A Cultivation Clan Cannot Drift Along

I opened it three times, and each time I left after reading less than three chapters. Hiding one's cultivation level is really too vicious. The author's explanation is that he was very vigilant because he came from Earth, but there are many insidious spells in this kind of world. Great power belongs to oneself, and the law of the jungle is so obvious.

I've read over 170 chapters, and the protagonist's presence is almost negligible. He's not as talented as the immortal, not as intelligent, not as good at alchemy as his grandfather, doesn't go out to gain experience, has no trump cards, no backup plans, and no background.

Having read so many cultivation novels, I recently had some free time and wrote down what I envision a cultivation world should look like. Perhaps many parts are illogical, so please just take a look. I hope it can serve as a starting point for discussion. If you disagree with anything, feel free to point it out, but please refrain from harsh criticism. I'm just writing casually.

The rampant demonic path, yet the five major sects have consolidating their strength, can be attributed to several reasons. First, the ruins yielded substantial resources and cultivation techniques, significantly increasing their power. They now need more territory to cultivate and then suppress the demonic path.

This book is really interesting. The protagonist has a decent three spiritual roots, yet he got stuck in the Qi Refining stage three times. According to this theory, three spiritual roots are at most Foundation Establishment, two spiritual roots are at Golden Core, and one spiritual root is at Nascent Soul.

I couldn't continue watching from the beginning; I don't understand why someone who's only at the Qi Refining stage in a family would suppress their cultivation level.

It's not good, and it's not interesting. The protagonist has lived in his family for twenty years, treating everyone like a thief and hiding his cultivation level. The plot development is often inexplicable, feeling like events only happen because the outline had to be written at this point, without any prior plot or development. It feels very dry. Anyway, this is all I can read; I won't be able to see how well it's written later.

Mu Yanran

Since the secret realm cannot accommodate Golden Core cultivators, yet it contains so many Level 3 demonic beasts (equivalent to Golden Core cultivators), and they are even fighting each other. This setting was not well considered by the author.

Hiding their cultivation levels within the family is truly ruthless.