Transmigrating Begins with Selling an Aircraft Carrier

Selling ships is a perfect match for the profession of ship girls, but it feels like a minotaur selling cattle or a slave trader selling slaves.

A half-dead Russian is a good Russian; there's no need to sell him too many new weapons. Don't think of him as a good thing.

The plot is alright, and Azur Lane players had a good experience, but the lack of a title is too discouraging.

Author, from which dynasty did you travel here? There aren't even chapter titles!

Li Yunlong almost lost his composure when he appeared.

The second-ranked procurement officer, Li Yunlong, is having a hard time keeping up.

I feel like your concept could be a great mix. Since you're going to be doing business across different dimensions anyway, why limit yourself to Azur Lane products? Since you can produce guns and vehicles, why not add some nonsense about mind cores summoning gun girls, creating an Azur Lane *Girls' Frontline *Ash Frontline universe? This would expand the production content, and you could write so much more later.

The commander's appearance

It's best to explain some technical terms, such as what "traffic disruption" means, unless your target audience is only gamers.

The title is off-putting; it doesn't look like a ship girl anime. The content is okay, but I'd suggest including some characters and pictures. It's 2019 already!