, which makes them less enjoyable. Alas If you want to delete it, just delete it. Alas! In the world of cultivating immortals, one still relies on strength. If you only have realm but no fighting experience, you can't always rely on your strength.

Let me sum up why it was uncomfortable to watch. Others are decent people, writing about the rise of the grassroots, and geniuses hoeing the strong. The protagonist is a villain, hypocritical and suspicious. The author loves to show off in terms of food and clothing. However, the protagonist is of low strength. He is a cultivator of immortality, pretending to be and competing with mortals every day. .

I really can't stand it any longer. I thought the previous writing was pretty good, but I still wonder why such a good novel didn't become popular. I couldn't stand it when I saw that I had entered the sect. This kind of treasure that can check people's memories actually exists in the Nascent Soul Sect? It seems like it's still standard for every sect? Does the author really know how outrageous this thing is? In the setting of traditional mythology, after you die and enter the underworld, the underworld judge uses this treasure to remember your memory and sentence you. It can be said to be the only one in the world. As a result, the setting of this book can be found everywhere? What's more, the early stage of your novel seems to be all about the battle of wits. If you are exposed to this thing, you will instantly turn into a clown. No matter how clever you are, it will be useless. You are the most restrained person who follows the intelligence flow. What's more, your golden finger can only collect a little information. This thing can directly read all memories. Your golden finger is not worthy of carrying its shoes. It can be said that as soon as this thing appears, no matter how good your previous writing is and how wonderful the setting is, it will completely turn into garbage and become a clown! ! ! Another point is that if you want to write about a character like Cao Cao, don't just write about being astringent and suspicious. There are many such people. What's more important is Cao Cao's heroic spirit. Alas, I was so angry that I almost vomited blood in the middle of the night 😡

According to the previous chapters, your book should focus on cultivating immortals and having fun, cultivating immortals, refining treasures, learning skills, and playing with women, but now it's off track.

To be honest, the author, you said that you are not writing about underworld cultivators, but I feel that yours is actually more hierarchical than underworld cultivators. Except for mixed sects, it is basically difficult for casual cultivators to become big. Mixed sects are also difficult to join unless they have good qualifications or backgrounds. Especially in the entry test, when I read through my life experience before entry, I have basically been stripped bare. Look, cultivating immortals in the underworld is not so miserable. They don't leave any privacy at all. You have to ask questions to make sure you have no ill intentions towards the sect and are not spies of other sects. Then get a soul lamp and make a blood oath. That's about it. You made Han Tianzun have to kneel down when he brought the little green bottle to worship the sect in the early days of this world. Although casual cultivators have gained The chance of getting a heaven-defying opportunity is very small, but there should still be some less heaven-defying opportunities, which may have a very important effect on Jindan or Nascent Soul. Do you think this is to steal his opportunity? Although there are rules, they are meant to be broken. There are always people who do not follow the rules. There are only a few people who know that. Secrets that I personally know are not secrets. Author, your setting is really anti-human. It will basically dissuade a lot of readers. You just think of it as a soul search. Getting started in underworld cultivation is not so miserable. This is the only novel I have seen that requires reading all the memories before getting started. The author should change it, it will be much better.

Yuanying pretends to be silly and cute. I'm really tired of this kind of writing. Go ahead and write female videos, it's very promising

It's a pity to throw away the food if it's tasteless. Nowadays, the fairy tales are really unreadable. Just like this book, it was a bit amazing at first, but then it became a sower and boring. At the beginning, he was cautious and sought resources, but later he became a mess, weak and helpless, but he didn't know it. All day long, I am self-righteous, calculating this and that, provoking this and that, and I don't know how to write the word "death". Writing all the way, waving all the way, and peeling an onion at the same time, layer upon layer of backgrounds, patches, and various personal items of the author mixed in. See the latest update, Transformation of God Tribulation, this chapter. I said, author, do you want to see for yourself what you have written? How can he involve so many specious top bosses just by becoming a god? Look who's there? Xuanji, Kunpeng! There are many more that I won't go into details one by one. It's the same sentence, it's just a way of becoming a god. Is it necessary to write it like this? Even if it's a big boss's fish, it shouldn't be so low, right? Gone, removed from shelves

I like to see slightly yellow ones. But the world of immortality described by the author, from the Nascent Soul to the mortals, are basically all perverts. It's a bit unrealistic. . Writing too much would be obscene. The low-priced monks are okay. Those who have lived for hundreds or thousands of years and still look for women every day are not saying that there are no such things. It can only be said that those who can live for such a long time will get tired of eating too much abalone and seafood every day. The freshness of going to bed every day can last for hundreds or even thousands of years. It's a bit too exaggerated. .