The Immortal Register

As of 2022.5.30

It's a pity. Originally, this book could go further. I thought that the novice village was a complete world of immortals and heroes, with good, evil and evil each leading the way. There are people who care about the common people, who seek their own way, and who are free and easy... In the end, a bunch of monsters and monsters were written, but they were still boring tricks like saving the world.

The subtlety of this book lies in its very subtle and three-dimensional description of the so-called "low martial arts" and "lower realm". Seeing the foundation building of the White Bone Temple even makes people feel a little shuddering, it is very concrete and vivid. The characteristics of Xiaobai's novels are often that they are weak and weak in the low realm, just like a blank slate online game, while the high realm is empty and pale, quite fake and empty. If the high realm is well written, I recommend this book first. Even further, why should there be a bigger "big sect" in this world? It can completely unfold in another overall plot, or even design an archaeological world view where the path has been cut off. You don't have to rush to find faults, just wait quietly for Bugu to open up a brand new world for you.

Only then did I discover the origin of the introduction to the work. Zhang Dai, a writer in the late Ming Dynasty (do you remember watching the snow in the Pavilion at the Heart of the Lake), wrote an article called "Self-Made Epitaph": "I was a dandy when I was young, and loved prosperity very much. I loved monasteries, beautiful maids, prostitutes, fresh clothes, good food, good horses, lanterns, and fireworks..."

I would like to give three suggestions to the author. 1) It is now at the stage of fighting with the Nascent Soul. Try to finish it within 3-5 chapters. According to the rhythm of one chapter a day, you can basically finish it within a week. It can be considered as a beginning and an end, so you can get together and relax...; 2) Professional writers are really not suitable for you who start at the beginning but end at the end. I suggest you find a full-time job because you have less money. Yes, but at least there won't be so many people scolding you behind your back. After all, too much negative energy has accumulated, and it won't do you any good; 3) Don't write books in the future. If you must write, don't change your pen name. At least I won't click on it if I see it is written by you. Benefit others and yourself, live in harmony, be calm and forget each other.

Only half of the updates are done every night, and everyone can't stand it. Only for Quanqin, don't blame the writer for being greedy. Writing at work and after get off work during the day, it is quite difficult to update every day. The world of mortals is full of trivial matters, and everything is trivial to do. Cuckoo, don't be impatient and slow to think about the plot carefully. Plow slowly and carefully to create a good product, write quickly and you will be ruined. Work hard to write a masterpiece, and you will be the starting point. Noji Bing'er's two-flying trip, wait for you to write and read it slowly.

I really regret booking it all. Look at Xiu Xian, you have created a demon path. The soul is implanted into the spiritual roots of ghosts, and the body is replaced with demon blood. What kind of immortal is this? Cultivation of demons is better than this thing.

Magic weapon: Orange Zhongmi, it looks like an orange on the outside, but there is a formation engraved on the white collateral part inside, which has the function of resolving siltation and turbidity, and suppressing bad qi. The orange petals can be filled with spiritual energy and spiritual stones to provide energy for the formation, and can also be used as a container to store bad and turbid air. If necessary, the entire orange can be detonated directly like a grenade. The molding method can be grown. The secret mantra for opening the array is: Take ten kilograms of Bailuo and make juice. Do not see any orange peel or flesh on it.

Born in a ghostly place like White Bone Temple, Pig Knuckles is also very sharp in his actions. He has already become a generation of trolls and has taken a step in the inhuman way. However, because the immortal fate is not weak and the immortal family's talisman is in hand, the path of pig's feet implies a turning point, and the heresy is also the path of immortality. Let's take a look at whether it will be a generation of troll ant Taoists who have just started to take off, or a side sect that is just starting out.

The writing is too complicated, and the progress is too slow. Practicing 4 paths at the same time, Immortal Way, Martial Arts, Gu Dao, Kendo, is meaningless. It is not a dark stream, but a profit stream at most. Moreover, sometimes the Holy Mother is decisive in killing, there are too many descriptions of the female supporting characters, and the plots are all the same.