The Curse of Lies

How to say?? How to say? As expected of Mr. Mom, I wonder why it is not popular? This is not much better than what some great writers have done. Speed ​​update

Let me emphasize first that the book is very beautiful, very very beautiful! The author writes very carefully! I'm not here to find fault, I just want to write down my thoughts objectively. Please note that the following content has no significant impact on the beauty of this book. The author's beautiful writing style and perfect story line completely conquered me. It's just that I am a textualist and rigorous person, and I feel a sense of dissonance with the author's worldview. This sense of dissonance is similar to that of "Tokyo Ghoul". I will give you a few examples and hope that the author can write better and better. 1. The sense of inconsistency in the fighting style. Humanity has been fighting against mutations for so long, but humans have no fighting system. No team was even formed to deal with the mutation. For example, when killing the ghost baby at the beginning, Miss Yan and the old man both went in one after another and were injured. If the other party was a little more powerful, wouldn't they die? When fighting against the level 2 plant mutation later, Captain Wang died. I really don't understand. To deal with unknown mutations, it's not natural to form a team with comprehensive functions. A complete team must have mental, physical, and special ability users, as well as an experienced team leader (mentor). Otherwise, there will always be unclear situations like in the author's novels, where people are rashly sent in. When it comes to delivering food, the government has run out of all the people with abilities. The more they deliver, the less they deliver. The more they deliver, the less likely they are to solve the problem. Aren't high-level ability users just grown up at lower levels? Even though the higher-level ability users are not busy at work or are on their way (like the protagonist), they have to send low-level people first. From the author's description, the government attaches great importance to every human life. I really don't understand. In addition, to deal with unknown mutations of the same level, in order not to lose personnel, it is definitely necessary to send a team of the same level or people of a higher level in, such as Professor Liu behind, the Moonlight City senior management did not know the situation in the hospital before they killed him. If you know there is a level 4 mental mutant inside, just send a level 4 psychic person. If there is a level 3 physical mutant, isn't it just a gift? What the hell is it that you can send more people if something goes wrong later. Why didn't we send more people at the beginning or delay the attack and wait for people, and take the very uncertain risk of killing people first? This is when the protagonist comes out. If the protagonist is not there, all the police will be dead. After sending the people, what information has not been obtained? The government is so stupid. . I hope the author can be more rigorous in this regard. 2. The sense of violation in social operations. I can't tell whether the author is writing about a society with strong government control or a society with weak government control. Everyone can see that in the novel, no matter whether it is in or outside the city, whether it is under the jurisdiction of the government or not, places beyond the control of the government are everywhere. But at the same time, the society the author writes about is very stable, and everyone should do what they are supposed to do. Let me give you a simple example. In a society, the government relies on two things to maintain control: 1. Absolute force, the army. There is no such thing in this novel, because those who are slightly stronger can defeat the army, but there are many strong people in the non-government armed forces. Moreover, the government is letting go of anti-human and dangerous research conducted by companies under government control. 2. Absolute economy, taxation. This is also not the case in this novel. Private transactions are everywhere, the tax department does not exist at all, and big companies treat tax evasion as a daily routine. Then the government has no absolute force and almost no tax jurisdiction. Why does it establish a unified management country spread over countless cities? What does it use to pay wages to those who work for the government? Moreover, the top government officials, such as the chief, are ordinary people, but according to the author's description, it is really easy for those private armed forces to kill the chiefs of a city and then escape unscathed, and it is even easier to sneak into the government and become spies. I won't say anything else, but I would like to emphasize that the author's writing is very good. But it can be more rigorous, and it's already pretty good so far.

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Chapter 2 directly persuades you to quit! Using abilities requires energy, and energy cannot be recovered by the protagonist himself, it needs to be provided by the system!

Actually. The story is okay. The writing is average but not terrible. Reasons for low subscriptions. Maybe two. The plot is boring. It can be seen that the author has dug countless holes. But it gives people the feeling that they are incapable of filling the hole. Hope I get slapped in the face in the end. Secondly. Not cool enough. The protagonist is too average, so average that he looks like an idiot in my eyes. Maybe because he is not an entrepreneur and has no so-called insight. This is a hot issue. It is not a problem of the author's IQ, which is understandable. There are also many places that feel like a running account. Things that are not that important can be brushed off. One of the most important problems of this book is that there is nothing attractive that makes people want to continue reading. It doesn't have that point, but I feel that the story is still okay.

Prices are ridiculous. A taxi ride in the city costs more than 20 yuan. Hiring a person with superpowers to kill a monster, even the lowest level one, would seriously endanger social stability and would kill an ordinary person. It only costs 10,000 yuan... Why don't people with superpowers use superpowers to do other things?

I just watched a little bit, and I thought it was pretty good, but I don't know where the protagonist comes from to trust the dark web. The dark web must ensure that privacy will not be leaked, and then you are eager for money and save money just to buy and find information on the dark web. It is really nonsense. It originally seemed that the protagonist is very smart, but in the end, he is a big fool here. Various supplementary explanations, forcing a reasonable explanation for the protagonist's behavior of reducing intelligence, don't feel awkward.

The system setting is not good, a puppet host releases skills, and the host is just a tool that presses buttons. No matter how high the level, no matter how powerful the ability, it will have nothing to do with the protagonist The system is called a curse, and most readers also go for the curse. It turns out that it is a curse, but it is actually a spell, the real curse. , The small ones include "beating the villain", "ghost covering eyes" and "puppet"..., The intermediate ones include "blood curse", "head lowering" and "love spell"... the top ones include "seven nail-headed arrows"... At the beginning of the system curse, it is obviously a good hand of supernatural beings, but it is completely different and beaten to pieces

Using a skill, the blue bar still needs to be replenished, this is too frustrating. Even if you reply half of the time 24 hours a day, or fully in a month, that's fine. The way to replenish the blue bar is to participate in tasks. If there is any special situation that cannot be supplemented, and the protagonist happens to be used up, GG immediately. It feels like the system's skills are lent to you, not yours, just rented. I just watched a little bit, I hope it won't be like this later. What kind of spell is that skill? It feels like something on the system panel, and you are a data person. Every time I see that the protagonist's skills can only be used a few times, I feel very unhappy. I also replenish it as I use it. Are you so lucky that you never encounter level-up monsters?