A Place in the Jianghu

I initially thought this would be a good book, but the scope the author aims to portray is too vast, too much for an average person like me to handle. All I can say is that in reality, everyone would hope to encounter someone like the protagonist—someone you could sell and still get a loan to spend.

It's not an invincible story, just a rebirth. How can you guarantee that you won't be outmaneuvered after giving away a secret manual and changing the original supporting character's plot? It's basically just the protagonist's halo, right? 😒... Don't try to be clever if you don't know the plot.

Anyway, whatever the author says goes. But author, you need to understand that it's not a matter of plot rationality, but rather that the protagonist's behavior is what makes readers dislike it. Okay, I can't speak for all readers, this is just something I don't like. This only applies to the act of giving away one's ultimate skill without seeking revenge.

The world may change and technology may malfunction, but science will not disappear. If the internal combustion engine fails, the steam engine will still work. As long as water can be boiled, the steam engine will not fail. Then we can enter the steampunk era of multi-engine steam engines.

Sorry, my perspective is too narrow to appreciate the author's lofty vision. I'll leave now.

The preceding content was very well written; the author is undoubtedly a master, their skill level is absolutely top-notch. They've created a protagonist who is both intelligent and has great potential. Because he lacks a suitable platform, he willingly becomes a live-in son-in-law. But what are the last two chapters about?

It was so toxic. They tried to make amends later, but if they really designed it this way, let alone how good the Peng family was and how much they wanted to go through the past, this design was like feeding people a pile of shit, making them feel uncomfortable in all sorts of ways. Did they really have to make it so disgusting?

Show, the hazy beginning is something we veteran readers can slowly read and understand, but newcomers probably won't be able to stand it. I was confused by the first three chapters. You should revise the beginning. If you want good results, you should start sooner rather than later.

Gasoline won't ignite—that's a fundamental change; a gun won't fire a bullet… that's purely mechanical energy. If even that's changed, who's left? Does this change even discriminate? Chemical weapons and electronic malfunctions are one thing, but a bullet not firing is a different story…

This book is definitely not for beginners. It's a turn-off for 99% of readers who don't have a broad knowledge base. And it only updates so little every day. Even a donkey in a production team is better than you. If it doesn't update at least ten times a day, I'm unfollowing!