Between Two Worlds: One in the Age of Dharma Decline, One in the Immortal Realm

The strangeness of the world at the end of the law is very well written, but there is one thing I really want to complain about. It should be written about the only strong point in the desperate situation of resources. For example, one point of spiritual energy + one sword intention is better than a hundred times ordinary spiritual energy. Instead of relying on unreasonable spiritual powers to compare or even surpass the normal world in all aspects. At the very least, the daily manifestations of magical powers should be very stingy. As a result, they are a group of active people who take action at will in the Dharma-ending world. Does spiritual spiritual power consume no energy? If we could be completely spiritual and not consume energy, we would directly transcend the conservation of energy and create a golden age. After locking technology with the three-body proton, hundreds of years of development have been done in a snail shell. It is recommended to study Wenzhao Gonggou to cultivate immortality in the two realms, each with its own victory and intersection.

Chapter 1: The protagonist traveled to the Yin Side World 2 years ago. The protagonist was a rich man. In the Yin Side World, his third uncle hanged himself and the protagonist learned that there were monsters in this world. Then he went to seek immortality and pursue extraordinary power for two years. He found a master who had a bunch of monster disciples. Later, it was confirmed that this was a world of miraculous spirits and there was no aura; Chapter 7 writes: (3 months have passed compared to Chapter 1) The protagonist's whole family in the dark side world was slaughtered by a monster 2 and a half years ago (disappeared out of thin air for 3 months). Only the protagonist and people without Shen family blood survived. The protagonist has relied on the money of his uncle Liu who is not related by blood in the past two years (meaning the monster killed the blood of the Shen family in the family) Pulse person, the family's finances disappeared out of thin air), and then gave the Sixth Uncle a book of exercises that require spiritual energy to practice (the protagonist knows that there is no spiritual energy in this world), and then the author introduced that the protagonist's Sixth Uncle has internal power, and the protagonist's relative master also has extraordinary power (the protagonist has extraordinary power, and the protagonist has been looking for it outside for two years...), The protagonist When Uncle Liu was young, he found a lot of fake skills (skills that required aura) and then didn't remind the protagonist for two years... Seriously, the 4 books I saw in the past week were all books with a lot of logical conflicts between Chapter 1 and Chapter 7. Did you all write part of the novel by AI and then expand and modify it yourself to publish it directly? Otherwise, why are they so consistent because there is a serious logical conflict between Chapter 1 and Chapter 7?

Like three cheap masters in the world of treasure refining, piling up resources for the protagonist to compete for the Immortal Official. After the protagonist becomes the Immortal Official, he doesn't say he will be a master, and he doesn't even mention it. It makes me feel that everyone is the protagonist's tool.

This book is really well written before building the foundation. It's just a standard cool article. The pace is also appropriate. There's nothing too poisonous about it. The supporting characters are also well written. But after building the foundation, brother, didn't you write a cool article? Are you going to write something in-depth? As a good article, shouldn't it be good? Look at what you wrote about building the foundation. Every time I retreat, I say that I have made a big step forward. When I first built the foundation, I could kill a big demon that was close to the soul. However, after building the foundation, it had no effect at all. Any monster can kill you, and you have no way to deal with all the enemies you encounter, and you haven't solved them after searching for a long time. His uncle has been dealt with several times, but the mastermind behind it has never been solved. You have to write exciting stories, and you also have to overwhelm the protagonist. How can this be done? If you're afraid that you won't be able to grasp it later, just stack the boxes. But you were so uncomfortable in the early stage. A few readers can stick with it. Anyway, you can travel across the world. If it doesn't work, just change the world. It's better than pressing like this. Personal opinion, if you have other opinions, you are right. No need to contradict me.

The writing is better than those at the top of the list. Very smart and non-conventional. Give me a reward of ten yuan and keep up the hard work.

As long as there are no major poisons in the two world streams, they are all at the food level.

To be honest, the world view setting is better than the text, but the plot rhythm is slightly worse. The rhythm is good at the beginning, but then it gets a bit anxious. Although he is not Gou Daoliu, he is too busy. He is either practicing or fighting. The upgrade pace is relatively fast. The protagonist is a bit confused. He kills monsters without understanding the disadvantages, and then gets into trouble one after another. The frequency of traveling between the two worlds is also very frequent. I travel back and forth to do small things. The purpose is unclear and very scattered, as if I just do whatever I think of.

I came here as a fan of the first book. The book I borrowed my brain from the Great Emperor was at least clear and well-structured, and the map structure was reasonable. Some of the ideas could be explained by myself. However, this book was terrible and full of bugs. The opponents and other people forced their wits down, so book lovers who came after the book were disappointed.

I reached chapter 250 and it was a continuous garbage plot, so I skipped the whole thing. It seems that everything has been messed up since the beginning of selling resources from both worlds. The plot has no core. If you take two steps out of the house, you will be an innate monster, and you will do nothing.

The popularity and comments are a bit low, I don't know why, but I think it's okay, the plot is reasonable, there is no water, and it feels like it is moving at full speed. As well as the question that many people complain about, the difference in difficulty between the skills in the demon world and the world of cultivating immortals is too big. For example, there are five spiritual patterns on one side and dozens and hundreds on the other. It is too simple in comparison. In other words, the demon world has changed for thousands of years to the end of the Dharma era. Isn't it normal for the utilization rate of spiritual energy to be high? Can the fuel consumption and battery life of your current car be compared to a hundred years ago when the internal combustion engine was invented? What's more, thousands of years later, the more oil is used, the less oil will be used. In the process, the utilization rate will definitely increase.