Be a Tribulation Cultivator in a Cultivation Text Game

Author: I was a little too loud at the beginning, too deep into the substituting, and forgot to look back. Although it made me feel uncomfortable watching the bullshit in the front, but I was so happy after watching it that I didn't say anything anymore. I gave you a monthly pass. Let me tell you why your popularity is so low

A rare good book Using word games to combine time travel, infinite flow and immortality If Qidian provides more resources, it will definitely become a masterpiece At present, it seems to be between food and fairy grass. It is worth noting that I don't know how the author arranges the protagonist's plot, whether there is a reasonable heroine/no heroine is also good, whether there will be a brain-dead plot, and whether the combat power will expand too fast

It's hard to imagine that this book only has more than a thousand monthly tickets. My favorite story is Du Xiaofu's story, and the second one is Hai Zhiqiu. Sure enough, what pricks me the most is the joys and sorrows of ordinary people. I feel that the biggest weakness of this kind of novel is that every time a new story is opened, the reader may not be able to get into it, which will lead to a decrease in reading desire. For example, in Infinite Stream of the Lord of the World, I basically fast-forwarded to a new world. But this one doesn't. Instead, I think the author's stories about inner demons are more interesting than the real world. I also hope that the author can flesh out the protagonist's character a little more. Although the protagonists in Inner Demon can be regarded as the experiences of real protagonists, they are not essentially the same person. You can write more about the protagonist's changes in these stories. At present, I only feel that the protagonist's combat power has become stronger, but he only treats the inner demon tribulation as a story, and there seems to be no change psychologically and ideologically. How can he not be touched after experiencing so many inner demon tribulations? Therefore, I feel that the story of Lan Kaishi is not as good as the one in Heart Demon Tribulation. The author can make up for this aspect more

It is considered a masterpiece among works of the same type. The large frame and many reversals are quite interesting, but there are some loopholes if you think about it carefully. However, because we got rid of the prototypes of several classic time travel works early on, we don't need to be too demanding about the subsequent plots. At this point , the rigor is half a notch lower than the top works in the single-timeline simulator category (my early simulation of the Road to Eternal Life, and the early and middle stages of Tsuru Shou's), but the fun is quite good, which makes up for it a bit (but it can't be hooked back), so overall, it is about 0.3 To 0.4 Points worse than the above two books. (1 Point, 1 point, ten points) From the reading experience point of view, the experience of reading every day should not be good, because the reading is not rhythmic and mechanical, and you need to save time to read. But if you read a copy in one go, it can be called very good. The score of this kind of book will fluctuate up and down. When the copy is over, the score will be very good, but usually the score will drop. The level of small dungeons also fluctuates up and down. At present, I feel that the Demon Sect dungeon and the Flying Sword dungeon are extremely good, while the Dad dungeon and the Time Loop dungeon are not so good, but the overall level is still above the same level. The author is very good at planning chapters. It is not an exaggeration to say that he is beating some great masters (of course only part of it). I personally feel that the author is not good at writing battles, but the characteristic of this book is group portraits. Each person's skill set is different, and the skill repetition is low. Therefore, even if there is no sense of space and rhythm, good combat effects can be achieved by using complex skill construction (especially the simulator's presentation mode is declarative, and not writing about combat increases the immersion of the simulator itself). In other words, this is using strong construction capabilities to make up for the shortcomings of combat description. The author will use his strengths and avoid weaknesses, cleverly. (But this is also one of the reasons why the author's main story experience is not good.) Write these first and add more later.

I've seen episode 52. If I keep this state, I'll be popular.

He obviously has strong writing skills and rich imagination, so why challenge such an unpleasant writing style? The first few stories are very exciting and definitely better than the stories of many great masters, but you can't make every story outstanding. The story of Shi Xiaozi is like this. It goes here and there, and suddenly inserts many unforeseen settings in the middle. What is it about? Do you write what you dream about? I do have writing power, but challenging such a difficult writing method is really overestimating my abilities. You would also get good results by expanding your first three stories individually, but you chose this infinitely complicated writing method. Can you control the pleasure that the infinitely complicated timeline brings to readers? The integrity and completeness are too poor. This is not a book or a novel at all, but a collection of short stories in units. It's really a pity that the author didn't find a writing direction that could use his talents. When I read the first few stories, I felt strange. A novel of this quality could not have such popularity and success at the beginning. When I read it later, I realized that it was a broken novel without a fixed protagonist. If you put it in, to be honest, the writing of Cyber Immortal Society is not good at all. The protagonist of the well-written story is happy for a while and then ends abruptly. The various leapfrogging fighting methods that follow without logic are based on the author's own imagination are even more dramatic. Even the most basic logical basis for maintaining continuity is the author's own pleasure. If you don't collapse, who will collapse? It's such a pity that another author is wasting his talent wantonly. But if it's not for royalties and you just write for fun, then feel free.

It's the kind of simulation flow of demon tribulations before, but the subject of this inner demon tribulation is not the protagonist. Who would want to watch you modify your life after dozens of chapters as a sidekick?

I rely on a heart demon calamity mission with so many chapters...

I hope the author will not repeat his previous mistakes. If possible, he should try not to write the emotional line. And the theme should not deviate from the theme of word games as much as possible. Like the previous book by Sun Wuan, the first half can be said to be very exciting, but unfortunately the latter part deviates from the topic. There is basically no word games in the writing, and the writing style is also a bit biased toward the Riddler. Although there are patches in the subsequent plot, it does not seem to have the same flavor as when you first opened the book.        ，，，，

Q can't help but read it. It's like the kind of science fiction novel where you dream about the future, then change the past, and then change the destruction of the future. Although it is badly written, this book really surprised me. Well, it is very slow. A series of plots were laid out in the early stage, but there is no There is a section that makes me feel boring. Maybe this copy is a bit too long and makes me want to skip. But the truth was revealed recently. It's been a long time since I had a book that made me have this desire to talk. Just like when I read Lord of Mysteries! The unhappiness you felt when you discovered that it was the Earth after destruction! Come on, author, your writing is really good. You are really good at this stupid line.

It has the same feeling as when I was following up on my simulated road to immortality. Although it is not so sloppy, it has good control over emotions, and the story and imagination are also good.

I don't like it. It's too shabby and has too much humor. It's time to be a loser. In addition, people who hate stupidity won't be able to read this novel.

Damn it, do you know how busy I am at work lately? When I read a novel, I saw that I had to wake up at three in the morning to work at six the next day. Damn it! The first time I was persuaded to leave by the top comment in the comment area He said the plot of Prison Stone was not good He said the realistic plot was abrupt He said the author's writing was good but not powerful enough, and the integration of reality and simulation was not adequate Then I ran away Then I saw the homepage again and started watching It can be said that I was shocked Tianren (a bit exaggerated, please don't have too high expectations to watch it, otherwise there are always some thorns to pick) The simulated plot is very interesting, and my favorite chapter should be Laohuang (Mozu line), but Han Chan is a bit facial, and Laodu (Jianwan Jianxian line), Laodu has a good character, and the emotional line and team line are very immersive. Others have said that the plot of Prison Stone is dragging, but I think it is already an interesting chapter. There are indeed some unreasonable parts in the whole book, but the overall feeling is very good. He Qidao is a story that I skipped about two or three chapters, and I felt a bit confused. Everything else is well received, especially the real-life ➕simulation timeline and the linkage of various simulated characters. It is really a must-have content. The last fully ordered book was Thriller Paradise. Do you understand your value? Continue to pave the way for Jiang Shenzi's strong character in the future. It is also very interesting to witness the protagonist's strong character through the simulation line. The comments represent personal opinions. There are still some flaws in the book. Please refer to everyone's opinions for optimization!

The text cultivates immortality and adds simulation. These two cheats are usually used to write the protagonist, but here they are used to simulate the person who was robbed. After simulating for most of the day, I ended up choosing two out of five. Compared with orthodox simulation writing, it is obvious that the effort is not proportional to the reward. The reader read for most of the day and kept reading about simulating others. In the end, he gained a little bit by simulating dozens of chapters. The pace is very slow, while simulation writing is generally fast-paced. When compared with simulation writing, it is even slower. I almost fell asleep while reading. In addition, a large amount of simulation content also takes up the space of the word game. The final result is that the two parties are holding each other back, and the advantages of the two settings are not written out. Only the story is well written, but the prerequisite for readers to read the story patiently is to gain enough. If you are simulating the protagonist, every time you cross a hurdle, your strength will increase, the story will become clearer, and you can also change the real dilemma. At the same time, you will find ways to increase the number of simulations. This is a complete and feedback-rich logic line. As for the simulated supporting characters, no matter how strong the supporting characters are or how many difficulties they overcome, they cannot be fed back to the protagonist... I think this should also be the feeling of many readers, but they cannot express it clearly. I'm sleepy, let's stop talking about my feelings. (I didn't read the following content, so there may be something wrong.) Summary: If you have enough patience, you may like it very much. I hope the author's next book can give readers a better reading experience.

The length is 90% inner demon line, 5% game line, and 5% real world line. It's very fragmented but the story is very good, so it's hard to review.

The core of the book is simulation, and the main plot is the calamity of inner demons However, the title of the book is text-based cultivation of immortality, and the introduction and title do not mention the calamity of inner demons So many of the people attracted by the introduction and title do not want to read this content, just like the name of the store is a rice noodle shop, but it turns out that they sell barbecue when they go in. It is very difficult to retain people The title of the book feels like it could be changed to: "The Tribulation Cultivation to Steal the Tribulation of the Inner Demons" "I Robbed in the World of Immortal Cultivation" "Heart Demon Tribulation" "Simulating the Tribulation of Cultivation to Eliminate the Heart Demon Tribulation" Then the introduction becomes something like this: The protagonist discovers that in the Heart Demon Tribulation, he can control the choices of monks through simulation, thereby solving the Heart Demon Tribulation and getting rewards Now those who want to see the text cultivating immortality come in to watch the simulation, and those who want to see the simulation just cross out this title. I just read the title and introduction of the book, who knew that the Heart Demon Tribulation is the main plot, and I saw that the Heart Demon Tribulation is too long, so I slipped away.

Come on, author, I have seen several comments recommending this book on some public book promotion accounts. I hope the author will stick to it and continue to maintain the current high level of writing, and his results will get better and better in the future!

Are you a Jie cultivator or making a movie? Didn't Jie Xiu take away everything from his opponent?

It can be considered a top-notch small masterpiece. The overall story is a relatively independent but connected group portrait story. Judging from the dozens of chapters so far, the proportion of reality is not large, and it is biased towards the simulator style.

The latest chapter is getting better and better, and I look forward to the follow-up progress. However, the main plot is really not as good as the simulator.

Hey, I really think the writing is very beautiful. I don't know why so many people criticize it.

I finished reading it in three days.

Do you know who your name attracts? Fighting is fun, I want to see blood flowing like a river

I saw Chapter 52. This book is very interesting. It suits my taste. Why are so few people reading it?

It's not easy to be on the monthly ticket list. It's hard to imagine that this book has ever been exempted.

Definitely not written by AI, AI is not that abstract 🙂

The only uncomfortable point is that after the simulation, the supporting characters are rarely described anymore.

Before I started the book, I read the comment section and said that the time loop section of He Qidao was not well written. After reading it myself, I realized that this person was making a prank. At least I personally think that the time loop section is the best 🤭

It's very good. It reads smoothly and attractively. Every paragraph has a tempting hook.

I enjoyed reading the latest two chapters. Dad wrote it very well, but I am more curious about the experience of the original time prisoner. The ghost cultivator should be the starting point for Xie Yuan and Xie Yuan to become friends later. ", "Unrequited favors, hatred arises", the goal of overcoming the tribulation is "clear thoughts"], what exactly does the second unrequited favor refer to, and how did the prisoner in the original world line (the first seed strength of the golden elixir + unresolved inner demons + survive).