Laying Low in the Heavens, Starting with the Dark Buddhist Sect

Don't abandon this book. Once you finish it, you're practically guaranteed to be a member of the Twelve Heavenly Kings (a popular online novel series in China), and you'll further build your reputation. Your next book will perform much better because it's well-written and you won't abandon it.

The multiverse genre is actually quite suitable for the author. The pacing was good in the early stages, but it was always abandoned. Now that he has switched to writing short stories, he doesn't need to write long ones. He can just switch to another story as soon as he's done. Surely it won't be abandoned again, right? No way.

The martial arts description is only at the intermediate level; the idea that a fist intent spanning several feet can shock Yu Xiao is ridiculous. Everyone else has said that even at her level, faster-than-light speed is just basic skill. Even the Buddha and the Three Pure Ones are only at the third realm. In the primordial world, Wudang has a treasure? You're really something.

We just hope you use your talent on writing the everyday, bumpy plots instead of making things complicated. We all know you're great at this, but could you wait until you've written a million words before doing this? You don't need to come up with such a dramatic plot to attract readers. We're asking you to take your time. Your writing of everyday life and normal plot is almost... Very good.

If you achieve a little success, you get cocky; if you get cocky, you develop a "literary youth syndrome"; if you develop a "literary youth syndrome," your grades suffer; and if your grades suffer, you become a eunuch.

It was too tiring and boring to read. To be honest, many authors use nested storytelling techniques, but why don't they? Because it's really not a smart approach. Too many nested storytelling techniques easily lead to aesthetic fatigue, and the same goes for following a serialized novel. This novel has excellent writing and ideas; frankly, few books on the bestseller lists can compare.

Here it comes! Every book in Peach Blossom is a classic, and every book is innovative. Although two of them were left unfinished, they are still better than the same old formulaic essays. Keep it up!

After skipping many chapters, the author finally realized something and stopped setting things up so ambitiously. Overly ambitious settings simply don't serve the story. This is also why Gun Kai often ends his stories poorly in the later parts of his works; when the premise is too grand, the story simply can't be written.

Judging from the readers' reactions, the author is facing a credibility crisis and is a bit panicked. Does the author dare to come out and say something?

The first volume was considered a masterpiece, with a high information density, a smooth and reasonable plot. In comparison, the second volume felt very weak and had a major problem: it was too abstract. Most of the text was about the setting, which was difficult to understand and left the reader confused. I hope the third volume can be revised.