The Mysterious Inland Sea

The early concept is really good, and the word count of all the bloody stuff later is really impressive. It is recommended that you abandon it directly after jumping into the sea.

Surface: A little boy who picked up garbage for a living was suddenly lucky enough to be adopted by an older sister and lived a happy life. He went on a sea vacation at a specific time and unfortunately fell into the sea. Fortunately, when the little boy fell into the sea, the adult boy appeared on the ferry and formed a happy family with his older sister. Underground: The little boy who unfortunately fell into the sea found himself on a small wooden boat, and it seemed that this place was no longer the earth. There were no stars in the dark sky, and it seemed that it would never light up again. The little boy forgot about the sister who adopted him. Instead, there was a happy memory of a family of four. The boy began his voyage of exploration with the goal of returning to his original world. , Until one day, covered with scars and multiple disabilities, he finally had the ability to achieve his goals. He made a deal with the gods and obtained three wishes. However, he looked at his wife who wanted to help him but was too paranoid and wanted to become a god. He gave his wife her wish to become a normal human being and return to the surface, and gave her wife's wish to become a god to himself. There was one less monster who looked like a human on the ground, one more human who looked like a monster on the surface, and Gao Tianming on the surface also had a big sister.

The beginning and ending are amazing, but the plot of Anna returning to the ground in the middle and late stages is too long. I don't want to see how Anna fights against the Foundation at all.

Please write a review about the shortcomings of the author's writing that limit the development of the plot. Of course there is nothing to say about the imagination, and the design of each copy is also very clever. However, the story itself is flat and straightforward, and the transitions between plot points are blunt. There are a few specific points, which will be discussed separately below. 1. Lack of visual sense. There are a lot of fighting scenes in this article, including many big scenes and one-on-one situations, but the fighting scenes are very limited and stiff. Detailed and straightforward descriptions such as "A vampire bit someone's neck, but unfortunately the vampire's fangs couldn't bite her skin" can be seen everywhere. Intuitively, it gives people the feeling of "pounce, fight back, pounce, fight back, hit the vital point, and win." The turn-based system itself is not a problem, the problem is that there is no sense of urgency. To create an atmosphere of life and death, the simplest idea is to draw readers into the created scene and mobilize all aspects of vision, hearing, smell, and touch. The wind and sound of weapons breaking through the air, interaction with the surrounding environment, interaction with teammates, and even a certain degree of tacit understanding with the enemy. It would be a pity to only write about the attack and defense process. Another formation of the sense of picture is the structure of the scene, as mentioned in the next article. 2. Scene construction. The shaping of the environment seems to be the shortcoming of the author. The story is obviously designed to be scary and interesting, but it lacks a gradually deepening atmosphere. After experiencing a dungeon, when I look back, I can only recall the subtle advancement, and I can't feel the horror. The consequence of inadequate scene creation is that readers cannot feel the pressure the characters are under. For example, during a deep dive, a group of people took an unprecedented "boat" (at least that was what they thought at the time) to the unknown and terrifying realm of God. During the dive, the light gradually disappeared and the fish gradually became rarer. At first, everyone was scared and excited, but as the depth gradually increased, they began to fall silent. The porthole window was as dark as eternal night. Only their trust in Charles supported them in staying calm. This calmness completely collapsed when they saw another submarine sinking in the deep sea. There are too many places where the background setting can be used, but the author just rushes through the beautiful scenes, quickly breaking out of the situation and quickly entering the next script without waiting for the readers to be immersed in exploration. 3. Advance too fast. Fast pace is not a bad thing. The protagonist's environment is destined to be chased by things. However, the reading experience is not that he is chased, but that I, as a reader, am chased by the plot. Before I can even think about it and express my admiration, I am dragged into the next scene. This feeling of being chased directly affected the sense of immersion. I didn't feel pressure, so naturally I didn't understand why the protagonist became more and more crazy. This is the protagonist's attitude towards the Pope. He has indeed been affected. His distrust may seem unreasonable, but it is actually a gradual and reasonable paranoia. Everyone will have more or less problems in a high-pressure environment. The problem is that I have not experienced high pressure, and I have not experienced the fear of dying at any time, being deformed, and falling into madness. Of course, I cannot understand this kind of distrust and paranoia. The pace can be slower, and slower still, to give readers some time. 4. It's just my own thoughts. The relationship between brothers is beautifully created, but love and family affection are too weak. Brothers have been together through thick and thin, with one look in their eyes, and Bandage guides him in every possible way in the maze of murals, risking his life for Charles's wish. When Charles from the two worlds exchanged, Bandage was the first to say that you are not him, and Charles was also very interesting, desperately trying to save him. On the other hand, Anna Elizabeth and Winky are both tool people. They invite the tool people out when they are in trouble and invite them back when nothing happens. Even Lily in the later period was reduced to a tool person because she only had two functions: "commanding mice" and throwing them out to make bombs. I think the fundamental issue is still a matter of positioning. The brothers have dreams and loyalty, and of course they are bound to the protagonist. If other characters want to move forward with the protagonist and stay consistent, they can only rely on love. Anna loving Charles wholeheartedly is the basic setting and is not mentioned. Elizabeth is like a paternal friend who can only meet and hang out occasionally without deep feelings. Margaret has gone through all kinds of difficulties and dangers, and while inspiring the family to revive, she still loves Charles. Even after Lily lost her obsession with returning home, the new excuse she could find to move forward together was her ignorant love for Charles. Not necessarily...

It took me about a week to finish reading the book Mysterious Earthsea. The atmosphere of the whole book is very depressing, and many of the settings in it refer to the Sunless Sea. The whole story just forms a closed loop. However, there is still one hole left unfilled, which is where the photos of the sister in the protagonist's phone came from. The other holes have been filled in. Personally, I feel that the most exciting characters are Lily, Twinkle, and Tuba, the three supporting characters, which run through the entire story. Especially Lily, she is truly the light of the earth and sea.

It must have been almost half a year since I finished reading Earthsea. At that time, Lin Daogui was about to finish, so I came to catch up on this book, and it took me a week or two to finish it. This book has great stamina. I can still recall many wonderful moments in Earthsea, such as New Territories City, the Pope dragging the God of Light, and Twinkle's Wishes. Earthsea is my personal favorite novel in recent years. Many people will say that watching Earthsea will make people feel hopeless and unbearable. The emotional plot is toxic, but I feel that the flaws are not covered up. Maybe it is because I just prefer to watch this kind of protagonist fighting in a desperate environment, resisting under huge pressure, and in endless I struggled with the puzzles, but in the end I was able to save the day with great difficulty. It had a strong sense of oppression. It made my blood boil and shocked me more than many cool novels. I also had the same feeling in Orbital Immortals. I first felt it when I was in junior high school watching Infinite Horror. I hope that more people can read the book Earthsea. Those who want to give up the book midway will persist. I also wish Foxtail's new book a good success.

Its choice of words and sentences is not as mature as Daogui, its rhythm is not as sophisticated as Utopia, and there are even so many typos that extremely dissuaded me from being a book listener (laugh During the process, I would lament the procrastination of the plot and disgust the authenticity of the person shown by the protagonist, but when I saw the ending, I would still sigh, how much What a great story, like a perfect circle. But the reason why this book didn't explode is probably because of what many readers think is toxic and Foxtail's own immaturity when writing the book. But for me, many of the toxic points are the best settings. For example, the heroine Anna, I have been thinking about it for a long time. I have thought about a similar setting before. The heroine will always only love the hero. It is the ultimate love, the perfect love. It is born out of love for the hero. Because their love gives each other an anchor, therefore, for everything that happens between them, whether it is sacrificing a million lives or quarreling over their daughter, for Worrying about each other's future can make this kind of love more concrete in front of me. Therefore, Anna is my favorite heroine in Huwei's works I have written so much, but there is nothing I really want to say. I just lament the end of this journey and be confused about the beginning of the next journey.

I've finished reading it, and I'll give some guidance to the newbies. This book has heavy elements of genre (here's the key point), so it's not very acceptable, so go into it with caution. Is the author among the first 200? Or around 100 chapters, in order to expand the plot and describe the strength of the characters, I try to introduce a clear classification of combat power, which leads to a sense of collapse in combat power in the subsequent paragraphs, which may make you want to give up. However, it probably only lasted for less than a few dozen chapters, and it was OK once you read it. It did not affect the subsequent plots and battles at all. Overall, the plot of the book is compact. In the later stages, there are some discussions about human nature, divinity and animality, as well as complex descriptions of time and space (it must be said here) One sentence, the author writes very well about this type of text, which is one of the highlights of the article) Of course, this type of text will inevitably lead to people being stabbed π_π later, but the full text can be said to be very good at digging holes and filling holes, concluding the big world view, and logical reasoning. I strongly recommend that you finish reading it~

So, everyone must remember to have breakfast🤪

I haven't read Dao Wei yet, but today I finished Mysterious Earth Sea, which ranks as the top one of my favorite novels. There are two things I like most. The first is the romanticism of this book, such as the majestic imagination and the gloomy tone that cannot conceal the brilliance of humanity; the other is the feeling that the plots are interlocking, connected from beginning to end, and tightly integrated. The degree of completion is very high. I often browse in the vast world of words. There are so many beautiful stories that I have only read a few of them. Some stories are like soft threads, and some are like hard prismatic stones. It was the first time I saw this piece. It was round and full but indescribable, and it was thought-provoking.

This book is really well written. Such a high-level final battle cannot be defeated + the ending will not end badly. The characters are basically round, and the holes that need to be filled are basically filled. Twinkle-1 Lily-1 8/10

This book is too hard. When I read Chapter 60, I thought it was about to end. If a good book is a delicious little cake with a balance of oil and water, then this book is like a "desert biscuit" that turns into biscuit crumbs when you eat it, sticks to your mouth, and spreads everywhere in your throat. Even the breath you exhale is powder.

The setting and development are very good, the plot echoes back and forth and the ending is complete. The characters of the supporting characters in the short stories are well portrayed, and the development of branch plots can often extend and explain the main plot. Sometimes the main plot of the protagonist is a little vague, and the psychological transformation of the character is not natural enough, but the flaws are not concealed. All in all, it is a very good novel of the genre, especially compared to the conventional novels from the current starting point. The plot is really amazing.

I personally think that "Mysterious Earthsea" is the best grammy online novel in China. Whether it is the description of the environment of Earthsea or the character portrayal of the protagonist and supporting characters, they are all excellent. Basically every character can be remembered (the supporting characters are not just the protagonist's background), and the whole book is basically non-toxic and has very deep foreshadowing. If you like grammy, you don't have to hesitate to read it.

This book is the best Christian text I have ever read that suits my taste. It is different from other novels with similar themes. As the article repeatedly mentions "no one can save others" and "everyone is suffering", the protagonist has no golden finger. He cannot upgrade to become invincible and powerful like other novels, and there is nothing that can guarantee that he will not die or go crazy. He will always be small in front of God. This kind of despair and smallness is the essence. The belief that supports him is to return to the "earth", so the protagonist's recklessness and madness are completely understandable. Even if he wants to stabilize his development, what qualifications does an ordinary person have to slowly cultivate power? Moreover, death in the eyes of the protagonist may be just a chance to travel again, although it is very slim. I think the writing style of this book is also very good. Writing style does not necessarily have to be delicate to be considered good. It is also good writing style to be able to build a framework with three strokes and two strokes, and to write out the rewritten things. What also makes me more satisfied is that the author has not been able to create a power system. He occasionally writes it to give readers an intuitive feeling. No matter how strong a human being is, it is nothing, and if the power of "god" can be described, it will not be called "unknowable" Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

Good book. My personal rating is 4.5. The missing 0.5 Is due to typos. I almost stopped reading halfway through. There are so many typos. I feel like the end is a bit rushed. I just want to know about West's life. I should publish a separate book. It will definitely be magnificent😀

After reading Chapter 115, I ordered the rest of the book in one go. It's really well written. It's even better than Lord of Mysteries. It's so to my liking. It's a pity that such a good book is not popular. Come on, author. Thank you for bringing us such a good work 🤭🤭

This book attracted me in the first few chapters. A reliable but crazy captain had already given up everything on the way to pursue the surface, and only one obsession remained; Hope Island carries all of Charles' hopes, like a straw in front of a drowning man. Charles grasps it, but finds that it is really just a straw. The unbearable hope turns into despair. Everything he does is meaningless. He is fed up, fed up with the dark sea of ​​earth, fed up with the mystery that brings boundless fear, maybe death is his best destination; Richard disappeared, and they were one. He knew why Charles was crazy, but he was not afraid of death, because he might not be able to go back, and might never see his family again. With a trace of reluctance, he survived again, even if it was just one glance, he just wanted to confirm, even if home was no longer home Having died once, you can often figure out a lot of things. Charles is no longer impatient, and he has survived for more than ten years, so what if it takes a few more years. In this kind of world, where personal combat power is infinitely reduced, who can survive? Maybe the protagonist with the halo will not die, which is both a blessing and a tragedy. Some people are not dead, because the author cannot create all the characters and can only keep some people, but we have to face a reality... Lili, she is that reality, the sun will eventually go down, and the flame will eventually go out...

Since the author has put pen to paper and has been writing for such a long time, it proves that he will not change his work easily. How do you think the novel was written? Could it be that the author carefully designed each plot? Although there are such parts, they do not account for a large proportion. Most of the time when creating, you have to follow your own feelings. If you can't write the upgrade flow but you have to forcefully adjust it to the upgrade flow, then you will write the worst kind of white text. Writing an article not only requires you to be able to pick up a pen, but also requires you to have knowledge in all aspects. Without the support of relevant knowledge, what you like is just superficial words, not a story at all, and it cannot support the characters you write. Every decision in the mystery, every unbearability, every cowardice, and every passion are all sketching out those small characters. They seem useless, but they add a gloomy background to the mysterious world, and complement each other with the protagonist who is biased towards human nature. And these would be without Squid's research on the Elizabethan period in England, historical research, overall world view and occult knowledge. Just like the words of the Ascetic Order of Morse, people are not chasing knowledge, but knowledge is chasing people. To paraphrase it, it becomes that people are not creating stories, but stories are seeping out of the author through the hands of the author, getting closer to reality and farther away from fantasy. All in all, there are no diamonds, no porcelain work, novices, but there are excellent ones. They are just different styles, but the author's skills are worthy of praise. If the author does not have relevant knowledge, he will not be able to write a good upgrade flow. I am also a small-time writer, and I would like to dedicate this to all writers who persist and refuse to write profanely without pre-knowledge. As long as you write, the grandest scenes and the most beautiful people in your dreams will become a reality. Ph'nglui mglw'nafh Cthulhu R'lyeh wgah'nagl fhtagn PS: It is suggested that if the author has time, he can consider learning more about the ship, such as what kind of canvas should be propped up at different wind speeds when sailing, precautions for attacking with ship's side artillery, the use of the compass, food and interpersonal relationships on the ship. He can also write a story about a small character from a different perspective to highlight the big background and lay out some related knowledge. PPS: It's been a long time since I've seen a book that appeals to my taste. Brother Fox, please don't get too carried away. You'd rather publish a refined version every day than give up on quality!

In the end, was the clown mask hole left unfilled? Inexplicably, I followed him all the way, and he was extremely loyal. The only time I made a request, I sent it without telling him the specific content. The mask here obviously has self-awareness, which is completely different from the split personality mask in Earthsea; It makes sense to say that this mask is caused by Charles dialing Anna's timeline to help her after he became a god, but why is it in the form of a clown? Why did the clown mask say that after success, he wanted to make a request to Anna?

The emotion after reading it is one of relief and emotion. It is so well written.

{"TopicId":"571343189848424448","TopicName":"Lord of Mysteries"}{"TopicId":"571339524140040192","TopicName" :"Cthulhu"} After reading it, I remembered a piece of lyrics, "The most sensational movie plots say that love can transcend life and death." It is a knife, very knife, very cruel, very tragic, Gao Zhimin is very tragic, and all the pain is carried by the protagonist. I intercepted a passage from the finale: Remember! Zhao Jiajia loves Gao Zhiming forever! Besides! You promised me! Must come back. I burst into tears. I really went crazy in the later stage and felt like I was dead. Everyone was in the circle and had never gone out. Damn it, I just stopped reading halfway through the suggestions for new entrants. It was too uncomfortable. Although they didn't die in the end, they still couldn't bear it. It was an indescribable feeling of discomfort The whole thing was a big tragedy, woo woo hoo, I cried to death ButWatch below b>: This is how I felt when I read Chapter 800: Awesome, awesome, a book without a villain. It is really difficult for you to make a choice between your family and the world. From the author's pen, you can feel the protagonist's inner struggle. Family, friends, the family of Earthsea, and the fate of all mankind are in their own hands. Which side to choose is a huge problem,,, and the foundation does not They are bad guys. They are real heroes. They have always abided by their oaths and fought to protect mankind from abnormal intrusions. I like their oath very much. Is there any book friend who has intercepted it and left it in my comment? I didn't read it carefully at the time. It was only in the middle and later stages that I realized their greatness. Those who sacrificed their lives for mankind are worthy of respect. Another thing is that this novel is quite slow and most people can't read it. Go, just like the mystery, it includes navigation, weirdness, mythology, Cthulhu, and some knives. The protagonist is also crazy. I don't think he can compete with the madness. The author's writing is very good. I read Li Huowang's book before I came here to read this one. It is also a masterpiece, at least I think it is now. I will tell you my detailed feelings after I finish it. I remember that a book friend found the foundation and made a comment when I made an oath, but I can't find it

It's a very good book, and it's very immersive to read. As soon as I finished reading it, I felt like I still had something to say and didn't want it to end. I haven't had this feeling in a long time.

The best book written by Ke Xiwei on the Internet. Crazy Amway. Show it to your classmates. It will definitely become popular. If this book is not popular, it will be unforgivable. Author, you are the best.

This hole is filled in beautifully. It is the time relationship between the earth sea and the surface. Many of the author's settings and details can confirm each other, and the logic is correct and self-justifying. Because the time between Earthsea and the surface is opposite, one day on the surface is equal to ten years in reverse of Earthsea, or ten years in Earthsea is equal to one day in reverse on earth's surface. In other words, as Charles continues to grow up on the surface, time on the Earth Sea is constantly regressing at the same time; while Charles on Earth Sea is constantly looking for a way back, time on the surface is constantly regressing at the same time.                                                                                                                       may be put simply, when the surface time is running normally, the earth and sea time will continue to retreat; when the local sea time is running normally, the surface time will continue to retreat. But the surface of the earth retreats for one day at a time, and the sea of ​​​​the earth retreats for 10 years at a time. The day when the surface of the earth and the Earth Sea were connected. The surface time was the day Charles crossed over when he was 15 years old, but the Earth Sea time was the Earth Sea that was still barren 2000 years ago. As for why Charles came to the surface after 2000, this may be related to the passage that sent Charles to the Earth Sea, and later Charles wanted to reverse the entire Earth Sea time, which may also be related to this. (This passage is very important and may cause time confusion, because the Earth Sea that the young Charles reaches from the Earth's surface through this passage is the Earth Sea 2000 years later, but the god Charles returns from the Earth Sea through this passage to the Earth's surface thousands of years later. The author should explain this later. For details on the passage issue, see Chapter 1107). The following is my evidence:  It is known that Charles first appeared in Earthsea as a teenager, about 15 years old, and Gao Zhiming, who Anna found on the surface, was about 9 years old. Going back from 15 years old to 9 years old is about 6 years, 6×365=2190. In other words, after the development of Earthsea for more than 2,000 years, the surface of the earth will return from when Charles was 15 years old to what it was like when he was 9 years old. Why is it around 6 years old? The following paragraph can explain it. An important supporting point is that Winky was placed by Charles in the Earthsea before 2000. The Earthsea at this time was still barren, but Winky lived from before 2000 to the Earthsea civilization after 2000, which can show that the time of Earthsea civilization was around 2000. This explains why little Charles and Charles when he time traveled were about 6 years apart? Because 6×365=2190, the Earthsea civilization was only about 2000 years old, so the difference must only be about 6 years. No wonder 005 said that your surface still exists when he first made a wish to Charles. However, after Charles became a god, he went through the passage that the young boy Charles passed when he first came to Earthsea (did the passage cause time confusion?) And went to the surface only to find that the surface was deserted and not the surface where he lived at all. But at this time, Charles heard Anna's call for sacrifice and finally discovered that the time when Charles returned to the surface from Earthsea more than 2000 years later was Eventually, however, the surface of Anna's time is in the past, with a gap of thousands of years (see Chapter 1107 for details). If you want to return from the Earth Sea to the surface that Charles knows, you must first rewind the time of the Earth Sea. Returning to the surface from the Earth Sea through the passage more than 2,000 years ago is the surface that Charles knows. However, the surface at this time has gone back 6.7 Years, so the Charles that Anna found when she went back was still around 9 years old. I typed so much, maybe there are some mistakes in the details, but I think my general idea should be right, it's not too much to ask for more refinement 😁{"NickName":"Foxtail's Pen","UserId":316896520}

A masterpiece, a true masterpiece, a book that surpasses 99% of the starting point

This is the story of a man who gave up everything and faced terror but also returned to modern society to be a social beast 🙂

Touch a Lily, she is so cute

1

If I can finish the book at a high level, this will be the number one Cthulhu book in my mind. At present, the world view of Cthulhu is better than that of Lord of Mysteries (personal opinion, not to start a fight, reading is like aesthetics, everyone is different, I am really afraid to say that I am cheating). But now the main line is to go home, but I just can't imagine how this main line can hold up until the end without collapsing. Chaos, fear, unknown, despair, powerlessness... The presentation is really good. To put it bluntly, if it could be completed and the protagonist failed in the end because of facing the unknown, it would be amazing. I hope the author will not end up like this, otherwise he will definitely be scolded to death, hahaha