A Knight Cultivator in the Abyss

I dug up a good book in the middle of the night. Although I have only read half of it, I feel that the author's writing is smooth and he doesn't feel like a newcomer at all. Borrowing from other book reviews to summarize the characteristics, "people are in the abyss but their hearts are not there". Against the depressing background, the protagonist and his group are like a team of laughing and weird people. This may not be realistic enough, but it is valuable enough. The Western Fantasy DND-style background is still as attractive to me as ever. The elements of fantasy and immortality added in the middle are also eye-catching. If I had to mention a few shortcomings, it might be that several missions in the early and middle stages ended with the summoning of the dalao divine soldiers (one by the Fire Demon and the Nameless One, and one by the Old Red Dragon), which makes people feel a little regretful. But considering the protagonist's need for upgrading and the foreshadowing that drives the main line, it's not surprising overall. To summarize: It's not a loss after reading it, the author keeps up the good work!

I'm actually curious, can an indigenous knight understand the inheritance of cultivation? Take a passage from the Tao Te Ching as an example: "The superior virtue is not virtuous, because it is virtuous; the inferior virtue is not virtuous, it is not virtuous. The superior virtue is done without doing anything, but there is no thought; the inferior virtue is done, but there is thought. The superior benevolence is done without thinking, the superior righteousness is done, but there is thought, the superior virtue is done without thinking, and the superior virtue is done without thinking. If you don't respond to the etiquette, you will throw it away. Therefore, if you lose the way, you will be virtuous, if you lose virtue, you will be benevolent, if you lose benevolence, you will be righteous, and if you lose righteousness, you will be li. For example, in Zhuangzi's "Equality of Things", "Zi You said: "The sound of earth makes all the apertures the same, and the sound of people is better than bamboo. Dare to ask about the sound of nature. Zi Qi said: "I am so different from others that I can make it my own." If you take it for granted, who will do it if you are angry? "You think this native who has not been influenced by Chinese culture can understand it? Obviously not, the cultivation inheritance will be a thousand times more obscure than this. I actually have another question... Can he, a foreigner, understand the Sino-Tibetan language...

Read it all in one sitting. It can be said that the author has no obvious loopholes from beginning to end, and his writing style can fully support the plot. The combat part is also very reasonable, and some parts can even be used as modules if modified. It just so happens that the plot has not yet progressed to the most difficult part to write, so I will say it here... What is the next action plan of the protagonist group? The next most reasonable choice is to go to heaven. It has been said that there is a portal to the upper heaven on this level (and it should be where the Angel of Aira is stationed). It can be seen that after this battle, the protagonist and his party will definitely not let go of the method of leaving through the heaven, even if they need to run the group again to perform meritorious services/collect materials. The protagonist will not return to the plains through the talisman, because he is being chased by two powerful beings, and there is no problem in the town. Going back is tantamount to asking for trouble in the town. The most effective way is to leave the abyss and improve her strength (probably during the golden elixir stage), wait until she asks for help, and then take the initiative to return to the abyss. At this time, the talisman can also be used as a precise teleportation within a plane. When you reach the Nascent Soul stage, you may be able to open up your own demiplane. But the protagonist will not stay in heaven for too long, because he and the art-loving angel do not have much in common. In addition, the aura of heaven in heaven will slowly cause damage to vampires, and dwarves will not like this place without wine. They might go to see the Great Contest between the Angels of Order and Chaos. But after that, they will probably leave. The team may be separated. The Encyclopedia Skull and the Halfling Cook are the most likely to stay in the Celestial Realm. The original planes of each team member are also different, and they are likely to be separated. The protagonist is most likely to go to the plane of the vampire maid, and there may also be angels of love joining the team.

I probably understand why the author is so short 😏

Being chased by the demon of desire, running a hundred feet in one breath, and then three miles in five minutes? This still activates the escape technique, and the demon of desire cannot catch up... When escorting the succubus for investigation, the speed was 40 kilometers per hour, which was described as being as fast as lightning. . I'm sorry, I rode the ⚡️ intermediate and high-level demon team that chased the succubus every day and walked day and night for two days to cover 250 kilometers. . Don't the author feel that this math is a bit low? Although it is low martial arts, it is as low as the hobbit fighting in The Lord of the Rings

Personal reading progress: Chapter 348 is a very poisonous plot. I personally accept it and cannot be dissuaded from it. First of all, Eluticia itself is a character in the official novel. If you want to use the official character as an author, don't add too many changes to the character's image and personality. Otherwise, you might as well create your own character. This will neither offend people who know DND nor affect pure readers. If you change the original character image like this, it's like writing a novel about Conan's worldview and ending up with Xiaolan falling in love with the protagonist of your own creation. Readers of the original work cannot accept this kind of illicit thing. Secondly, even if Alutisia in your book is regarded as a creative character of the same name, is this forced dedication of the character at all reasonable in the plot, let alone forcing the setting to be a hit? The character was clearly written as a girl who has experienced love, and she also has emotional counseling and corresponding tools for finding someone. In the blink of an eye, The love interest is just taken away from the book. I dare you to ask if you have even a little foreshadowing that the love interest does not exist. A character that was originally focused on was forcibly destroyed just to give the protagonist a one-night stand? You wrote that the dwarf was cursed and turned into a succubus without a beard, and then it was more reasonable than the protagonist. As an ordinary reader, I can't stand such a horrific character collapse, especially the forced collapse of unoriginal characters. At least I personally feel that when I read a book, I don't want to see a female character who sacrifices her life for this kind of brainwashing by the author. To me, this is not exciting but highly toxic, so I quit. Author, if you think that the money I am reading is still worth it, please change the plot of 348-350, and I will delete this post myself. Of course, the above are all my personal opinions, and they only represent me personally. They do not involve the opinions and ideas of others. If you think what I said is wrong, there is no need to correct me. You are right. I apologize to you in advance. Please just ignore me.

The pace is indeed a bit too slow. Updates are slow to begin with. If the plot progresses too slowly, it will be difficult to attract people. Moreover, where is the strength of the protagonist? It feels like he is very powerful at the first level of the abyss. There is no clear concept. Moreover, the strength of the protagonist has not changed for a long time. Has he not passed the training period yet?

Now that I have seen hundreds of chapters, the biggest feeling is that the plot is dragged out. After looking at the table of contents, it took dozens of chapters to infiltrate into one operation, and even used long dialogues on the battlefield to overdo it. The hard stories about cross-dressing transsexuals feel more like a stench to me, full of violation and inappropriateness, and I almost always skip them. Compared with the novels I have read in recent years, low popularity means it is inevitable that it will not be a hit. But despite its flaws, it's still worth watching.

I'm thinking, you know so much about dnd, why don't you just set up a demon knight? It feels so inconsistent to have a cultivator knight, and the style of painting is inconsistent.

I just discovered a problem with this book. Why do you have to add a practice setting? Is there any explanation later? Although every world created by DM is part of the DND multiverse. But it still feels strange. If you really can't do it, can't you just use Lu Yuan, the slayer of gods on the 300th floor of the abyss? It's not like there are no Chinese-style settings here. Whether it's the qi setting of the monk, one of the most basic professions, or the escorts and monks in Dragon Magazine, why do they have to use the qi-training golden elixir system?