A Dragon Ball Swallowed Whole

Let's talk about my feelings about reading books recently. One thing that is clear is that this book is not as good as the beginning. I think the main problem is deliberateness. The author is deliberately intensifying conflicts to build the plot. But this kind of deliberate writing is too deliberate. It is not the wings of a butterfly, the gray line of a grass snake, or a domino. It's just blunt, it just wants to break through the southern wall, and it has to use its head to open a door to the southern wall. On the premise that the author's writing is good, this book can barely be read. In these recent chapters, many book friends have said that Qilin is a clown. I guess the author is still a little unconvinced. After all, the plot is someone's brainstorming, and the words are coded one by one... Then let me tell you why these supporting characters have become clowns. First, the author's foreshadowing was high enough and good enough, the character was established, and the expectations were high. Second, the character design is inconsistent. Thirdly, all the supporting characters in this book are helpful and unjust. In other words, profit is the way... In the author's character list, the most outstanding supporting character at present is Qilin's younger brother. Yes, he is the one who chased the protagonist at the beginning, but the protagonist snatched the sword and broke his legs. The gate of heaven was only opened a few inches. Judging from the results, that guy is a pure clown who does not know his own abilities, but do you think how many people hate him? Why? Because he is alive and because he has his own way. But now, what did He Qilin, who was nine levels higher than him, do to the protagonist? What did Jiuxuanmen do again? A group of great practitioners of Taoism do whatever it takes to gain benefits, break promises, and bully the small. In the author's books, there are many descriptions of realms. Let me ask you, how can such a person pass the test of questioning one's heart? It's the level where the main character, Shi Niang, is stuck and can't get up! ? The same is true for He Qilin. What does he lack? He lacks nothing, even if he doesn't read the latest chapter, he recognizes the master of the Juesheng Sword, and Qilin has always been invincible. As a result, a person who has never been defeated hears about the protagonist's deeds... What is this if not a clown? Isn't this destroying the character?

This book was quite interesting at the beginning of the book: Meeting the Dragon and Going to the Mountain, but I picked it up after I became a disciple. As soon as you traveled through time, how could you now realize the world of mortals? Don't you see enough dirty things on the Internet? It's really like a ten-year-old child, acting like a child pretending to be an adult. It pulls the hips straight and drags out the plot.

This protagonist lives a very tiring life. The enemy always strikes first. He is a moral model.

The writing is very good so far. I hate people who want to engage in those theories when they go back to ancient times. They just know how to engage in social practice without looking at the era, background, humanities, and power balance.

The setting is not important, the writing is important. Books with fancy settings that take up a lot of space are 90% rubbish. Therefore, there is no problem in writing this way. Xianxia is actually the most difficult to write, as writing style and culture are both indispensable.

I swallowed a dragon ball and had a caesarean section after being born three years ago I was happy to meet an immortal who supported me, but my strength shattered the heavenly spirit.

Earlier, the protagonist's master asked the protagonist to win cleanly, and the protagonist agreed. After proving his strength in the tower, the protagonist's game was grinding and slick again, and you are only ten years old. Why are you so slick? You should be the boss of the world. The mentality of the third child, you are a swordsman, you should have a courageous mentality, and you are going to compete with the world's best person ten years from now. If you don't perform well, people will just think you are a clown, and you are still hiding it. It's really boring.

It's so boring. You not only describe the protagonist as a slick young man with a middle-aged heart who assesses the situation, but you also deliberately restrict the protagonist and deliberately make the reading process uncomfortable for readers. Regret subscribing

Recently I have seen a lot of readers talk about water, so I would like to express my personal opinion on this. The first thing is what Yu Youquan has done recently. In one word, steady, is steady wrong? Everyone, let's play games. There are often diamond lottery activities in the game, and everyone knows that this is basically a guaranteed loss but no profit. If you are lucky and get 10 times the reward, do you still have the guts to invest 10 times the reward and bet a hundred times? Yu Youquan doesn't need to gamble now, so there is less excitement. The second part is about the Heaven-cutting Sword of the Great Sage. The things that the protagonist obtains are very necessary. The first is the Sage Broken Sword. This is the sword used by the past heads of the Wu family. It is considered the third or even second echelon in the world. It will allow the protagonist to quickly improve in Wanjianhai. Then there is the intention of the Monkey King God, the Great Master. I wonder if you have noticed. The original article mentioned the Thirty-six Heavenly Gangs and the Seventy-Two Earthly Evils, and the precious Qi collected by the protagonist is the Qi of the Earthly Evils. When you think of Sun Wukong, what do you think of? Seventy-two changes! The Monkey King visualization picture must be very useful for the protagonist. After the entire exchange meeting, the protagonist put on a perfect pretense. All the genius disciples from major families were won over, and they also got the valuable treasures they needed, which was a perfect ending. The next step is to collect Juesheng Sword Qi. This process did not cause any disturbance, but this is normal. Zheng family, one sword is passed down forever. Problems will occur in the sword tomb, and it will only be those with low qualifications, so what disturbances will occur? Could it be that the astonishing talent attracted thousands of swords, and the divine sword flew out to recognize its master? But don't forget, the protagonist has already obtained the Houtian Sword, and according to the plot, Houtian Jian should be the strongest sword in the world. Those readers who feel uncomfortable may feel that the book is not exciting or spectacular enough, but that is because you are following it. Because a book cannot be stimulating and climaxing all the time. People who follow the book may long for this, but new readers will start to read the book one after another. For these people, long-term high-intensity stimulation and climax will make people feel boring. The progress of the story must have ups and downs. While appreciating the Dapeng rising with the wind in one day and soaring to 90,000 miles, you must also appreciate the accumulation before the Dapeng takes off. I started reading novels in 2006. Many times I couldn't find a book I liked. I finally found one I like. I hope everyone will stop criticizing the author for being autistic.

In fact, I would rather the protagonist actually went to the border to join the army. Like Yunqiang, he would take a different path from the practitioners of sects and aristocratic families. What makes time travelers practice better than natives is their brains, logic, and knowledge. These are completely invisible. The protagonist is just like a country bumpkin.