Laying Low in the Heavens, Starting with the Dark Buddhist Sect

Of all writings, I love only those written with blood. Written in blood, you will see that blood is the spirit.

Don't be a eunuch, basically the Twelve Heavenly Kings will not run away after writing this book, and you have accumulated credibility again, and the results of the next book will be much better, because it is well written + not too eunuch This book is very good in terms of theme setting logic, and some characters are handled. It is much better than before, but some places still feel inexplicably depressed This book is very good, don't be a eunuch, I like it very much

Zhutianliu is really suitable for the author. In the early stage, the rhythm was good, but I was a eunuch all the time. Now I have changed to write short plots, and I don't need to write long stories. I change it when I'm done. I can't be a eunuch anymore, right?

I just hope that you can use your talents to write plots that you usually stumble upon, and stop making things complicated. We all know that you are very good at this, but can you do it after a million words? You don't need to create such a powerful plot to attract readers. We in turn beg you to take your time. Your writing of everyday and normal plots is almost... Very good. We all know you can write good plots. But don't get angry easily. It's up to you. Take your time.

If you have some grades, you will be a good person; if you are not good, you will suffer from the disease of youth; if you have the disease of youth, your grades will be poor; if your grades are poor, you will be a eunuch.

Here we are, Peach Blossom is a classic and innovative book. Although two of them are unfinished, they are still better than the same old eight-part essay. Come on!

Reading friends' reactions, the author is in a credibility crisis and is a little panicked now. . Does the author dare to say something?

The first volume was called fairy grass before, with high information density and smooth and reasonable plot. In comparison, the second volume seems to be watery, and there is a major problem, that is, it is too mysterious. Most of the text is about the setting, which is uncomfortable and confusing. I hope the third volume can be revised.

I really want to piss you off, my combat power is blurry again. I obviously have the outer cover of 100,000 years of Taoism, but I am actually a weakling on the inside. No matter how strong the passive defense is, King Peacock Ming can be countered to death. In the past, Buddhist monks who engaged in self-grasping were countered to death. Now there is a realm of suppression. What realm of suppression can skip 100,000 years of Taoism and teach you directly? There is no need for Taoist cultivators to play around. Except for the three top Taoist masters, all other Taoist cultivators must be educated. The question is, even if the realm is suppressed, why is there a dispute between Buddhism and Taoism? Except for the three Tao masters in your Taoist cultivator, all others have been enlightened. Aren't you, the Tao master, also a rootless Ping? Or are you saying that if you practice Taoism again, you will be free and will not be educated? You can suppress the fighting power for me.

The author's writing style is good, especially the description of female characters, and the creativity is also there. Every plug-in is good, but I feel that the writing is always crooked, all kinds of mysterious, and the author can't grasp it. Each book is basically two chapters a day, one big chapter every day. When the performance gets worse, no one reads it. I can't grasp the plot. I start to rush through the plot and outline it, and then it is finished. In fact, it is no different from The Eunuch. This is the case in all books.

The second dungeon was so poorly written that it began to engage in martial arts and empty nationalism, which suddenly destroyed all the strength of the first dungeon.

I didn't want to read the first volume after reading more than 90 chapters, and I didn't want to read it after reading 125 chapters in the second volume! ! Let me talk about my feelings. The best part is the first two simulations! The latter part seems to be in contact with a higher level. The actual content is empty and nothing new or different, and the level is not reflected. Shuiba

It's like there's no outline at all. You're so good at it in the early stages. What do you do in the middle and later stages? There's a high probability that it's going to end badly.

Sure enough, after the system crashed, it didn't look good. Forced drop.

It's okay, but there are a lot of subtle points between men and women (using other people's bodies to play with other people's women), but don't be a eunuch anymore, otherwise I won't dare to pursue your book.

The setting of Buddhism is much stronger than that of Tao. The mechanism of combining Buddha and demon is much stronger, nourishing both evil and demons. Taoism is just some simple cultivation. Buddhism has different Buddha's ways. Taoism only uses different Qi to practice. It doesn't even have basic Taoism and is not systematic. It feels extremely incomplete to me. There are also Buddha treasures such as the fruit of rebirth, the lamp that burns the world, and the immovable body. The Taoist sect has no great supernatural powers or innate spiritual treasures. Don't let the protagonist become a Buddha, just open a new door to become a true martial artist. I don't even know how this door can compete with Buddhism. It needs to be a mechanism for people to have other transformations, and the Buddha is hidden. It is necessary to value the evil spirits and rakshasas that others have raised. Just write about the world of Buddha, and add a Tao to make people feel so weak.

Is it a female author? When I read the Hunter book, I thought it was weird. A virgin didn't sleep with her in a brothel. Instead, she said it was because she was afraid that if she slept with her, she would be cheated if she slept with someone else in the future. The author is afraid of the poison of being green, isn't he afraid of the poison of giving away a girl?

I have been following the author for several books, and I feel like I am just a breath away from being a great master, but every time I can't get the breath out! Peach Blossom's book opens with a stunning setting and a strange setting. It is a depressing and strange world, but it also has its own exciting points. But every time the book gets longer, it becomes unstoppable. At the beginning, the exciting points disappear, or the writing collapses. I get rid of the seriousness and write well! !

This one won't be cut, right? The first copy is very touching.

The highlight of this book is Buddhism. To be honest, I feel that the Taoist cultivation system is not as interesting as Buddhist cultivation.

I sincerely suggest to the author that no matter how many ideas you have, write a book first to lay the foundation. This is not only to have a base that can appreciate your works, but also to exercise the ability to write and control pens. Why are there so many old eunuchs? Because when you have insufficient energy, you will never learn how to finish a book. Author, you are suitable for this bowl of rice, don't waste your talent in vain.

The protagonist is either a good guy or a bad guy. Novels are not reality, so there is no need to be so nagging. Don't be a literary youth. The subject matter is good, and the writing style is also good, but don't make things like people are contradictory, because it's too tiring to read.

When I saw Married Woman, I immediately quit and looked at the author's name. Sure enough, it was Peach Blossom Crisp.

If you feel uncomfortable writing, why bother yourself? Just open a new book. Don't be intrigued every day. Write something more relaxed. The harem will definitely attract more viewers. You are like Qingguang Baojian, singing every night. Aren't the data all very good?

The author's writing style and imagination are definitely very good, but the performance is not good or bad, maybe because it does not meet the online literature market. No matter how good the writing is, there must be a few highlights and exciting points. The protagonist has been on the road to failure 🙂

Frequent cutting of books will have serious consequences. You must finish writing, even if you scribble and give an explanation. If you keep cutting it, everyone will wait and see. As time goes by, you will read it when the number of words is too high, resulting in insufficient subscriptions. The author's behind-the-scenes flow is not enough to be honest. After the light is behind the scenes, there is no use for opponents. There is a behind-the-scenes boss who cannot beat the big boss. It is important to tell a good story at the beginning.

Isn't this book about a mysterious and deceitful Taoist cultivator? Give a bunch of values ​​​​and then use the protagonist to make people step by step 🔨

I feel that the character of Taoist cultivators is really bad at present. My innocent heart feels like a child. Judging from the impression this book has given me so far, Buddhism's victory is an inevitable result.

I really hope that the author can become a god in one book. With such a good writing style, if you can't become a great god, it would be a waste of your talent, and you have never opened your arms in your life 😫

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