One Breath, Rising Sun

The character of this protagonist is really perfect. He is not like some losers who are angry and surprised at every turn. He speaks and behaves like a clown.

After I finished writing my feelings, I read everyone's comments and thought they were good reviews. But when I saw people saying this and that, I couldn't even sleep. If you think it's good, you can write it for everyone to read. This book ranks first among the immortal novels I've read in the past 10 years. It's not easy to find a novel that is written from the heart. The author writes slowly and is not like them. Knowledge, today I saw the part of practicing in the polar night, especially the golden crow falling down the well. The plot design is really good, the description is good, and the lantern refining later is good, no matter where I look, I really can't find faults in this book. Don't be influenced by them. I will write ten million words in the ending. I will study the legend of mortals cultivating immortals in the future, and wait for my son and grandson to continue reading it.

You have to scold, but you still have to chase.

The previous one was a masterpiece, but when it came to the incident of the half-demon catwoman, it was no longer for people to read. The author's brain circuit began to go abnormal. It was probably a matter of property issues for the sister of a former colleague who was practicing Qi or building foundations. He killed the prince of the Yuanying family, and was not able to finish it. He was hunted down and killed a lot of relatives and friends, etc. Anyway, it was just like a genius... I gave up after watching the whole story. The author really doesn't understand who he is and what he does.

Even if you scold, you still have to scold, and if you chase, you still have to chase.

In the future, when I see someone saying that he was almost able to become a god or something, I scold him every time I see him. Look at his attitude towards writing and updating over the years. You guys are really tolerant and even become a god... Bah.

I haven't read this book yet. I browsed the comment area, and it seems that everyone is saying that it is not good to read after a hundred chapters, and it is not good to read after Tiandu. Then, except for those who agreed with the comments, others seemed to have nothing to say about the plot except attacking others for being trainees. Can anyone tell me whether this book is worth reading?

I have read all of his books, but this book still gives me the same feeling, chaotic. There are currently four main lines, one big and three small. The big main line is full of chaos, the small main line is to return to the Zhao family for revenge, one is to enter the world for Tiandu Mountain, and the other is the battle between the aristocratic family and the Qing Xiu. The Zhao family's affairs will definitely be discussed later, but Tiandushan ended it after two copies were made when he entered the world. There are two hidden threads, one is about the protagonist's aunt, and the other is about the secrets of the world. But the problem is that all the pits are unfinished, and some threads just break after pulling out a little thread. A pit can't play a role in promoting the plot. What's the point of digging this pit? Did you tell Elder Chen about the secret of the Kingdom of God in the first copy? What exactly is the Kingdom of God? How does the flaming bird end at the end of the dungeon? Who is the master of Sun Kerui in the second copy of Guangyuan Mansion? What is her identity? Is there any follow-up to the matter of stealing divine power within the Red Flame Sect and responding to the incense wish? What happened to the treasure made from the fusion of the nightmare and the idol? Didn't you read the secret message of the Heavenly Pardon Order that your aunt left for you? The evil cultists are killing people in Guangyuan Mansion, so they just have people patrolling and that's it? Not solved yet? What is the agreement between Tiandu Mountain and Dazhou? What benefits did it provide? The Yuan Magnetic Ring is useless even after hard work. Everything came to an abrupt end. When I started writing this chapter, I forgot what I wrote in the previous chapter. The training methods are also changed every day. The Chunyang Book has not explained clearly how to practice, and it has been changed to Taixu. Before the world map reaches that point, various hints have begun. After the Kingdom of Thousand Mountains, the Southern Wilderness, the Infinite Ghost Realm, and the Sea Clan appear. It is also a small world opened by the gods, another world, and another starry sky. What's the use of your world map implying that it's so complicated? You can explore me Chixiang. There are so many things that I can write but I don't write them. Instead, I say that I have no inspiration. Some immature ideas are hinted at in the early stage, and then revised again and again in the later stage, and then the work is hastily finished as soon as there is no inspiration.

I have read a lot of books at my fingertips, and it was not until this book that I finally understood why the plots of his books were so thin, because he only knew these three things. Just like the protagonist of this book, every time the Xueshan sect assigned him a task, except for fighting and teaching, he would not do anything else, and he would not even give a reason. I used to think that the author had other plans, but when I saw the protagonist walking all over the world without investigating the case, I understood that it was not the author who had other plans, and the author himself could not write such a plot, so he directly arranged for the protagonist to ignore it. But one trick can be used all over the world. You can make money after writing these three axes, but you will always stay in the same place. Just like what is written in the book, no matter how good the scenery is, you will get tired of it after looking at it for a long time. I still remember the amazing feeling when I read the Huang Ting trilogy, but now I can't read the new book. My writing has not improved, but my character has become eunuch-like. Your current results are what you deserve.

I paid to read your first few books on Qidian. I think you have ideas and writing skills. I still think Lingxiyi Sword among Taoist priests is outstanding. But you are really not a good person. You keep disappointing people. I will take the time to sort out your mess. Whenever you open a new book, I will publicize it. It is not to discredit you, but you are inherently black. I want more people to recognize it in advance and not waste a penny on you.