Joining a Dating Reality Show, This Pretty Boy Is Almost Too Down-to-Earth

Fortunately, my hotelier pushed back and ran away, and it turned out to be a mess in the end💩. It's great that the author still speaks hard in his remarks at the end of the book. You still don't understand why you started getting scolded at the end of the romance drama? Because female emotions are cheap! Most people who watch romance entertainment will not pay too much attention to single female protagonists and harems. Entertainment itself needs to come into contact with a large number of female characters, and readers have their own preferences. Some authors have left out single female protagonists, and some have included all the ones that everyone has been clamoring for. It can be said that the more people watch romantic entertainment, the less sensitive they will be to the number of female protagonists. Readers only care about whether the emotional line will cause drama for them. This is actually the same as the rice circle, giegie cannot destroy the character, and entertainment emotions cannot go against logic. Obviously the author made this mistake, writing the relationship between Pei and the male protagonist in a leap forward style, which cannot withstand scrutiny. This relationship, which is similar to love at first sight, is very superficial and does not have enough plot space. Actually, it's not that I can't understand the reason. Love brain tools give readers quick candy. This buries the hidden danger of collapse. Shang just follows the old-fashioned way of getting along with each other on an even-keeled basis. The reason why routines are old is because they work. What readers like more about business is that they have a sense of participation. Pei was given 80% directly at the beginning, while Shang was brushed from 0 to 80%. Then the problem comes, Pei is the first girl. The male protagonist will collapse if he doesn't pursue his character, and Pei must maintain his advantageous position over the other female supporting characters. But Pei couldn't beat Shang, and he was evenly matched with Xilin. What to do? I can only try my best to add plot. But feelings are increasingly difficult to express above 80%. Originally, it would be a way to temporarily cool down the interactions with other female characters. However, the male protagonist's affectionate and righteous character requires him to keep interacting with other female characters, otherwise the character will collapse, but the interactive book will begin to collapse. The last solution is for Aquaman to become a scumbag, but the author refuses. So there was a strange scene where the male protagonist was deeply in love with Pei while being affectionate by Shang, and then Pei couldn't beat Shang due to the thickness of the plot. As a result, the male protagonist could neither coax Hongqi nor suppress Caiqi. It is not entirely appropriate to say that the author jumped between pure love and the harem, he just failed in writing. I can only say that it is a big joke in the world. As I said before, the emotional line of entertainment and culture cannot be contrary to logic. Pei and Shang are both heroines sent from heaven, and their characters are different in their own way. Pei is clever and passive, while Shang is enthusiastic and proactive. Pei was abused by Shang Wan during his emotional development, but the male protagonist chose Pei. It's unreasonable. Readers will naturally be dissatisfied, and they will scold you if they are not satisfied, of course. This kind of situation is based on the basics of genre writing. You can only write books at noon, and something will happen sooner or later.

This book should have reached greater heights, but it's obvious that the author scrapped the book. The daily lives and characterizations of the three previous heroines The detailed description makes me feel that this is a rare and good book, but since the romance series came to an end, it is obvious that the author has messed up. First of all, the system is completely dispensable. Secondly, it is difficult to choose between the characters. Some characters should be discarded. Remember that you have already made your decision at the end of the romance series. If you want to have a harem by reference, you will have many options. You have a choice, but you chose pure love, but it is obvious that you can't let go of the character you portrayed before, so you can only be crazy and ambiguous. In the end, you also ruined the original protagonist. After all, you have no material, right? You can only rely on sugar-coating and suffering to survive, so the protagonist is only Aotian. In fact, many times it reminds me of a bad show, Rent-a-Girlfriend. Li's plot is missing, Shang's character is collapsed, the eldest sister is dispensable, and all kinds of supporting characters take up too much of the plot leading to the current stinking and watery situation! Goodbye, I used to really think highly of you

Don't read the paid chapters, spend money to eat💩

Control comments, delete comments, and turn a blind eye to readers' comments. I have been thinking about cow dung for a long time and still can't get over this hurdle. It was good at the beginning, but after cow dung, it became worse and worse. Why? Because a lot of people feel that they can't stand this kind of mentally retarded plot. If you want to quibble with the section where the reader scolds cow dung, it's foreshadowing. When you hear the foreshadowing, you can't stand it. Is this a criminal investigation article? You're also foreshadowing. What is foreshadowing? The plots echo and reveal. The truth makes readers suddenly realize, can you use cow dung as a foreshadowing in your romance novel? Is it like DNA testing cow dung like a criminal investigation, or is it like you wrote such a piece of cow dung for readers to see, and brought this piece of cow dung to the dinner table for the protagonist and guests to eat? 😄

After reading Chapter 171, I realized that what I paid for was a mess💩

This is the best character created in this novel, bar none. After reading Quark today, I was still upset. When I saw the author said that he was the starting point, I thought of giving these rewards. I am a useless college student, so I could only give Shang Bao five chicken drumsticks to eat. To be honest, Shang gave me each one like a knife. On a normal night, compared to Pei's tenderness, I love Shang's courage to love and the feeling of giving up everything for love. Some people may think I am naive, but if you imagine that you had such a girl when you were young, what would you think? Although I am not an old bookworm, I have been reading novels for 6 years and have read many good books, but this is the first time a heroine gives me this feeling, because I see things in Shang Bao that I dare not do, and it is also the first time I see a character that has a huge impact on the author himself. Therefore, I, the dark goblin, will not have any evil thoughts towards her, but just cherish her as the couple in my dreams should be. Wei Ai Shang Bao.

After reading a lot of comments, I really feel that this male protagonist is actually a tool man, who molds the three female protagonists. From the beginning to the end, this male protagonist either relies on the system to write songs to make money, or relies on Jiang Ma to cope with the pressure. He has never really done anything useful to the plot. He has not worked hard from the beginning to the end, even once. This is the worst fear of system flow. It was written as a puppet of the system and the plot, and even the so-called main palace and the heroine's role were cut off too much. The result was that Pei was completely weaker than the other two, and had the same moral character as the male protagonist and had no independent opinions of his own. He was tied to death by his sister. It was said that he had paid a lot for love, but judging from the plot performance, he was solely profiting from the songs given by the system. What did he pay for? I really didn't think of it, but Shang Cai should be in the position of the heroine. She really dares to think and fight, and it makes people feel exhausted because of Yi. I don't quite understand why the author arranged for Pei to take the position first at the beginning. She obviously didn't have enough interaction with the male protagonist. Xilin didn't even More suitable than Pei, and the change of attitude of the male protagonist is too blunt. In the last chapter, the choice was thrown over to Shang. Shang mustered up the courage to really choose, but he refused to admit it when he was caught. Then why did you leave it to Shang at that time? You are a softie, isn't this? There are obviously many places where you can just talk things over with Pei, but you obviously didn't do anything wrong but you did the same thing, and in the end it's hard to get back. There must have been no reaction after the breakup, and he still waited for the heroine to introduce the plot, which is really awesome

The number of chapters has stopped at the moment when Shang Zhuoyan confessed her love, and now I don't know what happened next. I just hope that in the future, the male protagonist can be right with everyone who is passionate about him. 😭🤓🤓🤓

Internet articles want readers to feel pleasure while reading them. In my opinion, these pleasures basically come from these three aspects: plot (plot), description, and setting. Importance from heading to the back row. The first one or two hundred chapters of this novel are well written, because the down-to-earth plot is funny, the settings with huge contrasts are interesting, and the plot and settings are well combined, so it is very enjoyable to read and makes me want to continue reading. After the first variety show ended, about two hundred chapters later, the plot was gone, and the novelty of the setting was gone. As for the "description" aspect, let alone the "description" aspect, it was extremely boring to read, and the writing really made people uninteresting. From a personal perspective, let's talk about the author's problems and areas for improvement. -- First, there is no plot, the development of the plot must be promoted. The story must have a beginning and an end, and must develop. Every day I wrote about Gu Huaian working, writing songs, singing, using the system to improve his level, falling in love, filming, and getting entangled between the three heroines. This is not called development, this is called running accounts. Have you ever thought about the ending? Have you ever thought about Gu Huaian's ideal? How will he grow (or fall)? How does he use the system to achieve his goals? These things are not reflected in the book at all. Second, the description is ordinary and monotonous, divorced from reality, inconsistent, and embarrassing. There is really no description in this book. Whether it is language, actions, appearance, demeanor, environment, or psychological description, they are all too ordinary and nothing outstanding. However, this is also a shortcoming of online writing, so we should not be too demanding. The author's biggest problem in this regard is that the description is divorced from reality, inconsistent with the top and bottom, and makes it embarrassing to read. The description is divorced from reality, which is mainly reflected in ① randomly copying songs to serve the plot. Even if the songs are not popular or not good, the author just uses them if they think they fit the plot. The readers have no sense of involvement and have no reading experience at all; ② After the breakup, the brand actively terminated the contract and Gu Huaian even had to pay liquidated damages. I did not expect that the server was burned after only one million people watched the live broadcast. Pei Jingshu on I didn't expect that a domestic music school would be called a musical talent. I didn't expect that in a variety show, you can just pick up a song on your phone and play it with live accompaniment. I didn't expect that those few moderately to high-level hip-hop moves were said to be difficult and set off the audience... There are really too many of them. It can be said that they have no common sense in life... The way to improve is very simple... Just check online before writing. The upper and lower parts are inconsistent, also known as eating books, eating settings, and eating plots. This is true in many places in the article. For example, Pei Jingshu fell in love with a skinny girl, and then turned around and said she had a good figure... This added a bit of dissonance to the already unsatisfactory description. It is embarrassing, mainly due to ① the lack of skill in the use of onomatopoeia, such as "ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" and the sound of piano "dong dong"; 2) too many memes and too complicated. Some memes on the Internet are clever and can make people smile, but some memes just make people embarrassed and speechless or confused; ③ The words used to connect are monotonous and unnatural, such as "it is worth mentioning" repeated, which makes people disgusted. Third, setting. Setting it in an online novel is the biggest boost to the plot, and it in turn determines the plot to a large extent. In my opinion, the setting of a "down-to-earth" star is really good and brilliant, but the author has not given full play to it, and even has the intention of breaking away from this setting. Have you ever wondered where down-to-earth celebrities will achieve their greatest success? How do down-to-earth celebrities fall in love? The development path of a down-to-earth star? How do down-to-earth celebrities grow and change? There are really a lot of examples that can be copied in reality, including Phoenix Legend, Huang Bo, Jia Ling, Huang Zhan, Liu Qingyun, Chow Yun-fat, Michael Jackson, Messi and even Liu Qiangdong... Don't just write that Gu Huaian can cook home-cooked dishes and use popular products. Is it down-to-earth? Is it down-to-earth like ordinary people? -- I have written so much, I hope it will be helpful to the author. I wish all book friends that their money spent on subsequent subscriptions will be worthwhile!

I came across this book on a short video software The early love story was really cool So I bought the whole book But after you finished writing the love story, you started to get sick immediately You even quit the show after you finished the love story Do you want to write him as a superstar or a scumbag You like business so much? Isn't it a good match to treat her as an official? It's hard for people to watch it if they have to create a Shura field It's written as if Pei is just a P friend and Shang is the true love I really don't know how to read it In short, newcomers can just watch the love drama Android CP fans can choose to read the later chapters of the interaction between the two The above are all the highlights of the book

I really like the setting of this novel, especially the idea of the full live broadcast barrage perspective and the background of the romance show. However, as I watched the new variety show start, I felt that Pei could not accompany me, Shang was heartbroken, and Xi couldn't understand. Then a bunch of secondary female supporting characters came in and chattered. There was a sudden reshuffle of roles and so many new characters were added that it was hard to see them. They all have the influence of their predecessors. Like Reba in Running Man, I really couldn't accept it for a while. Moreover, there are currently too many characters, too few events, and the image is too thin. There is no need to write about other secondary characters in such a large circle if they can't stand up. Let's look at the system of cool writing. At this stage, it will either write about the daily pure love of powerful celebrity couples, or the underground ambiguous harem of a playboy. Isn't it delicious? It can be said that there are no acquaintances in the newly opened variety show. Even Gu Laoliu is no longer down to earth. He borrowed the system to install it. Now, besides standing next to Sister Pei, Gu Huaian is still the naive big boy. In fact, because of the excellent description, he has begun to shine a little dazzlingly. He starts to need to look up, and starts to feel alienated. Even the whole life is a little artificial. Yes, the one-on-five game shows It's amazing. The diaosi has counterattacked. The problem is that we didn't like Gu Huaian because he sang A Diao and danced Troublemaker in the Crystal Courtyard and amazed the audience. The Gu Huaian that Sister Pei, Shang Zhuoyan and Xilin liked was not the Gu Huaian who was pretending. It's okay to write about Gu Huaian being NB, but keep writing about how NB he is, how NB he is, who should he show it to, Jiang Dan? How else to look at this, the underlying logical framework that made this novel popular has been exhausted, and Gu Huaian, who has no sense of substitution, has lost his soul. Now in this new variety show, you can tell that the Galaxy Battleship has become a small and broken ship. Jiang Yao supports Xilin, and two passerby teammates support Shang Zhuoyan. I can't even tell who is who. The little girl is soft and weak, and it seems that she is here to support Sister Pei's character, but she has no memory points at all except that she remembers being bullied and crying, and then Zheng Yunbin, who pretends to be a b, comes to stand up as Jiang PD, host He Dashanren comes to stand up to the good old actor Su, and the annoying Cha Qingqing, who has always been inexplicable and has a sense of existence but is completely unnecessary. The whole is a fake version of Crystal Love, and now that Gu Laoliu has an official partner, CP Sister Pei, it is impossible to have other ambiguous scenes of interaction. It is neither appropriate nor desirable. How to write it, it will become a junior high school narrative. Now everyone is waiting to see the pure love daily life or the ambiguous underground harem. This new variety show does not need to describe the secondary supporting characters, or there is no need to write the variety show daily life again, but you will probably have to write a lot of ink on the main line of this new variety show. Later, you will also make games to make money or something. I have already started to have a headache and regret it. I can't delete the variety show. Let's just say that Gu Huaian resisted most of the entertainment and moved someone's cake and temporarily withdrawn it. It's a cliffhanger. Ma, otherwise what you can write is really overlapping with Crystal Courtyard, and it is still a low-end version, which will really lead to aesthetic fatigue. There are so many things that can be written in the entertainment industry. If you let the original team of Crystal Court go to Funan City to film "Longing for Life - Crystal Courtyard - City Edition", I would be willing to watch it. You can live in an elevator room, a youth apartment, a university town, go to an amusement park, museum, cinema, escape room, KTV, dance, raise cats and dogs, and occasionally have two artist friends as guests for drinks. How great. There are a lot of new people thrown in at once. It's too much and I really can't accept it. It's like reading a new novel. A big shuffle is really taboo. Originally, I only read novels and it's easy to remember a person by looking at the name and events. Now there are all new people. I really can't stand it.                                                       Yang Guo, who debuted as an amateur, is also down-to-earth, has a strong backstage, and surprises everyone every time he performs. He also has superb skills. He also fell in love with the ice beauty early on, and he has a strong relationship with the opposite sex, although he only loves beautiful faces. The Ice Beauty Little Dragon Girl, but he can also show off his love for Guo Fulu, Cheng Ying, Wanyan Ping, Yelu Yan, Guo Xiang, and even Li Mochou. No one calls him a scumbag. I still look forward to Narcissus writing it well. After all, the famous 1V5 scene still reminds me of Yang Guo. The first time he participated in the dance competition and defeated the other heroes with his skills, he was also more and more dazzling in each round. But forget it after waiting for sixteen years. Let us have fun watching Huang Rong's failure. Urban writers also hope to be able to draw lessons from it. Don't worry about it. Write, not to mention that there is a bug in the system that can be exploited at will. Earning points based on the underlying logic is not only an act of village spirit, but also public welfare and the output of positive energy that win the hearts of the people. Finally, I support whether it is pure love or a harem, please refer to it! ! !

It was very interesting to watch from the beginning, the plot and characterization are very good, although there are some shortcomings, the flaws are not outweighed. But after the love drama ends, it really doesn't work anymore. I don't know if there is no outline. If you want a harem, prepare early. Don't be with Pei after the love drama ends. We don't need a harem when we are together, not to mention that you refused when Shang took the initiative, and then refused when Shang was looking for the protagonist during the Chinese New Year. Many of the descriptions in the article are also pure love. After the Chinese New Year, I couldn't watch it at all. There is basically no description of the main palace Pei, there is not even a letter in many chapters, and there is no content in Shang. What's more, apart from the beginning of the variety show, Sister Xilin is basically dispensable. I am really speechless. The previous three heroines were so well portrayed and ruined. Now we have broken up again, what should I say? Not to mention getting back together, let alone all three of them, I'm sorry for the characters of Pei and even the three heroines. If they don't get back together and have a harem, they shouldn't write it so ambiguously. I'm sorry for this book. The writing style before and after really feels like it was not written by one person. What disgusts me the most is that you want to start a harem and let Shang choose and bear the consequences. As a man, I feel disgusted. If you really want to have the ability to open a harem, then work hard and create opportunities. What do you mean by pushing it to Shang? How do you choose? Well, if you want to open a harem, you are not as good as Chen Scumbag and Zhao Scumbag. Their character is worthy of contempt, but their actions and methods are brilliant. Maybe the author's writing skills still need to be improved. In short, I can't stand this book anymore. I hope the author will work hard and write a good outline and details before writing, so that he can hone his writing skills.

Really, when I saw the breakup part, I really couldn't hold back. It was the first time I saw this part of the story on a male channel. I can't say it's not good, but it did make me feel nervous, and I stayed up all night to watch it all. I quite like the family fun plot, the ed and so on are too sad, but what kind of ending is this? I can't tell, Pei's wedding of the century happened, but as for Shang, he obviously decided to separate, but then another child was born, and then Pei was hurt again and had to forgive, so it would be better to just open a harem. Since it is an imaginary world, it would be better to just do it a little bit. And then there is Xilin. There is no plot yet, so why write about her? There is not even a side story. Generally speaking, the author still has good writing style, but there are some places where he is wandering like the protagonist in his novel. Big boost, author, I hope you get better and better

Let's complain about the author's stance Whether it's ambiguous, stomach-ache, or throwing a knife, we need a logic after all to keep it consistent with the character The front and the back are completely different. You clearly prepared a pure love male protagonist, and the back is a knife or candy. Just keep the male protagonist's pure love stance. Now it's fine. It's like Li Bi and he are not Aquaman It's not that we can't accept the knife, we can't accept the rot, it's disgusting.

That's really how I evaluate it. I'm so serious and speechless. I really wasted my time and my little money in the middle.

A good work is a good work. I read it all in five days. It was worth it to make a forty-year-old man laugh and cry. What is written in the article is not only the story of Gu Laolu and three women, but also a microcosm of an era. You can see the shadow of life in every story, and every text pierces people's hearts like a needle. It's obviously a well-known harem novel, but it's written in such a damning way that it's so addicting. You, the author, are the best. It's great to let the new concept of musical novels become a foil to the story. It is probably because I have never experienced the pain of love that I can write so beautifully. 😁 The only regret I have is that I clearly felt the change in the author's mood in the last few chapters, and I couldn't write them anymore😒😒. Although it is not an anticlimax, the early foreshadowing of the story of Shang Hexi could have been doubled, which I have to say is a small regret. Looking forward to subsequent works.

I came in again and saw the topic "I like Shang". I thought about what if I had changed something. The result surprised me. If it was water before, now it can only be described as rotten and disgusting The countless "m" endings are extremely disgusting, the plot is stumbling, the supporting characters have no meaning at all, and Shang is even more sad than Li. Being sentimental, what's even more exaggerated is Gu's mysterious scumbag operation, giving the choice to others. Then I want to ask how Gu changed from the cheerful boy to be so opinionated and heartless. In the end, he jumped into the sea, making himself feel very wronged. All the male protagonists he made were like this. You just need to clear the boundaries. There are so many things. The author is still hesitant. First of all, if you have a system, you can directly use the system settings to try to open a harem? Or if you want to play a single line, just concentrate on it. You can also end one chapter one by one. In this chapter, you can draw a clear line with Shang and then meet Xi in the next chapter, and then with the supporting characters. The finale will be fine The good guy chose someone who will not please both sides. Now I feel that you are not a gangster. It makes me sick.

I feel like I've read a lot of novels. Regarding entertainment and love themes, I really feel that this novel is good. I only came across this novel recently and read the entire novel in one go. The characterization is very full and the story is quite profound. Whether it is Pei's reunion at the concert or Shang's separation, it is very easy to bring emotions into it. I personally quite like Shang, and the previous plot is also very rich. Judging from the previous story, it can be said to be yyds. I often wonder, what would happen if Gu chose Shang or Xilin instead of Pei? I originally thought that the whole story would have a sweet ending, and even when I didn't follow the later chapters, I could make up a lot of sweet endings on my own. But at the end of the novel, it felt a bit unfinished. There was neither a harem nor pure love, and I even felt overwhelmed at the end. I am still looking forward to the next article by the same author. I hope that the next article will have a better ending, at least I won't be scratching my head after reading it (›´ω`‹ ). (Let's just say, is Sister Xilin's extra story still coming out?)

The writing is a bit messy and watery right now.

I have finished reading this book. Overall, I still like the plots. It has been about three days since I finished reading the ending. I always feel uncomfortable every time I think about this ending. I have imagined many happy endings, but I never expected this situation. How can I say that I can't accept it?

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You can add money! Hurry up, adoptive father! Please!

I kept the starting point just to follow this book. From a neutral perspective, this book is indeed very good. The characters are well drawn, the personality is clear, the plot is okay, and the soundtrack is quite appropriate. I think many readers think that the male protagonist is both upright and independent, and they want to scold him every day. However, I personally feel that the title of the book is destined to determine the character and character of the male protagonist. How can I comment if I don't feel immersed in the book? I think the second female lead and the third female lead are better in terms of scenes and character portrayals. Who can handle that kind of incident better?

The nature of this golden finger means that it can only play a role in the early stage, but it will not be interesting later, and the content later is not very good.

Why can even low-quality variety shows for the mentally retarded be published in Sanjiang now?

The most classic and typical example of playing a good hand with a bad hand at the starting point, there is no one like it 😄

June 29, 8:03: In fact, the biggest shortcoming of this book is the small number of words. If you think the plot is dragging, that's because there are very few updates every day, and it keeps spraying, so I suggest you keep it short and talk about how to enjoy yourself. I beg you, keep reading this book and don't spoil it. This book is still pretty good It is October 2nd. 23:02 I used to think that Narcissus had some experience and was pretty good in the early game. Even if it crashed later, it wouldn't be too bad. It looked really good in the front. Although there were a few quirks, the way it was handled was pretty good and acceptable. It is now November 14th at 21:16 Today also comes the end. Compared with the beginning, the ending cannot be said to be bad, but it is barely broken. Narcissus is writing a book for the first time, so he is not very skilled. In the middle of the plot, there are obvious choices between left and right, with repeated jumps. The result is that Narcissus is stuck between the harem and pure love for a long time. Not only Narcissus is uncomfortable, but many readers are also uncomfortable. However, the ending can be regarded as a part of the story, and it is also Narcissus's last effort. I also hope that Narcissus can determine the direction of his future development in the next book and continue to work hard Finally, congratulations on the completion of "Participating in the Love Series, This Little Freshman is Too Down-to-earth"! ! ! I wish all readers good luck and good health in their future lives I also look forward to the results of Narcissus' next book Spread flowers~Spread flowers~Spread flowers~

If you are a pure love party, then I suggest you only read the free chapters. If you are a harem party, then I suggest you read the free chapters. Do not read the later ones. It is a waste of money and a waste of money and disgusting. 🙂🙂 Everyone who has read it is scolding me. Trust me.

I have read a few chapters and subscribed to a few chapters for comments. It is not easy. The author seems to have some misunderstanding about grounding. Is grounding like a neurosis? The author can go to the street and see who is cracking melon seeds while walking? Who would wear pants and slippers as a guest? It's understandable to wear casual clothes. As a person, you must first learn to respect. According to you, we common people are not down to earth enough.

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