The Five-Powers God of the Spirit World!

Will you die if you don't eat? The female character who was known to be the reincarnation of an immortal, but one chapter passed and she awakened? Preparing to capture the dragon, and then the dragon cut off its tail to survive? In the first few chapters, even the protagonist is eager to practice the skills of the armored corpse. Hey, guess what? Only the little disciple himself has defected!

Sigh... The author has to change the outline or change his job because of your way of writing the plot. As other book friends said, forget it if you let your apprentice run away for the first time. The second time the other party was too old to offend him, but at least he had Tian Qing Shan Guo as a guarantee, so he tolerated it. You ran away for the third time, so why don't you just watch the ball? Do you understand that it's only a matter of seconds?

How to put it? It's a big start at the beginning. A hundred-year-old ancestor is still invincible when he comes out of the mountains and a rural village. It's better to just start slowly without a background. At the moment, he's a bit full and still being abused.

Literally, stupid villain!

After Chapter 169, did your grades go downhill? How dare the author write that time travel is man-made? If you write something like this, the fun of this book will be completely gone.

Chapter 169: Time Travel Suspense, I really don't understand why this kind of thing is done. Goldfinger doesn't talk about the female immortal, but gives a black hand to time travel and gives the disciple a destiny identity. What do you want to do, author? If you think your grades are not good, just cut it off and just open another book. There is no shortage of eunuchs in the starting point, so why bother to shit!

The poor performance is not unreasonable. Every major event is written in a very unsettling way. The first time was the rebellion of several apprentices, and then a protagonist template was introduced. The old Mo Leng let the apprentice with two swords run away, and Mrs. Ning was reincarnated as an immortal. The protagonist finally got a good fruit and reshaped his body, which was just a little better. Then he immediately caught the dragon and wrote another one to let the dragon run away. He is really a stupid villain who can't do anything.

I saw Chapter 169. Damn, it's a waste of my money. I don't want to read it anymore. What else can I do to travel through the clouds of doubt or play something? If it doesn't work, just be a eunuch.

Apart from scales and bones, a dragon tail only has about ten kilograms of meat? It's so special, Mang has more meat than it 🤫

All booked, please rate. Excessive procrastination, too many repeated sentences, medium typos, and too many psychological descriptions. I don't know which book this is from the author. At least the world view and plot are generally not bad, but the writing still needs to be improved. I paid for the number of words, but found that there were so many repetitive descriptions, and sometimes the plot only advanced a few sentences in two chapters, which made me feel a bit tired of aesthetics.