Immortal Rite

I am used to those so-called zero-sum games among underworld cultivators, so it is refreshing to see this kind of world. From the setting of Zhengjiao, it can be seen that the resources in this world are biased towards those that are relatively abundant, so the appearance of this kind of decency is necessarily reasonable. Moreover, I also have some thoughts about the latest chapter and the previous plot. Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it. If you squirt hard, you are right. I still hope that there will be more of this kind of glorious and upright power in Qidian. After all, there is already a lot of darkness in reality, and there is no need to repeat those depressing stories in novels.

First of all, the cultivation realm of this book is very complete, and the various Jiao methods are also very unique. I feel that there are still very few people who write about this kind of cultivation The appearance of the protagonist is also good, there is no overpowering the guest, it is equivalent to a guiding role, and there is no need to impose a plot to advance the main line The other is the plot, a rare decent flavor, not annoying There are all kinds of provocations and pretending to be pigs and eating tigers. Although there are not many big scenes, the feeling of slowly advancing is also very comfortable I think there are two things that will be difficult to deal with in the future: First, the facial makeup of the supporting characters, because this book has a large world view, and there must be many supporting characters who are inevitably homogeneous, especially the female characters. There is no big difference, they are all strong and beautiful. The second is the issue of balance of combat power. The protagonist will be more and more hanged in the future. Now he is basically invincible in the group. How to balance it in the future is a problem In general, this book is a breath of fresh air. I have seen many such books that will fall into a state of lack of content and lack of updates after being put on the shelves. I don't know if the author can persist. I am still very optimistic about it 🤓

Multiple female protagonists, no female protagonist, or single female protagonist Every woman has a crush on the male protagonist, but the male protagonist is like a love-struck character, like a personal computer. It would be fun to write with multiple female protagonists. Don't always have a female cultivator appear who vaguely likes the male protagonist, and then the male protagonist is indifferent. The two senior sisters in the early stage didn't reply to the letters, so it's okay to reply to the letters. If the male protagonist is handsome, just describe it directly. There is no need to describe it sideways because of the love of so many women. Is the male protagonist the only male protagonist? If there is no female protagonist, then don't write so many supporting female characters. Basically, they all have a vague liking for the male protagonist, but there is no female protagonist. This is not a strange thing. If you have this time, you might as well catch up on more plots. And if you are writing a story without a heroine, the unimportant female supporting characters will be in the past. I feel there is no need to mention it again. If the two senior sisters are not accepted, there is no need to increase their presence. After all, the protagonist will surpass the others sooner or later. There is no need to use the gap to show that it is inappropriate. Just say that the protagonist is single-minded. It can't be a single female protagonist. It doesn't look like it. There are audiences for multiple female protagonists, single female protagonists, and no female protagonists. It's just this vague ambiguity that is uncomfortable to watch. In the last book, I felt that the author did not handle the relationship well. I feel that whether you like multiple female protagonists, single female protagonists or no female protagonists, it should be uncomfortable to watch. Overall, the plot is quite good. It is not a plot about bitterness and hatred. The cultivation system and realm are also quite complete, but the emotional aspects are a bit stiff.

It's not as bad as the comment section said. It could be said to be a fairy grass before it was released, but now it is at least a good grass. Advantages: The writing is smooth, the context is clear, and there are no lines everywhere. The values ​​​​are very normal, the sect's atmosphere is very good, the author can write more about the sect's cohesion and value system. The explanation of the exercises is okay, I have some thoughts. Disadvantages: The plot is relatively flat, and the connection with the distant place and high-level officials is very weak. I don't even know what the protagonist's goal is or the core of his path, but it may be mentioned later. In short, the lower limit is good grass. If there is a more grand plot and promotion in the future, it may not be impossible to reach fairy grass.

I feel angry at work, and I feel depressed while reading a novel after get off work. Can you be more decisive? Aren't you the chief of the great religion and the face of Jiantian Sect? That's it? During the selection process within the sect, you acted like a gangster, but when it came to critical moments, you showed mercy to women when you saw them outside? Really mean. Where is your Chaohuang Zhengqi and the demon disintegrated? Can't you trade your injury for your life? It feels like this Yuanjie copy is just a joke, no one died. It was inexplicable and made me angry.

The previous book relied on the female senior and finally became a senior Taoist monk This book's cultivation is more about appearance. I feel that the previous part emphasized too much on the appearance of pig's feet and relied on women. There is also the part about the senior brother breaking the contract with the rabbit clan. It is written as if ugly people cannot cultivate immortality. It directly denies many mediocre-looking people and also denies the victory of man over nature.

In general, if you are short of books, you can read If you write something more attractive in the future, the shortcomings will be acceptable. The first 24 chapters, general content 1. Failed to refining qi, borrowed medicine through gambling, successfully returned the medicine, failed to get married 2. Cheated and succeeded in refining qi for the second time, and received door benefits 3. Arriving late, the benefits were changed, and the compensation was to win rewards by playing PK 4. The protagonist of Duck King found a few old friends, got the explosive secret book, and won PK, successful small upgrade, small flames turned into big flames 4. Assigned to the new station of the sect for training

Other works often have similar cheats that issue tasks and guide the protagonist's growth, but the goals are generally relatively clear. In this case, if the protagonist follows the instructions and completes the task, he can often gain more than if he does not complete the task. We sometimes call this kind of system puppet, but if the writing is good, it won't be too harsh. As for this book, as a book about cultivating immortality, everyone agrees with the writing style, but the golden finger makes people feel uncomfortable. It seems to give a general direction without giving a clear task, but every decision the protagonist makes must consider the impact of Goldfinger. If the protagonist makes a decision first, then fits the golden finger and gets positive feedback, then the perception will be much better. The current situation is that the protagonist first ponders an idea, and then finds that in order to comply with the golden finger, he has to change his mind more than once. Is that really in line with the so-called Taoist heart?

I received this book recommendation from another author. After reading a few chapters, he persuaded me to quit. What the hell is this book about? The author has no friends in real life and borrows money directly from the bank.

Xunxian asks to behead people, even if it is a dream, it is romantic. I feel better personally