The Immortals

The previous book is actually finished. The early part of the previous book was like fairy grass, but I just wanted to get a drunkard to get the master drunk and then fuck the master, which ruined my popularity. It's a pity. I haven't even read this book. I know it. The early part is attractive, the middle part is a stud, and the later part is unfinished.

Looking at the novels you have written, it seems that you are just like the poor and rotten scholar in ancient times. You are a scholar but you don't know how to flatter, you can't be an official and you don't know how to make a living. You are poor and have a few ounces of water in your stomach. I make a living by using clichés, but I can't let go of my airs. Every article is filled with pointers and moral judgments. I open and shut about this generation, this generation, this woman, this person, this person is a beautiful maid and a cheap maid. I look down on all living beings from a high position. I have a rather arrogant and conceited arrogance and a depressed mood of not being recognized for my talents. I have shit in my rice.

Author, can you please write well? Everyone pays money to watch the art of cultivating immortality with the trick. Instead of "Palace Fighting Drama". That Huangshan fifth-grade master looks like Jiang Lozhi. The protagonist is like a magnet. He will be hated wherever he goes. First he sends soldiers... Then to elites, and keeps sending experience😒 If I were from Huangshan Mountain, I would just kill anyone who offends.

Partridge Sky·Xidu Song Dynasty·Zhu Dunru I am Shanshui Lang of Qingdu. Tianjiao's distribution and sparseness. I was granted coupons for rain and wind, and I borrowed monthly stamps from clouds. Thousands of poems, Thousands of wines. How many times have I set my sights on the king? The Jade Tower and the Golden Tower go back lazily, and put plum blossoms to drunken Luoyang.

I am a living ghost in the mountains, born to be loose and half crazy. I once criticized Qing Ci and changed it to Huang Biao, and he became drunk and became the king of hell in the underworld. There are thousands of techniques and ten thousand chapters of Dharma, why should we humble ourselves to serve God? Calling ghosts and attracting monsters who refuse to return, and burning immortals to eat moonlight.

I am a Shanshui Lang from Qingdu. I am a disciple of Heavenly Cult and Shu Kuang. I once granted coupons for rain and wind, and borrowed monthly stamps from clouds when I was tired. Thousands of poems and thousands of cups of wine. How many times have you set your sights on a prince? Returning lazily from the Jade Tower and Golden Tower, Luoyang is intoxicated by placing plum blossoms.

Cuckoo Liao: Currently a lv5 writer of China Literature Group, he has authored three excellent works: "Xian Pao", "Xian Pao" and "Xian Pao".

Some readers started turning off the water supply when they were 40 years old. When they saw a harem plot, they scolded it. Didn't you enjoy watching it when you were in your teens and 20s? I used to rush too much when I was a kid, and now I can't do it anymore. It started.

The author has not made much progress. This book still suffers from the problems of the previous two books. Nine levels of practice. You have used 400,000 words for one level of nine. What will you do next? Can you still write 5 million words? You can't write 5 million words in the three books together I don't think you can change your old habits. You know your shortcomings and don't change them just by talking about them. The low-level writing in the early stage is wonderful, but the middle level is a bit empty, and it basically falls apart in the later stage. It's not good at all. Are you going to end this book like Immortal Lu and Immortal Cage?

I hope this book won't open up a harem. The first and middle stages of his book are particularly good, but you can't stand it when you start a harem and accept others.