In the Vast Darkness

My name is Vita Dzolfan, 22 years old. Lives in Glink Walk, Hereford, single. I work for the Hereford Investigation Bureau and work overtime every now and then. I don't smoke and I only drink lightly. I must sleep for 8 hours every day. Before going to bed, I can't afford milk because I am too poor, but I will do the "Seventh Set of Radio Gymnastics" that the emperor brought back from China for 20 minutes.

Let me talk about what I think is confusing about this novel That is, Vita's combat power From the author's description, Vita was a policeman when he was an ordinary person, with good shooting and fighting skills, and then he became a favored person, and his favored abilities were mainly the fourth-dimensional pocket and the arbitrary door. Then let's take a look at the powerful enemies that Vita currently faces The knights of the Shelley family, who have been professionally trained since childhood, have rich fighting experience and powerful favoring abilities The Elf Noble Princess (disabled version), has more than a hundred years of experience, a true noble, and has come through bloody storms Marilyn, a veteran investigator, a veteran favorer, very rich combat experience Experience and powerful ability of favor Phoenix, the elf assassin, dares to assassinate the great being Then, I don't say that Vita suppresses it completely, at least it is 50-50 But this is not a Long Aotian novel, Vita is just a mortal policeman at best. We do not show the ability of favor, but compare the police and knights. Who does the audience think is stronger? Not to mention that Vita is still new to abilities, and his abilities currently do not directly improve his combat effectiveness, but mainly assist his fighting and shooting It feels very outrageous. Vita has no growth process at all, and is also inexplicably powerful. He can fight back and forth against any enemy he faces

Updated so quickly! Have you written the paper? Has the design been done? Have you found the references? Does the model know how to do it? 😏

Let me ask you a question. We are also collecting fingers. Why choose fingers instead of toes (if the target is a woman such as an elf, governor, or bishop, will there be a different choice) Toes (material taken from the Internet) Fingers

A dry humorous fan suddenly came up with a scene. When the lion overturned his car, the imperial city guard said that if you were really lucky, the car would not overturn. The lion replied: "At least no one was hurt this time. Last time Abyss drove himself. He was seriously injured after being crushed under the carriage and is still bedridden at home." The guard frowned and asked the lion in confusion: "Isn't the favor of the old man Abyss a prophecy? How come he didn't even anticipate this kind of bad luck involving himself and avoid it in advance? " The lion spread his hands and said helplessly to the guard: "I asked him the same thing at the time. In his original words, I must be able to predict that after driving a car for a lifetime, an experienced driver like me will suddenly encounter a horse loss one day. , Causing a traffic accident, and the car was crushed, and I was seriously injured. Then I have predicted that an experienced driver like me, who has been driving for a lifetime, would suddenly lose control of his horse one day, causing a traffic accident, and was crushed by the car, and he was seriously injured. "

The first 100 chapters are very exciting, I don't know how other people feel, but it's 90% okay to take the starting point before chapter 100. Now that I'm reading chapter 183, I really can't stand it anymore. I'm too tired and can't stand it. The forest chapter is too long and confusing. I don't know if I'll remember it in the future and be willing to read it.

The first volume depicts Fu Bo very well. In the second volume of Big Forest, there are countless coincidences in each chapter. Like Xiaoqiang, the original villains cannot be killed no matter what the coincidences are. And there is an ordinary man named Trazor who is killed by a single bullet, repeatedly jumping between two great beings and a bunch of favored ones? I've fast forwarded to chapter twenty, and we're still fighting. Goodbye.

When I saw Chapter 172, I really couldn't hold on. Everything was fine up to this point, but the part in the forest was really uncomfortable, so I turned off the butterfly part. Various accidents delayed me for countless chapters. When the newly born me of the protagonist was finally useful and wanted to kill the elf, the butterfly was turned off instead. And our elf lady happened to escape again, not to mention this section, the protagonist group (five people) plus the villains (three) and the three monster villagers in the middle, plus a white-eyed wolf girl, a wolf grandmother and a tax collector, a full 14 lives They fought to the death until the butterfly exploded, but no one died. (The author of Monster Villager did not explain it, but the few people who were my caregivers did not die, and most likely they did not die either.) The knight almost touched the old nun's ear with his gun, but in the end he still missed the target, and the old nun did nothing. No; the elf could have killed the little Loli honestly; but she was so promiscuous that she wanted to be seduced by the heroine; the old nun could trade with the protagonist, but she suddenly didn't want to die and switched to defense. The protagonist's splinter almost killed the elf, but ended up shutting down. The butterfly exploded at the critical moment, and he didn't respond. It's okay for this kind of plot to happen once or twice, but when it happens so frequently in these dozen chapters, it's simply torturing your readers. I'm not even talking about the extremely frequent "coincidence" plots. Thinking about it carefully, it seems that the protagonist has never killed a named villain. Doro was beaten to death by Fubo, Count Shelley was also beaten to death by Fubo, and Fubo committed suicide... In short, the forest section is definitely a big deal for people who are not patient enough. I only hope that I can remember to read this book in the future. I hope the author will not write such plots in the future. I wish you better and better results in the future.

Once the protagonist completes the operation, the enemies will be upgraded, the protagonist will be downgraded, and the biggest gains will be taken away by passers-by. Even the orange cat belongs to someone else.

I didn't expect that the author could tell such a wonderful, interesting and complete story on the front line of the construction site. The whole narrative is indeed very smooth and concise, better than many famous novels on the list. Hey, I have been tortured to the point where I can't even play the game. I wish you well and come ashore soon.