Between Two Worlds: One in the Age of Dharma Decline, One in the Immortal Realm

The fantastical world of the Dharma-ending Age is well-written, but there's one thing I really want to complain about: it should have focused on the unique strengths of characters facing resource deprivation, such as how a single element of spiritual energy plus a bit of sword intent could surpass a hundred times the amount of ordinary spiritual energy.

Chapter 1: The protagonist traveled to the Yin Side World 2 years ago. The protagonist was a rich man. In the Yin Side World, his third uncle hanged himself and the protagonist learned that there were monsters in this world. Then he went to seek immortality and pursue extraordinary power for two years. He found a master who had a bunch of monster disciples.

Like the three cheap masters in the treasure-refining world, they piled resources on the protagonist to compete for celestial official positions, but after the protagonist became a celestial official, they didn't even mention helping him or his position. It felt like everyone was just a tool for the protagonist. The protagonist doesn't seem human; he's more like a cultivation machine, constantly breaking through his cultivation level without any real sense of progression.

There are fewer views and comments, I don't know why. To me, it's alright, the plot is reasonable, there's no filler, and it feels like it's moving at full speed. And there's the issue that many people are criticizing: the difficulty of cultivation techniques in the demon world is too different from that in the immortal world.

This level of filler is unbearable! Chapter 463 ends by saying it's difficult for lower-level cultivators to acquire talisman masters and various resources related to beast taming inheritance; then chapter 464 begins with another explanation of the difficulty for lower-level cultivators to purchase these resources, summarizing the reasons, followed by a second paragraph explaining the differences…

This is better written than the top-ranked articles. It's very inspired and unconventional. I'm giving it a 10 yuan reward; keep up the good work!

The story before Foundation Establishment is really well-written. It's a standard "power fantasy" novel with a good pace and no major flaws. The supporting characters are also quite well-developed. But after you've reached Foundation Establishment, buddy, isn't what you're writing just a wish-fulfillment story? Aren't you planning to write something with more depth?

As long as there's no major poison, the dual-realm flow is considered a good supply.

To be honest, the world-building is better than the plagiarized version, but the pacing of the plot is a bit weak. The beginning is well-paced, but it gets a bit rushed later on. Although it's not a Taoist path of survival, it's still too busy. It's either cultivation or fighting, and the leveling-up pace is quite fast.

It's too chaotic, the plot has no coherence whatsoever, and there's no sense of excitement. Your two-world travel theme is clearly nonsense. I'm quitting.