The Five-Powers God of the Spirit World!

Will they die if they don't suffer setbacks? The female character was known to be a reincarnation of an immortal, but after one chapter, she awakened? They were preparing to capture the dragon, but then the dragon had to cut off its tail to survive? In the first few chapters, even the protagonist was envious of practicing the Ironclad Corpse's magic. Hey, guess what? Only the little apprentice had it, and he defected!

Sigh... Author, with this kind of plot writing, you either need to change the outline or change jobs. Like other readers have said, it was one thing for the disciple to run away the first time. The second time, the other party was someone powerful and untouchable, but at least Tianqing Shanguo was there to protect him, so he tolerated it. If they run away the third time, what's the point of watching the game? Don't you know the saying "third time's the charm"?

Well, the beginning was too grandiose. A centuries-old ancestor emerging from a rural village isn't invincible. It would have been better to start with no backstory and unfold the story slowly. Currently, even at near-max level, it's getting crushed by newbies.

It means exactly what it says: a stupid villain!

After chapter 169, did the book's ratings start to decline? The author even dared to write about time travel being manipulated? Writing something like that completely destroys the book's appeal.

Chapter 169 The Mystery of Time Travel: I really don't understand why they had to come up with this kind of thing. Putting aside the golden finger and the female immortal, they gave the time travel a black hand and a destined identity to their disciple. Author, what are you trying to do?! If you think the results are bad, just shut it down and start a new one. Qidian's vast library doesn't need another eunuch, why bother with this mess?!

The poor performance isn't without reason; every major event is written in a rather irritating way. The first was a few disciples rebelling, then they introduced a protagonist template, and the old demon managed to let this second-rate disciple escape.

I read up to chapter 169, damn it, what a waste of my money! I don't want to read any further. What's with this time-travel mystery? What's the point? If you can't handle it, just abandon it.

A dragon's tail, aside from its scales and bones, only weighs about ten pounds of meat? Seriously, even a monstrous dragon has more meat than that! 🤫

I've ordered everything, here's my review. It is too long-winded, contains too many repetitive sentences, has typos, and too much psychological description. I don't know how many books this author has written, but at least the world-building and plot are generally not bad, but the writing style still needs some work. I paid for the word count, but I found so much repetitive description. Sometimes, the plot only progressed by a few sentences in two chapters, which made me feel a bit tired of it.