Reborn as the Changbai Mountain God: Six Lifetimes Supporting the Immortal Clan

I recognized the little eunuch you were at a glance. The opening chapter of this book is not as good as the Four Square Demonic Formation in the previous book. Xuanzhao also sounds different from the Purple Mansion of Foundation Establishment and Qi Training But there is nothing you can do about it. Write your Six True and Twelve Qi well, and don't name them all with colors.

Advantages: There is nothing special about it, and the writing style is okay. Maybe it was because when I read it, it was already almost 300,000 words long. Some people said that one section was incomprehensible, but I saw later that the author had almost completed the pitfalls, that is, the section where Qu Chuling and several Qi Refining monks were fighting was a bit unclear, but now that I see Chu Hu, I feel that it can be completely completed, and I look forward to it. There is also Shan Biao, which is very Liaozhai style. If you like this style, it's not too boring. Overall, there is nothing wrong with it as a meal replacement. Disadvantages: The author probably wants to portray Yang Li as a character like Li Tongya, but at present, the impression Yang Li gives me is actually not as deep as that of Yang Shujue, who has just appeared in a few scenes. Also, the overall story creation, well... It feels very powerful, but the power is too weak and the writing is not in-depth enough, which is very embarrassing. You can read more about Xuanjian Xianzu. He writes about killing people. Killing is killing. One detail expresses the character's character. The author said that the portrayal is too cold and hard. You can describe more details. If you are not afraid of being stupid, I am afraid that you are not good at it. But I obviously found that the author was very persuasive and the story was gradually getting better. Go on, let me take another look. If you don't write anything harmful, I will definitely order them all

The plot is too similar to Xuanjian, and I'm feeling aesthetic fatigue. I should write more of my own stuff.

Please release Mr. Jiang Shang's Yang Jin quickly😢

The result is the same routine as Xuanjian. I just hope to write more about the layout and story of each reincarnation of the protagonist. There is a master and a second, so don't just mess around with a bunch of characters! 😭

Fellow Taoists are welcome to read and comment! Come on, author!

It feels a bit blurry, I'll check it out later.

It's supposed to be updated once a day, but it's still messed up!

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Mr. Jiang Shang must find a younger brother who is obedient and has no objections!