Starting Out as a Demonic Cultivator

Wow, this Fenyin is so awesome, isn't it? He stole the protagonist's house, and then gave the protagonist some small favors and inventions, but the protagonist didn't say anything at all? Although it was obvious from the part about whether to kill the prisoners or not that the protagonist is a licker, I thought I should bear with it and continue reading. Although I still have this tendency, it is not too deliberate... Good guy, until I saw this Fen Yin, the protagonist really loves her completely? So when a person with a temper meets Fen Yin, he has no temper at all. I will give you whatever you want? I really can't stand this bitch anymore.

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Some feelings I introduced it through Chicken Eating. Generally speaking, there are bright spots, but at present, there are a few problems that I think are problematic. First, the world view and setting are not clear. With 200,000 words, the reader's impression of the world is still hazy, mainly because the protagonist is autistic and cannot understand anything, and the author does not introduce much. Second, the training system is very thin. A well-formed training system will inevitably develop into a functional one. The career system is diversified. It is impossible for a person to learn a few skills in a lifetime, so the probability of survival is very low. Professional skills are specialized, and general skills can cope with different situations. This is inevitable. This may be because the protagonist does not understand anything. Let's look at it again. Thirdly, the protagonist's personality is also very strange and unlikable, and the character's inner and outer appearance are very inconsistent. As far as the inner character of the protagonist is concerned, he has the outlook of an ordinary person and is not autistic, so he must have necessary social needs, and it is impossible not to communicate with others. This kind of need cannot be controlled, and even if it changes, it will take time, but for some reason, he appears to be autistic, arrogant, and neurotic (in the eyes of others). The article emphasizes many times that the protagonist is an adult, and the outlook is determined, but in my opinion, this kind of character still lacks social education. Fourthly, the plot is bland, and overall there is always a weird and unnatural feeling. To be honest, this is not a bad point, but every time I feel this way, I go back and browse the comment area, and then I can't watch it anymore. I can now read it through inertia in one go, but once I put it down, it is difficult to pick it up. It may fall off if I order more after it is put on the shelf.

I read the entire text in two days, and I can't say it's bad. Although there are some minor flaws, it's overall pretty good. Especially after reading the full text, there's a certain flavor to it. Maybe it's the author's style of writing, just like Chen Dong's grandeur, banana's delicacy, and rolling away. It's obvious that the words and sentences are not very good, but you can automatically ignore these poorly written things as the plot develops. As long as the author improves his writing skills such as character description and plot development, then he will be a proper master. Finally, the second half of the plot is a bit rough, not as smooth as the previous one, and the plot develops a bit too fast. I hope the author can re-plan the outline 🙂🙂🙂

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I specifically deleted this book, but I couldn't help but come back to read the comments. Finally, someone felt the same way as me. My suggestion is to put it on the blacklist permanently. You are also a talent if you can carefully create a character like Fanyin who is specially disgusting to readers. No one asked you to get out of here. The enemies basically can't survive more than a few chapters, but since those who have disgusted the protagonist are basically not killed by the protagonist, you are abusing the main character!

Fen Yin: "Is Zhang Changkong dead?" Crowd: "Dead." Fen Yin: "Oh! What a pity!" Crowd: "Why is it a pity for the fairy?" Fen Yin: "I don't have a car, a house, or a deposit!"... "Eh! Isn't that it?" Fen Yin turned around and pointed at a desolate figure. Everyone turned around and looked and said in shock: "Fairy! That's not Zhang Changkong." Fen Yin: "Then who is it?" Everyone quickly replied: "That's a dog!" Fen Yin: "But I always think it's it, why do you think it's not it?" Everyone puffed up their chests and said, "Because only licking a dog will lead to a good death."

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Open a post and call on anyone who dares to write to Spirit Gu Inheritance to be blocked. I didn't mention it last time. What's the reason for doing so this time? Do you have any vital interests? If you write such a disgusting plot, make a thread, block the author immediately, and follow the thread together to let the author see how disgusting the shit he wrote recently is. I didn't talk about the setting last time, but I'm seeking death again this time.

It's not that I can't stand giving gifts, nor that I have any objections to the existence of a character like Fanyin in the novel. What's really disgusting is that what Fanyin pays is never directly proportional to what he gets. All the knowledge he gets from the protagonist is basically a waste of money, and he gives the protagonist a beating. As long as you are a normal person, after watching the previous plot, you will think that Fanyin and the protagonist are hostile, but you still give her a treasure. The plot is the same as that of Tuo Mitian. The protagonist has just obtained the eternal sacred weapon, and the Sanskrit spent thousands of years researching the formation of eternal protection that has been passed down for hundreds of millions of years. There is no logic at all. The co-author is just to let Fan Yin crush the protagonist.