Laying Low in the Immortal Martial World, Searching the Mirror for Fortune

The progress is too slow. In more than 100 chapters, the protagonist doesn't even get started with Qi induction, and the pill-forming immortal cultivator gives people the feeling of being a bad guy.

It's slow to warm up and doesn't let you down. It feels like reading a historical novel. Come on, the author.

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I watched it in two days, and I think it's okay. There's not so much pretense and slap-in-the-face plot

Many people say that the pace of this book is slow, and it is indeed a bit slow, but the amazing thing is that the slow pace attracted me to read it in one sitting, and it was just right. Sharp.

Take a look, take a look! Coming to the treasure land today, Lin Er performs a two-donkey spinning flywheel for the villagers... Please also support the villagers!

It's okay. The progress of cultivating immortals is as slow as a turtle crawling. In Linglong, the spiritual orifice has been opened, and it is assisted by the mysterious mirror, but it takes dozens of chapters to draw the Qi... It is difficult for me to imagine how many chapters to write about Nascent Soul. If I want to speed up, what is the reason. I always feel like you'll drag yourself to death because the story is too long. Essential middle-grade spiritual root, the Extreme Yang Magic Jade you get to speed up your practice has quite a lot of restrictions, the essence is a chicken pot.

It's too plain, and it suppresses the realm of the protagonist, which is not interesting!

Daily fantasy novels are only suitable for farming novels, but your writing relies on managing connections, so it's not a cool novel either. The main character's fighting power is compared to the cool article. The more words there are, the more readers will read, and there will be no progress in the emotional drama.

Advantages: The writing is fluent, the person is experienced, and the logic is smooth Disadvantages: The feeling is not enough, the plot is not brilliant, the description of the scene is too petty, and the level is too harsh.

The writing is very good, but this plug-in of yours is useless. You have entered a Taoist temple and still practiced martial arts. You have no immortality at all.

Lin Er specializes in answering various questions for book friends, and welcomes harmonious exchanges.

Everything is good, but Goldfinger is like rubbish. The latest thing I saw is that even the basic functions are starting to become useless.

The writing is quite good, why are there so few people? Not to mention it's comparable to Wulongshan, but in my opinion it's not bad either. Don't people like to see this kind of thing now?

I only started practicing martial arts after more than 20 chapters. The writing is quite good, but it feels like it's not suitable for this fast-paced era.

It's a really good book, I just like this kind of book. The characters speak and do things with a sense of detail, and the plot is reasonable. There are too few books nowadays that are comfortable to read.

It can be renamed Wenjingxianyuan. . Just a random suggestion

Does the text say that you have to help people fulfill their wishes?

The writing style and plot are very good, but the plug-in settings are not very good.

In the world of the ninth-grade Zhongzheng system, there is still extraordinary power. Think about it.

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The writing is okay. There are too many short stories among parents, and the progress is very slow. The limit is very large and it depends on what others have. In summary, it is not exciting and it is relatively slow. It is difficult to get results if you write like this.

To be fair, the content of cultivating immortals will be cut off in the follow-up. It would also be good to write a martial arts world in the feudal dynasty.

The writing is okay, but there are too many trivial things written about daily life, and the storyline lacks passion.

Can two million words lead to immortality? It's too slow. It's better not to enlarge the worldview so much. I can't stand it anymore.

Introduction to this book: A story about a young Xiu who was teased by three fairy sisters and even had his body broken by one of them. He still doesn't know who handled it.

The details are in place, the characters are plump, and the golden fingers are just right. You can feel that the author put his heart into this book.

It's over 1 million words, and I haven't built a foundation yet. Let's just read it. I will definitely not vote for the monthly vote.

The main character is too small. At present, it is just a soul-searching technique. It is still a weak soul-searching technique. It cannot work on living people. It has a time limit and cannot live the whole life of others.

The first ten chapters piqued my interest, but the last forty chapters wore it away.