A Dragon Ball Swallowed Whole

Let me share my thoughts on reading recently. One thing is clear: this book isn't as good as it was at the beginning. I think the main problem is that it's deliberate; the author is deliberately exacerbating the conflict to construct the plot. Unfortunately, this deliberate writing is too deliberate; it's not the wings of a butterfly, not a subtle foreshadowing, not a domino effect.

The beginning of the book, with its dragon encounter and mountain adventures, was quite good, but it fell apart after the apprenticeship. You're a time traveler, what are you doing here trying to understand the mortal world? Haven't you seen enough of the dirty stuff the internet has shown you? You act like a ten-year-old, pretending to be an adult. The plot is abruptly dragged out and choppy.

This protagonist lives a very tiring life; the enemy always strikes first. A moral exemplar...

It's well-written so far. I hate people who, as soon as they go back to ancient times, try to come up with all that theory. They completely ignore the era, background, culture, and power dynamics, and just think they know how to do social practice.

Setting isn't important; writing style is. Books that are overly elaborate and fill with flashy settings are almost always trash. Therefore, there's absolutely nothing wrong with writing it this way. Fantasy novels are actually the hardest to write; writing style and cultural understanding are both indispensable.

She swallowed a dragon ball and didn't give birth for three years before having to undergo a cesarean section. I was fortunate to have a celestial being lift me up, but alas, my slightest force shattered my spirit.

Earlier, the protagonist's master told him to win cleanly and decisively, and the protagonist agreed. However, after proving his strength in the tower, the protagonist became incredibly hesitant and evasive during the competition. And you're only ten years old! Why be so evasive? You should have a "I'm the boss" mentality! You're a sword cultivator; you should have a fearless attitude!

This is so boring. You've not only described the protagonist as a shrewd, worldly-wise young man with a middle-aged mind, but you've also deliberately restricted him, intentionally making the reading experience unpleasant. I regret subscribing.

I've seen many readers talking about water recently, so I'd like to share my personal opinion on this. First, let's look at Yu Youquan's recent actions. In a word, he's been very cautious. Is being cautious wrong? Everyone plays games, right? There are often diamond-based lottery events in games, and everyone knows that these are basically guaranteed to lose money.

Actually, I'd rather the protagonist actually went to the border to join the army, like Yun Qiang, and took a path different from that of cultivators from sects and aristocratic families. The transmigrator's cultivation surpasses that of the natives in terms of imagination, logic, and experience; these are completely invisible, making the protagonist seem like a complete bumpkin.