Ascension Through Eternal Tribulation

I'm currently at chapter 180, and I can't stand it anymore. It's so boring. I was confused from the beginning to chapter 30 of this book. After chapter 30, I feel that this book has just begun for me. Personally, I feel that the 100 chapters from chapter 30 to the release are very well written. Various calculations, reversals, peripheral characters, etc. Are all very well written. However, since it was released, sometimes the protagonist can talk to himself for several chapters with zero interaction, and he can repeat what he has said repeatedly in one chapter. Various calculations also seem naive and far-fetched. Also, this is about cultivating immortality, not the political arena. If cultivating immortality requires so many clumsy calculations, then it doesn't matter if this immortal is not cultivating. In the final analysis, I did not feel any satisfaction from the article. The several re-cultivations of the protagonist have worn out all my patience. The weirdest thing about this book is that in this book, there are zero people who have any contact with the protagonist, no matter it is relatives, friends, enemies, or elders, the protagonist is like a ghost wandering in the world, and no one knows that there is such a person. It's like carrying an emulator and playing a stand-alone game.

I haven't read it yet, but it made me laugh. Does the author have a glass heart? Just three words made you post forty comments, but no one responded to you.

Isn't this a little bit? The protagonist is still borrowing Li Lei's front foot, and he reveals his true feelings to fight against the cannibals. After he is not restrained by Li Lei, he starts to kill an innocent person with a borrowed knife. This world is ugly and the world is bad. How did you come to the conclusion that I can harm innocent people? The protagonist also explained that he is not a cannibal but a murderer. It is understandable that the protagonist is not the kind of person who can risk his life for justice, but is this a bit

Yes, I mentioned that the writing is not good. I think the writing is quite good and the plot is compact. So far, I can't fault the plot. The most important thing is that there are hooks and foreshadowings in many places, which are fascinating. Some people say that it is like AI, which is completely black. AI probably cannot write the feeling of being a fighter. The author is actually a fellow countryman with me. Can you update 600 times a day?

Volume 1: My Earthworm Master (Completed) Part 2: My Li Lei Master (Completed) This is currently the third volume, everyone is welcome to read

To be honest, I hate aristocratic families cultivating immortality the most. No matter how the Ning family is described as working together to advance the family, the rise of each family is harmful to other people in the corresponding class of the immortal cultivation world, because these aristocratic families connected by blood are always more or less exclusive. We should kill all these aristocratic families, whether they are good or bad, in order to bring some clarity to the world of immortality. The so-called good aristocratic families nowadays will turn bad sooner or later, and they will eventually become poisonous. It doesn't matter who you are, the Ning family and the Li family, they are nothing more than blood-sucking insects.

I keep writing the same plot as a side story, but the main plot is not drawn at all. The writing is still the same as a running account. Sure enough, most writers will finish their work in the later stage. Withdrawn

The more I wrote, the more exciting it became. I read 106 chapters in one go. The early stage was uneventful, but the later stages were spectacular. This book is the only strange book I have read this year. I just ask the author not to stop reading and to finish it.

Tell me what you think is good and bad. Good 1: The protagonist has a decent personality, a good IQ, and is not one of the homogeneous ones on the market. I personally prefer a self-interested protagonist to one who always saves the world. Good 2: The world view is okay, and it has the flavor of magical power and immortality. Bad 1: The world view is a bit different. Forget about the interior and exterior scenes, the real person can tolerate it, but what the hell is Daoguo? This name has too high intentions, but its realm is so low. Did Dao Ji change it? It's not necessary. It's a bit awkward to call him Zhenjun when you have Zifu. And Mingming, isn't he just Taixu? What's the difference? I haven't written it at all. How can I say that the system has been changed? It feels nondescript Bad 2: The problem of rare characters. You can use some rare characters to highlight an ancient style, but there is no need to fill in some rare characters. It is very abrupt and awkward Bad 3: The problem of roles, women There are too few characters, and the better female characters are also very attractive to readers. Bad 4: The problem of expectation. After switching to Shaoyin, I suddenly lost the sense of expectation and the motivation to continue reading. Moreover, I personally felt that the core was written off. Moving forward, what is the core plot of the book? Deduction is the core. In the world of magical power flow, deduction is the core, but what is written later. The flavor of the deduction flow is gone, the real body is used, and various restrictions are imposed, which results in the taste of the front and the back being completely different. You should write in the simulator, or a reopened flow like the First Saint Demon Gate. Now you limit the deduction, and the world view is very locked. Where is the sense of expectation? There is no sense of expectation anymore. There is no plot, no characters, no world view. Most of them have no sense of expectation, which limits the deduction. How can you reach your climax? What's the foreshadowing? The purpose is to climax and explode, but the world view is so tightly locked that there is no chance of explosion. Even if there is, there are still people who want you to explode. Isn't this a clown? Bad 5: The core taste has begun to change. Why are you reading this book? Because of the world view and the protagonist, the protagonist accounts for a larger proportion. The unexpected side of the protagonist is the highlight. If you do something unexpected, others are surprised. This is a bit more exciting, especially when the world view is locked.

To be honest, in terms of the level of writing, this book has the charm of Xuanjian, but Xuanjian became arrogant only after the early stage, which was a very ordinary behind-the-scenes family flow. The problem of this book lies in the part of killing earthworms in the early stage. The writing is too confusing, many people can't understand it, and there is no official explanation in the end. In addition, the progress is slightly fast, and the boundary between simulation and reality is not clear, which distracts many readers. It is recommended that the author reset the first ten chapters when he has time.