Starting My Immortal Life by Upgrading Buildings

I was a little disappointed with the latest plot of Ji Yuan joining the Bone Nightmare Sect. Specifically, he was dissatisfied with the plot where he was threatened by the Nascent Soul monk, had no choice but to hand over the Yinshen in order to gain trust, and was forced to become a disciple. My dissatisfaction mainly stems from the lack of growth of the character: when he is weak and helpless, he chooses to endure, and readers can sympathize with him; but when his cultivation has reached the golden elixir, he still falls into a situation where he is absolutely crushed by high-level monks, so much so that he has to surrender the Yinshen and lose his autonomy to save his life. This makes his previous growth seem futile, and the sense of powerlessness exaggerated by the plot is also very depressing.

Why don't you have any negative reviews? This is unreasonable. Great works such as Cover the Sky and Lord of Mysteries were criticized a lot when they were written.

This book has been very well written until now. It is not toxic to me. It is a fairy tale. I recommend everyone to read it. However, there are some minor problems in my opinion. Of course, I still recommend this novel. It is very good. I just have some ideas that I think would be better 1. The fish pond that transforms into a dragon can only turn into one kind of dragon, which is a bit like Pokémon. Carp can only turn into an ice dragon. This is probably because the author conceived the fish pond next to an ice dragon, but to be honest, this kind of targeted evolution looks uncomfortable and feels destined. 2. Tu Yue, the protagonist always doesn't I am willing to let Tu Yue do this and that, saying that I am not willing to give it up. In fact, Tu Yue was bought, and it is really not that precious. The author thinks it is precious, probably because Tu Yue is so powerful in the future he conceived, but the current Tu Yue is not precious. You build her foundation. To be honest, it is much more cost-effective for you to buy a new female corpse with foundation building. Lord If the author keeps saying that he is reluctant to give up, it seems so precious and unnecessary. It is better to say that he has feelings from the beginning, which seems more appropriate and reasonable 3. The soil dug by the chicken pen, the author writes that the chicken will grow sharp claws, and then dig out the precious soil, but in this way, the understanding of that soil should be that the more chickens there are The more you dig, but the written amount is a fixed amount per month, it seems very conflicting 4. The upgrade conditions written for several buildings are to practice Qi to kill the foundation, and to build the foundation to kill the golden elixir. I think this kind of thing is very bad, because it seems that there is no fault tolerance, just like if you have not practiced the Qi to kill the foundation, and the foundation to kill the golden elixir, Then I found out that the building could not be upgraded until I got the foundation pill. The building was stuck at that level. Although this is a novel and the author would definitely not write it like that, it still seems very bad. If you want to write it, it would be more appropriate to write it like you need to cross a large boundary to kill enemies (minimum kill to build a foundation). , Or simply kill the foundation or golden elixir 5. The word "mother" is a little too much, and the protagonist has a bit of a mouth habit, but it's not a big deal. It's just that these two words are a bit dramatic. When I see it, I think of bandits, and I feel like I want to kill him These are some of my small opinions, but I still think this book is very good, and there are no poisonous points. The above are at most my prejudices, not shortcomings, and the characters are all very well drawn. Come on, author. I gave my monthly ticket and everything else. I hope it can continue to be good and don't end up being a bad ending or a eunuch.

You basically didn't depict group portraits in the previous chapters (to be honest, your dragon pets are more impressive than those group portraits), or you started with the sect style, how could you change the style midway? The subsequent plot would be too different if it were from someone else's perspective. How to unfold the subsequent plot from someone else's perspective? Whether you are looking for the master or going to the Demon God Continent to find the sister you recognize (I don't remember the name), Ji Yuan himself needs to be the introduction to guide the plot line of the new continent. Besides, your cave can be upgraded to accommodate people, don't you remember? You can bring your trusted senior sisters and brothers to Cave Heaven to open up a new world together. This is also feasible. The Immortal Prison itself is carried with you. If you want to play Zongmen Style and use your spiritual effects on the sect for a long time, the secrets will definitely be leaked. There are only a few geniuses in the Water Dragon Sect, and the rest of the rotten fish and shrimps cannot be supported at all Senior sisters and brothers who can be trusted will still have spiritual effects to improve them if they are put into the cave. Your cave spiritual effect is your biggest secret. How dare you improve it for everyone in the sect? Are you crazy? Only fellow disciples and brothers who know the basics can improve their talents and strength and accompany you to grow and develop without fear of revealing your biggest trump card. The open effect of the sect flow is not feasible. It makes no sense with your cautious and cautious character Ji Yuan. It is better to improve yourself and develop with a few team members. The foundation of the sect is the upper level. As long as the upper level's combat power and talent can keep up with the little Karami below, they can recruit as many as they want

Ask me, is there really such a stupid plot?

The overall impression is okay, and the plot feels a bit simple. After reading the first part, you can roughly know what to write in the following chapters. Perhaps as book friends said, it is due to a lack of imagination and experience, but the writing style is still quite good. You can read it when you are short of books. Mainly, it is average overall, compared to other good books. 🙂

The map of the Human World was redrawn based on the author's hand-drawn map.

Master

It's really a scam to order all the author's books.

I would like all interested Taoists to help me think about which buildings can be upgraded, and what are the building effects of each level? Let's brainstorm and crowdfund a book!