In the Vast Darkness

What I like most about this book is the free-flowing imagination, which is incomparable to so-called popular articles that use a framework with little novelty and squeeze in a few fashionable elements. The "steam magic high technology" that far exceeds the technology of the earth's industrial revolution can build dozens of cities, can transform the human body, and can build rockets. It is very grassy, ​​but what is needed is this fantasy flavor; The battle has always been very neat, and it is not about upgrading the wooden stick to beat the big lobster The author has a very strict narrative attitude in online articles. I mean the big structure of the whole book, and many foreshadowings can be reasonably taken care of after several volumes As for the shortcomings? The shortcoming is that there are too many things that are not explained in the ending. This reason is not sufficient in the Grammar series. Moreover, it doesn't matter if the background of the evil god is not explained in the Grammar series. However, several plots that serve as the "initial driving force" of a large section/volume of the plot are a bit... Too casual? For example, why did Vita and others cause so many things in the big forest? Oh, it was because Vita was accidentally bitten by a butterfly because of her involvement in Terra. Why are there two so long plots related to invitations? Because Weta wanted to kill a wave of desperadoes in the valley and make a name for himself. And what happened to Locke's corruption that led to Ridley's revenge? Sometimes an author will say: I have explained the general reason in a few sentences, but I will not describe it in detail and let you, the readers, figure it out. Although I read it in one go after finishing the book, I was confused sometimes and needed to think about it to remember how he started this plot. Finally, it's hard to imagine that this is the author's debut work. If I could write like this in my first work, I would probably laugh out loud.

The first hundred chapters are wonderful Really wonderful 90% of the book exceeds the starting point The weird and wonderful descriptions of the steampunk world are very good, better than the mysterious (just referring to the weird and weird) The other side of the forest is really a bit confusing for me Scene jumps, big fights, and the shortcomings pointed out by other readers in the book reviews all exist objectively. The whole plot is too long and there is no buffer (even if it is important) The foreshadowing in the plot was suppressed first and then raised, but it has been suppressed for too long It's okay to have an unbeatable villain. After all, there are mysterious powers and evil gods in the world, and it is impossible for a villain to be defeated easily But There are too many coincidences, all put together, I am really speechless=_= Now that I have seen the flashback, I will put it aside for now. I hope there will be a climax. Come on, author

The plot is good, please update!

My name is Vita Dzolfan, 22 years old. Lives in Glink Walk, Hereford, single. I work for the Hereford Investigation Bureau and work overtime every now and then. I don't smoke and I only drink lightly. I must sleep for 8 hours every day. Before going to bed, I can't afford milk because I am too poor, but I will do the "Seventh Set of Radio Gymnastics" that the emperor brought back from China for 20 minutes.

Let me talk about what I think is confusing about this novel That is, Vita's combat power From the author's description, Vita was a policeman when he was an ordinary person, with good shooting and fighting skills, and then he became a favored person, and his favored abilities were mainly the fourth-dimensional pocket and the arbitrary door. Then let's take a look at the powerful enemies that Vita currently faces The knights of the Shelley family, who have been professionally trained since childhood, have rich fighting experience and powerful favoring abilities The Elf Noble Princess (disabled version), has more than a hundred years of experience, a true noble, and has come through bloody storms Marilyn, a veteran investigator, a veteran favorer, very rich combat experience Experience and powerful ability of favor Phoenix, the elf assassin, dares to assassinate the great being Then, I don't say that Vita suppresses it completely, at least it is 50-50 But this is not a Long Aotian novel, Vita is just a mortal policeman at best. We do not show the ability of favor, but compare the police and knights. Who does the audience think is stronger? Not to mention that Vita is still new to abilities, and his abilities currently do not directly improve his combat effectiveness, but mainly assist his fighting and shooting It feels very outrageous. Vita has no growth process at all, and is also inexplicably powerful. He can fight back and forth against any enemy he faces

Updated so quickly! Have you written the paper? Has the design been done? Have you found the references? Does the model know how to do it? 😏

Let me ask you a question. We are also collecting fingers. Why choose fingers instead of toes (if the target is a woman such as an elf, governor, or bishop, will there be a different choice) Toes (material taken from the Internet) Fingers

A dry humorous fan suddenly came up with a scene. When the lion overturned his car, the imperial city guard said that if you were really lucky, the car would not overturn. The lion replied: "At least no one was hurt this time. Last time Abyss drove himself. He was seriously injured after being crushed under the carriage and is still bedridden at home." The guard frowned and asked the lion in confusion: "Isn't the favor of the old man Abyss a prophecy? How come he didn't even anticipate this kind of bad luck involving himself and avoid it in advance? " The lion spread his hands and said helplessly to the guard: "I asked him the same thing at the time. In his original words, I must be able to predict that after driving a car for a lifetime, an experienced driver like me will suddenly encounter a horse loss one day. , Causing a traffic accident, and the car was crushed, and I was seriously injured. Then I have predicted that an experienced driver like me, who has been driving for a lifetime, would suddenly lose control of his horse one day, causing a traffic accident, and was crushed by the car, and he was seriously injured. "

The first 100 chapters are very exciting, I don't know how other people feel, but it's 90% okay to take the starting point before chapter 100. Now that I'm reading chapter 183, I really can't stand it anymore. I'm too tired and can't stand it. The forest chapter is too long and confusing. I don't know if I'll remember it in the future and be willing to read it.

The first volume depicts Fu Bo very well. In the second volume of Big Forest, there are countless coincidences in each chapter. Like Xiaoqiang, the original villains cannot be killed no matter what the coincidences are. And there is an ordinary man named Trazor who is killed by a single bullet, repeatedly jumping between two great beings and a bunch of favored ones? I've fast forwarded to chapter twenty, and we're still fighting. Goodbye.

When I saw Chapter 172, I really couldn't hold on. Everything was fine up to this point, but the part in the forest was really uncomfortable, so I turned off the butterfly part. Various accidents delayed me for countless chapters. When the newly born me of the protagonist was finally useful and wanted to kill the elf, the butterfly was turned off instead. And our elf lady happened to escape again, not to mention this section, the protagonist group (five people) plus the villains (three) and the three monster villagers in the middle, plus a white-eyed wolf girl, a wolf grandmother and a tax collector, a full 14 lives They fought to the death until the butterfly exploded, but no one died. (The author of Monster Villager did not explain it, but the few people who were my caregivers did not die, and most likely they did not die either.) The knight almost touched the old nun's ear with his gun, but in the end he still missed the target, and the old nun did nothing. No; the elf could have killed the little Loli honestly; but she was so promiscuous that she wanted to be seduced by the heroine; the old nun could trade with the protagonist, but she suddenly didn't want to die and switched to defense. The protagonist's splinter almost killed the elf, but ended up shutting down. The butterfly exploded at the critical moment, and he didn't respond. It's okay for this kind of plot to happen once or twice, but when it happens so frequently in these dozen chapters, it's simply torturing your readers. I'm not even talking about the extremely frequent "coincidence" plots. Thinking about it carefully, it seems that the protagonist has never killed a named villain. Doro was beaten to death by Fubo, Count Shelley was also beaten to death by Fubo, and Fubo committed suicide... In short, the forest section is definitely a big deal for people who are not patient enough. I only hope that I can remember to read this book in the future. I hope the author will not write such plots in the future. I wish you better and better results in the future.

Once the protagonist completes the operation, the enemies will be upgraded, the protagonist will be downgraded, and the biggest gains will be taken away by passers-by. Even the orange cat belongs to someone else.

I didn't expect that the author could tell such a wonderful, interesting and complete story on the front line of the construction site. The whole narrative is indeed very smooth and concise, better than many famous novels on the list. Hey, I have been tortured to the point where I can't even play the game. I wish you well and come ashore soon.

If you have any ideas to complain about Qiuqiu readers, please leave them! !

After reading Chapter 66, to be honest, I thought it was outrageous that this book could make the main character, a person who just joined the book, work so hard, as if everyone else was dead.

I can feel that the author is a JO fan. He has to write all the battles at 55 and fight alone. The creativity is very good, but there are too many bugs. Of course, even Araki has many bugs, but I still don't like to see this kind of unreasonable personal heroism. I hope to have my own creative characteristics.

In this situation in another world, is the care of corpses so lax? Is it a big deal that the body of a big shot was made into a puppet? Bishop Amanda's relatives and friends won't get to the bottom of it?

I can only say that the creativity is not bad. There are too many confusing behaviors of the characters in the book. The most important thing is that I read the governor as if he was in control, but it didn't work. It was like the TMKuomintang, a civil war where insiders fought outsiders. This character is disgustingly created. There is also this sand-traveling Emperor, who has no role as a time traveler at all, and instead makes the world worse. I haven't seen the forest chapter that is criticized by most people, and I can't stand it. The author still has ideas. I look forward to the growth of the author in the next book.

The writing is quite good, the chapters are compact and the writing is online, but some characters are very confusing, such as the governor, she watched the evil gods fighting, she turned a blind eye when the elf ran away, and she was immediately locked up for the third time. The protagonist group kept wiping her butt, but the nurse also ran away. , Looks very capable of spying on the whole city, but in fact, if you are not fooled by others, you will only become a quarrel. You still use the protagonist group as a tool to help you deal with so many beginnings and tails in a month without giving you any benefits. If I were the protagonist, I would just cccp. The Emperor is also a time traveler. He has changed things from top to bottom. The Governor monitors the whole city. Doesn't she know about the labor issues? She is the Emperor's lover. The Emperor must also know that. The Emperor doesn't care. After living a lifetime, he would be at the level of Louis XIV. In his later years, he would make a fool of himself because of his longevity and embarrass the time traveler. Anyway, this governor is like a fool who got rich from heaven. He ignores labor issues and ignores religious issues. He has a way of bullying the knights and investigators in the family. He pretends to be dead when the evil god comes. He relies on his subordinates to wield the church's life-cutting sword to survive. He is killed by the elves and the guards don't even give a shit. To be honest, as long as a normal person would put this elf under house arrest with a gentler approach, or if a more aggressive person would arrest the elf directly and grab the card first to deal with the cult problem, no, she released the elf and killed so many people and then after the protagonist wiped her ass, she still kicked the ball to the nobles. Disgusting investigator, she also caused the subsequent problems herself. She did all the stupid things she could do. It's really disgusting.

The battle in the big forest later felt draggy, the protagonist didn't know what he was doing, and several characters popped up at once, which was a bit messy. The battle that should have been tense became scattered and boring.

Really, whether a novel is good or not cannot be entirely determined by qualifications. It is no worse than those on the list. I recommend "Mysterious Earthsea", which also has endless darkness and despair wrapped in an interesting appearance.

Forced steam is a bit low, and cannonballs can explode. There are also steam pistols, steam cannons...

I saw 172, please give me a break As of Chapter 293, among the elf princess, nurse, Philome, Luther, "ordinary little girl" Terra, wild knight Gabriel, tax collector Guy, have any of these villains who have been resurrected through various accidents successfully died? Will Madam Butterfly "survive" and continue to cause harm?

The writing is good and the world view is quite interesting. But these two points are the only thing that can be read. Because I can't create new characters, no one dies. I just cheat when I can't think of a reasonable plot. It's true that the evil god has this ability, but no one can't tell that he wrote it like this because of his lack of writing skills, right?

. . . As a newcomer, the work is good, at least it doesn't feel like there's anything personal about it that's confusing my mind. . . . But I had a lot of thoughts while watching it. After a while, my poor brain only had one thought: I feel like my teammates are trying to trick me. . Um, it's not a trap either? Anyway, it's too ridiculous to force the villain to live because of various "coincidences", right? For example, in Chapter 160.161, In the part of the plot against Madame Butterfly, the male protagonist was swallowed by darkness and talked to another self. Marilyn is just fucking watching next to the hero? You are a fighting faction in the team (after all, I didn't find her using her brain very much, she is usually only responsible for fighting, and she cheated the male protagonist), Joseph is about to be beaten to death! If you are still looking at the male protagonist, is it useful? The nun looks better than you, at least she knows how to heal. It was only after the male protagonist woke up that he started to help. If the emotional male protagonist wakes up later, you will be buried with him, right?

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The writing is good, the world view is interesting, and the back-and-forth battles are well written, but the plot is so disgusting. It was all an unreasonable coincidence, the villains were all let go, the main characters were abused, their dicks were licked, their teammates were pigs, and the protagonist was led along throughout the whole process. Step on all the poison spots. If you want to make money, it is not recommended to come to Qidian. Try physical books.

I've almost finished reading it. I can only say that the author is awesome and writes people. I love it. I love it.

After reading it, I read the postscript. The author's understanding of "Cthulhu" is indeed the kind I want to see. I hope the author can write some postscript to tell the story of the main characters.

That's weird. Is there any reference for this book? Why are there always terms in this chapter that I don't understand? Can you tell me so I can take a look?