Notes on a Corpse Monster's Cultivation

I'll leave all the previous intelligence-lowering operations in the spotlight for now, and let's talk about Chapter 76 separately, which I think is the chapter with the biggest problem. The King of Montenegro called the people below to gather together, and let the wind blow from all directions to the meeting point, just to show others the way. The protagonist didn't want to go, and another wind stopped, stopping the wind around him... Isn't this specifically to refute the leader's face? The classic "leader picks up the food and you turn the tables" behavior. Forget it, after all, it can be understood as an epiphany, and you don't know what the world is. You're good. When the protagonist clearly heard someone say "huh" after the wind stopped, a plot was arranged where the protagonist wanted to see more clearly and walked forward a few hills... Isn't this lively thing a must-see? Did the leader who just made a fool of himself move forward instead of moving back? Now it's good, the protagonist himself has become a lively person, and was caught by the Black Mountain Lord Qianli Netherworld... If any point in this plot is changed, it won't be so abstract. It is clearly stated that the protagonist has an epiphany about his own behavior and the things around him, and cannot hear the "Eh", and the subsequent behavior of the protagonist moving closer to watch the excitement is considered reasonable. After all, the protagonist can be lucky and think that he has not been discovered; or the protagonist does not write the "Eh" at all, and the latter is also reasonable; or the protagonist does not move forward, but walks to both sides and flees before being caught, all are considered reasonable. The author refused, and instead chose the most abstract way of writing... It can only be said that the book friend in the chapter is right. If he writes like this, the readers will be exhausted, and no one will read it. In the end, he will be a eunuch. When I wrote this book review, it was October 16th. I had already abandoned the book. I felt that the world view of the book was indeed quite to my liking, and I felt sorry for the book, so I came back to write this content. Now on November 21st, more than a month later, in view of some people saying that the wind was not blown by the Lord of Montenegro, but from the opposite side, I came back and patiently read Chapter 76 again, and found that the content that can prove that the wind was not blown by the Lord of Montenegro was in the last few paragraphs of this chapter, "Those dark clouds seemed to have been blown away by the wind, and also seemed to be scattered by thunder and lightning." In such a paragraph, the amount of information is comparable to a hint. And in online novels, either the author deliberately leads readers to think that "this wind was caused by the Lord of Montenegro", or the author simply does not have the writing skills to tell the story clearly. If it is the first type, then the author has to bear the misunderstanding and abandonment of the book by readers for this kind of guiding behavior; if it is the second type, it only means that the author does not have the ability to write a book. After talking about the author's writing style, let's talk about the plot. If the "Montenegro King" in what I wrote before is replaced by the enemy, you will find that except for the "leader picks up food and you change the table" behavior, there are no other big problems. He just broke the enemy's law by jumping in the face, knowing that it has already been triggered. The enemy's attention is drawn to him, and he rushes forward at this time. Isn't this behavior still abstract... ——December 3, added again In fact, I am quite tolerant of the character's behavior in the novel. He can be cowardly, after all, his life is at stake; he can also be reckless, after all. After all, everyone has a thirst for knowledge; he can also be cowardly and reckless in different things. After all, since ancient times, there has been a saying that one can die at night/sacrifice one's life for righteousness... But this character cannot be cowardly and reckless in the same thing. At one time, he said he didn't want to be cannon fodder and didn't want to go through, and then he "moved forward again" "Climb a few hills", even if the mentality changes and the desire for knowledge suddenly overwhelms the desire to survive, the author has to write out the psychological activities of this change in mentality. Otherwise, as I said, in my eyes, this guy has moved forward a few hills with the mentality of "life matters"...

First of all, I'm sure the author's writing is very good and attractive. There are two characters that I can't stand. In the case where monsters are the material for human cultivation, the Black Mountain Monarch fights against the humans, and I don't see any little monsters it oppresses. The protagonist doesn't ask for help. If the protagonist doesn't dismantle it, it will be considered a blessing for it for eight lifetimes. How can the eggs be completed after the nest is overturned? As for whether the king will have another purpose in the future, it has not been shown yet. I guess this king will die in the hands of the protagonist in the end The above one is relatively harmless. I really can't bear the next one The protagonist plays a game with his fish spirit friends to bet who drinks more water. The two of them spit out the water and flooded the cave and spiritual field of the Green Calyx Fairy without knowing it. The Green Calyx Fairy wants the protagonist to compensate. , The protagonist said that she had nothing to gain from being poor, and asked the protagonist to give her the bow to the male protagonist but was reluctant to give it up, and asked the protagonist to restore the cave and the medicine field. The protagonist felt that it was difficult for others, so she gave her a spell. The Green Calyx Fairy, but someone with a background will lack a spell for you, so she said that you should pay for it with the fish spirit. When the fish spirit got angry, she took the initiative to attack the Green Calyx Fairy, and then the protagonist thought that since she took action, she should kill it. The Green Calyx Fairy ran away and brought in rescue soldiers to kill the male protagonist. At this time, the male protagonist pretended to be a watchman and even set up a memorial arch, saying that there was a problem with the attitude of the other party. After describing it in several paragraphs, he couldn't come up with it. It's so disgusting.

After reading a few chapters, my personal experience is that this protagonist is like a timid, opinionated, and thoughtless woman who travels to a strange place and discovers that she is a zombie. Normal people will think that this should be a fantasy world, a very unsafe world. As a zombie, she is an alien and it is very dangerous to go out. So, as a zombie, does it have any abilities? What are the attack methods? No description, no exploration, is the surrounding environment safe? Is it safe to explore and make sure the surroundings are safe? No, so as a zombie, where will you go from here? Is there any cultivation method? Never thought about it! He found that sucking blood and eating a kind of soil should be good for him instinctively, but he just refused to eat it. It was like that kind of wilderness survival show with women. After starving for a day, he caught a rabbit and thought the rabbit was too cute. He would rather starve to death than eat it. It is like a woman drinking Chinese medicine. She thinks it is too bitter and stops drinking it. No matter if it is useful or not! When there is any movement, he doesn't know anything, so he runs directly into his own grave, and the coffin board is stuffy, and he won't come out for a few days. After you look at it, you will feel that he is timid and fearful, has no independent opinions, no future plans, no sense of crisis, and is a bit arrogant. When something happens, he will find a corner to cover his head and tremble. This is the feeling of such a woman! Whenever a normal male protagonist travels through the past, the first thing that comes to his mind is that since he has become a zombie, this world should be a fantasy world. The fantasy world is very dangerous for a little zombie. Zombies are aliens, especially a little zombie. Even an adult cannot defeat it. It is very dangerous to go out. The first thing that comes to mind is where is it around? Is it safe? And as a zombie, do you have any attackers? What are the methods of cultivation? When you lie in the coffin every day and have nothing to do, do you want to try how to practice cultivation? Why do you have the means to attack? What should you do if you encounter danger? What will you do as a zombie in the future? What is the goal? Is there anything around you that can improve you? This is the decision a normal man should make when traveling through the past, so I said that after reading a few chapters, I feel that the protagonist should be a woman, or is the author a female author? Arriving in a strange place, I have no idea, no plan, no future, I am timid and afraid of getting into trouble! So after reading a few chapters, I don't have much desire to continue reading! If you can accept this, the writing is okay. I don't know what the plot will be later. As long as you can accept such a protagonist, you can continue reading.

To be honest, it feels like the protagonist is like a 🐶 who recognizes his master everywhere, including Yin Laogui, Black Mountain Lord, and there will definitely be other masters later. The owner goes hunting and takes the protagonist's dog with him. After hunting, he will be rewarded🦴. The protagonist has a little bit of subjective initiative. He realizes something and practices a method, but is threatened by his owner. It's really like a real dog being beaten by its owner. ¬_¬｀

He doesn't look like a newcomer, but he's definitely not the reincarnation of a great god. Judging from the writing style, he should be a literary youth who writes cool articles. He has gained experience after being reincarnated. Novices can enter, and experienced people can enter. Those who like to think and talk logically can take a look and run away.

It's definitely a smaller version of Kissing Fingertips. You can't go wrong with this kind of protagonist whose IQ fluctuates between high and low.

The settings for time travelers are too redundant. A time traveler knows that the place he is in is a corpse raising place arranged by others. Why not leave quickly? A time traveler arrived at the most sinister place in the corpse-raising area and found a coffin engraved with runes. He realized that there were zombies inside, but he still had to risk his own life to open it? Then he was almost charged to death immediately. Then you have to have a forced (but not forced) kiss with a beautiful female zombie... You are so stupid, you should not be this stupid. I know you want to give benefits to the protagonist, but the routine is too boring.

The process of learning the law is a bit like a kiss-your-fingertips novel, the language is generally humorous, the characters are relatively smart, the supporting characters have sufficient IQs, and the pig's feet don't have the domineering air, which is very appetizing.

Why did you write the protagonist as an indigenous clown? It can really put poison, an old ghost can bully the protagonist at will, cast a spell to crush the protagonist to death, and finally escape, and give it some sweetness, the protagonist will become loyal, this is a dog, right? It's true that there are no books about weak and abusive masters in the early period, but the protagonist is resigned to the situation and still wants to be a slave and loyal to the other person. It is really a unique history.

The writing is quite realistic, and it completely portrays the kind of brainless zombie with rigid thinking and chaotic brains.