The Legend of the Heavenly Gate

Just get through the first few chapters.

I still remember Kou Dao, what he wrote before was really amazing

It's equivalent to modern life, with the addition of aura, nothing else has changed.

I hope there will be another new work similar to Taoist Master, Sword Cage

Let's change it at the beginning, it doesn't feel like a teenager anymore, it looks like a greasy middle-aged hippie smiling face at you. Coupled with a few bad jokes, such as the congenital earthwork holy body and so on, it is absolutely amazing. It is the same as the way Beijingers talk at the competition level. It is greasy and makes people uncomfortable.

Alas, the real-life cultivation of immortality feels so well written. It has the flavor of a light novel. I still can't get into it after the second time.

I really don't know what to say about this elixir formation. It's a good stage event, and it can also be used as a sign of a small climax. It must be broken and formed again and again, and then there is another one that does not have a golden elixir, and it will reach the middle and late stages of the golden elixir. The improvement of the realm of fantasy novels is always one of the biggest attractions. The climax of the story appears as the realm increases. Let's not talk about the inability to handle the rhythm advancement and realm improvement well. It seems to be rising. I really don't know what to say.

The clutter of the city is too heavy, unlike a novel about cultivating immortals. Just go to the city. I don't recommend it.

The only part that can be seen in the city is the part about the crazy pile of settings before it was put on the shelves. What the hell is it about returning to the city after the Raikou dungeon is completed?

Regarding the latest incident: I have a question. In general, when the male protagonist of a novel participates in special attacks against the government, he will naturally take a somewhat hostile or neutral stance. But now the things the official does are all good things, so the things the male protagonist does are a bit unreasonable. For example, Meng Qi, the world-famous squid who loves diving, participated in official events. The things the officials did were good and bad, and they were basically neutral. So as a reader, I grabbed official resources. It didn't matter and even felt a little comfortable. But what the official did or what the author showed was good and positive, so when I saw the latest, I didn't feel so happy. In addition, there is a little less written about the other world, and some parts feel unfinished, such as the female fairy. The combat power is also a little bit low. Every time I can't beat it, I raise my combat power. Personally, I feel that the group is just like what is written in this article. I thought there would be some big climax for Boss Gu, but in the end, I gave away the skills and tools. The other two were a delivery person who was purely an atmosphere team, and the other who gave money to be an intermediary. I'll see if I can mention the group portrait scene later on. The above are all personal opinions, don't comment if you don't like it🙏

Can you tell me in your old book that you have published a new book? At least it will increase the popularity of the old book.

A cultivator is making jokes like this, which makes me sick.

I broke down in writing... This has been the problem since Qingcheng Taoist Master Throwing away the outline as I write The so-called one volume, one style, doesn't mean writing wherever I dream I can't write anymore and write hard Qingcheng, Kou Dao, Dao Cong, plus this book, it's all like this

Kou Dao's writing is so good, but it's too short.

It's invincible, it's not fun at all, and I can't understand it.

What I wrote before is not very good. It is too superficial. It feels like modern society is covered with a layer of skin and is quite boring.

The relations of production constitute society, and the high-end combat power of the Immortal to defeat the enemy's country has had an impact on the ordinary bottom-up social structure. The Immortal is more like a dictator and a finalist. Different from the real dictator, the Immortal's power does not need an organizational structure to show. The power of the Immortal belongs to the individual, and the bottom and even the middle and upper levels The elder disciples at the upper level have little to do with his interests, and even provide benefits to them. However, many immortal cultivation texts directly apply the sect structure. We can often see that the sect attaches great importance to a trial of middle and low-level disciples, but this is of no use to the nuclear weapons leader or ancestor. I think the level of immortals has become divorced from the social structure. Instead, the immortal group has entered the primitive society of immortals. As a ten thousand immortal, other people only have two options: the same kind and other items. In other words, immortals and people in ancient and modern societies are two different species. That is, the world view in which everything is like a cud dog.

I want Meimei to join the official team again and become the official dog.

I really like novels like Knife Cage, I hope there will be more novels like this

The writing is getting more and more exciting. It feels like cultivating immortality and starting a business, using one's own power to traverse two worlds.

It was said that the time travel started in chapter 16, but when I saw chapter 14, I was a little overwhelmed 🤔

Everyone keeps talking about how good it is, but after reading seven chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. All kinds of messy dialogues and no information

Insect Dream is still stable! There is nothing to say about the writing style and plot setting. The world view setting of the previous book Mechanical Hunter is a bit complicated (compared to ordinary readers). This modern fairy tale + two worlds is very good-looking so far and meets my appetite, but the ranking of the new book list is too low! It is obviously such a good-looking book... It seems that the late stage of Hunter took too long and the score was too low... For such a good-looking book, the score is so low, which severely damaged my confidence in writing a novel 😭

I have already seen top battles in Chapter 100 Participated in mid-level battles in person But I am still at a low level Then the Immortal Sect looks a bit roadier than the other side Does the author have an outline I always feel that this is not the way to go for a full-length novel Has the 300 chapters been completed or does the eunuch feel it?

What about the author? What's going on? There are only 2 updates per day now? Don't you want to continue updating 3 times a day? 😡

Very good, I will stop reading and wait for the next limited exemption

I am exhausted from reading this book. The two worlds of the realm are in chaos. The techniques of the Buddha of Righteousness and Demons are also in chaos. Can I form a pill online to become a god? If you don't read one chapter carefully, you'll be confused by the next one and can't understand it.

It's a bit confusing to read, why is this author not popular? Make a lot of money? Shivering and cold.

There are a lot of "not... But", "not... But" and "neither... Nor". I saw it 4 times in just one chapter. The author should pay attention.

The writing is too slow and I can't see the main plot. The protagonist's development is very busy but very slow.