The Immortals

The previous book is already finished! The beginning was absolutely fantastic, but then it had to introduce a character who gets the master drunk and then sleeps with him, ruining its popularity. What a pity! Even before reading this one, you can tell it's captivating from the start, becomes a harem novel in the middle, and ends up a disappointing mess.

Reading your novels, you're just like a poor, pedantic scholar from ancient times. He passed the imperial examination but didn't know how to flatter, couldn't become an official, and didn't know how to make a living. He was poor and destitute, yet he thought he had a lot of knowledge and was very arrogant.

Author, can you please write properly? People are paying money to read about the unorthodox cultivation style. Instead of "palace intrigue drama". That fifth-rank master from Huangshan looks just like Jiang Zhi. The protagonist is like a magnet, attracting hatred wherever he goes, first from lowly soldiers… then from elites, constantly giving him experience points. 😒 If I were that hermit from Huangshan, I would kill anyone I offend.

Partridge Sky·Xidu Song Dynasty Zhu Dunru I am Qingdu Shanshui Lang. Heaven has ordained a free and unrestrained spirit. He once issued rain and wind coupons. Tired of leaving clouds and borrowing the moon. Ten thousand poems A thousand cups of wine. I have never paid any attention to princes and kings. I'm too lazy to return to the jade towers and golden palaces. Let us adorn ourselves with plum blossoms and revel in Luoyang.

I am a living ghost from the mountains, born carefree and half-mad. He once revised the imperial edicts and changed the yellow paper, and drunkenly entered the underworld to become the King of Hell. With a thousand techniques and countless laws, why should one grovel before Heaven? They summoned ghosts and monsters, refusing to return, and even burned immortals to consume moonlight.

I am a carefree wanderer amidst the mountains and rivers of Qingdu, ordained by Heaven to be unrestrained and wild. I have granted rain and wind decrees, and repeatedly borrowed the moon's light from the clouds. Ten thousand poems, a thousand cups of wine. When have I ever paid homage to kings and nobles? I am too weary to return to the jade towers and golden palaces; let me instead adorn myself with plum blossoms and get drunk in Luoyang.

Bugu Liao: Currently a Level 5 writer at China Literature Group, author of three excellent works: "Xianpao", "Xianpao", and "Xianpao".

Some readers start complaining as soon as they turn 40, criticizing any harem plot. Weren't you enjoying it in your teens and twenties? You watched too much when you were a kid, now you can't handle it anymore and you're starting to complain.

The author hasn't improved at all; this book still suffers from the same problems as the first two. In "Nine Grades of Cultivation," you used 400,000 words just for the first nine grades—what are you going to do with the rest? Can you even write 5 million words? You can't even finish three books combined to reach 5 million words. I don't think you can change your old habits.

I hope this book doesn't have a harem element. His books are especially good in the early and middle stages, but the harem elements where he takes in every girl he meets are unbearable.