Journey to the West: I Became Mount Fangcun's Chief Disciple

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If you want to read Journey to the West, you can remove it from the bookshelf. The name of this book should be changed to: Rebirth of the Great Man, I Cultivated Immortality in Two Worlds

The book looks okay, but the title of your book is Journey to the West, which is 160,000 words long. The only things related to Journey to the West are the four characters mentioned in the article. Nanzhan Buzhou I didn't find anything else related to Journey to the West🌚

Can you not write the emotional line? It makes me crazy!

They always describe Lao Ding's cheating, cheating, and taking kickbacks, but the protagonist doesn't punish him or fire or expel him. What does the author mean by writing this?

It felt fairy-like at first, but then it started to feel more and more ordinary.

I read the introduction, and it was said to be pure Journey to the West, but I don't know the specifics, but I still have some understanding of Pure Journey to the West. First of all, there are not so many conspiracies and tricks in the original version of Journey to the West. Sun Wukong's apprenticeship with Bodhi is purely a coincidence. The logic is substituted into Journey to the West. In fact, in Journey to the West, supernatural powers, spells, martial arts and the like are calculated separately. If you practice immortality, you can only live forever, and if you practice martial arts, you can only practice martial arts. A person is at least a middle-level figure in the heaven. It is not that in the eyes of some people, ascending can only be at the bottom, and he can be an ordinary heavenly soldier. In classical cultivation, no one who ascends by himself can only be at the bottom. When he is an ordinary heavenly soldier, he can only be at the bottom. If you have no magical powers or martial arts, you are not much better than ordinary people. The strongest monsters will always be monsters with magical powers and martial arts. The transformation is very strong. This is the setting logic of modern fantasy cultivation. In modern fantasy cultivation, monsters must reach a certain level of cultivation before they can transform. Therefore, the monsters are very powerful. Even if they are enlightened by a big boss, they have a minimum standard of strength, which is different from classical cultivation

Why does Lao Xiu feel that the person who taught him was being stingy if he didn't give him anything? Someone owes you something?

It looks good. Starting from the early Han Dynasty, will Wang Zhaojun and Diao Chan, two of the four beauties, appear? During the Three Kingdoms period, could Zhuge Liang be saved and take the Prime Minister to cultivate immortality? I feel that the Prime Minister has the talent to cultivate immortality. After the Three Kingdoms period after the Prime Minister, it was really too hard. Come to Wuzhangyuan and fake his death, and the protagonist takes the Prime Minister's talent to the world of immortality.

He's just talking nonsense under the guise of "Journey to the West"

The beginning is a bit long-winded, not on topic, but it gets better later. Thank you for Journey to the West. The other world is a resource collection point for you. Write less. After all, we are all here for Journey to the West.

Is there a problem with your character? Better change it

The servant Lao Ding is a failure and has no sense of being a servant at all.

It's a journey to the west, but it's actually traveling between two worlds to cultivate immortality, with a little bit of beast control added.

The protagonist is a pure resentment. Does the author think that suffering is a blessing? The servants take advantage and sell things without bargaining. 🤢

In the background of Journey to the West, let's not talk about building a foundation in the realm, the Golden Pill Yuanying of the Purple Mansion, the Purple Mansion's major sword repair, and splitting the Yuanshen child. I said you have high qualifications, Taoism, and good masters and brothers to inherit cattle. Tiantian said that there is a cause and effect for intervening in the court. If you let Han Xin, the soldier immortal, not die, there will be no cause and effect? This is the famous Soldier Immortal, King of Chu/Marquis of Huaiyin. Half of the Han Dynasty was taken down by Han Xin. You, a little golden elixir cultivator, canceled the book of life and death for him? Even Lu Pheasant knelt down, Han Xin was still alive? This cause and effect is too great. It is better to say that Patriarch Bodhi pressed the hand of Lord Yama and checked Han Xin's life and death book. I don't know what you want to write next.

It's neither Journey to the West nor Fangcun. There's an old fox in the original novel. I feel like 500,000 words won't reach Fangcun Mountain.

It's too overwhelming for the protagonist. He killed the eagle and said he couldn't carry it with him. He only brought three or four kilograms of meat with him. Brother, you are successful in cultivation. You are so strong that you can carry a large water tank full of water. Water is not immovable. You are so awesome. Carrying one or two hundred kilograms on your back won't affect your movement, right? That's the result. Besides, it doesn't have flesh, feet, and feathers on the wings. Can't it be allowed to take the lead?

I've read Chapter 159. The author has bad views and even deceives birds. He also boasts that Ai Zhenzi's teachings are good, but does he teach you that he doesn't keep his word? ? Stand and stand again

It's 10 chapters. Except for Journey to the West in the introduction, there's no mention of Journey to the West, not even Fangcun Mountain. Your plot and writing style... What the hell, do you still want the protagonist to lead the art to Fangcun Mountain?

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I thought it was like selling mutton and dog meat. I thought it was from my school days in Fang Cun, but it turned out not to be: Secondly, the depiction of the protagonist and other supporting characters was not very likable, especially the protagonist, who was a bit contradictory. The advantage is that the writing style and historical description are very interesting. That's it. I've been trying to read some books lately, but there aren't many that I like. I'm going to check in for the next one. I hope it's the one that I like and it has more than a million words. I'm tired of chasing.

Pure journey to the west, ancient human race, aptitude test, it is difficult to be nervous

It can be seen that the author wanted to imitate the Jiyue people and deliberately wrote in a verbose and confusing way. Readers, please skip and read, it will not affect the plot at all.

I'm confused about the system's spells, especially I can't see the essential difference between the two world systems, and the protagonist often suddenly appears with a new skill. Is it because I didn't read carefully?

No matter how you estimate the time when the monkey was born, shouldn't it be before the Qin and Han Dynasties?

The book is okay, but I quit after seeing something that swallowed a bird directly.

I originally crossed it, but saw the author's name and came back again.

It's useless to write about prehistoric times, don't mention who your apprentice is. Unless your master is the ancestor of Hongjun, what you talk about in prehistoric times is just a basic background, and nothing else is useful.

There is currently a poisonous point in this book. There are too many Taoist companions, and the Taoist path is its own. Look at which of the immortals has so many Taoist companions. One or two high-quality Taoist companions are the bright spots. The Taoist companions can be written brilliantly even if they are not large. If you want to write a brilliant story about so many Taoist companions, it will take up a lot of space. This is to sacrifice the basics for the last. If you don't write it, you will become a pendant heroine. It is better not to write it. The writing of this book is already in a state of limbo, and it feels like it will end at the end, which will probably seriously affect the quality of the book.

The writing of Alien is too rough. Many places were not well conceived. For example: The relatively popular "Zifu Golden Pill" is used to divide the realm, and even the titles are "True Lord" and "Immortal Lord"? I have to compare Xuanjian, but no one else has the B-level in your description. Obviously the two settings have nothing to do with each other, so why not create your own system? Every time the perspective is pulled to another world, the protagonist's strength basically increases and he starts to abuse his food. So this alien world is basically Long Aotian's pretentious and slap-in-the-face routine. It might as well be written as a Zongzongzu farming style/folk custom zombie fighting style that is more interesting. The various titles of "Ting Yu" are very good...