Liaozhai: The Silent Son

I would like to make a suggestion. Since this work is based on history, it keeps making insinuations that true cultivation is rare, and those with high cultivation are even rarer in the world. The story should be more balanced and use more natural disasters and man-made disasters in the style of historical literature. The main reason is that the proportion of the protagonist encountering monsters and monsters is too high. Basically everything has some strange power behind it, which really doesn't seem rare. In addition, I hope that the existence of foreign countries and foreign religions can be reasonably depicted in the later period. Many works involving the background of the Qing people have been written here.

Do you think the protagonist is the one who fantasizes about time travel because his master died and he couldn't bear the pressure, and then he had mental problems?

I feel that this book has been written crookedly in the middle and later stages. It is about cultivating immortals and seeking the path, and not about slaying demons and monsters. It has to be about dynasties fighting for hegemony. To change the world, you need to have territory and power. What is the protagonist doing in the back? He is doing nothing. He wants people but no one, wants land but has no land. He is still fighting for it. What, I'm afraid the author doesn't know how to write it later. When I saw "Want to Fight for Hegemony", I felt something was wrong. I'm afraid there is no outline. In the future, if you see this kind of thing, then suddenly turn around and write about something else, be careful. It's not far from being unfinished.

Subduing demons is a great merit. Expelling the Tartars and restoring China is the right path and great merit. Pig's feet are first used to preach in the mainland and accumulate wealth, and then go to foreign countries to invent and set up companies to accumulate wealth, and then raise the flag to rebel and expel the Tartars. Otherwise, how can the heavenly gate be opened to a place full of smelly smells?

With a bad character, the Taoist doctor has entered the palace, and this one seems to be coming soon? Last comment, delete the book and block it, goodbye

Can you be a better doctor? It's true that the old eunuch is too rotten to continue writing and learn something. An art student will never finish a picture if he gives up sketching when it gets serious. An author will never finish a book if he doesn't tell a story well.

It's poisonous, the female ghost takes over the body, sucks the protagonist dry, and associates with the devil, the protagonist actually has a crush on her

When I read the title, I thought it was a book about the world view of a Chinese studio, but it turned out to be the same as Jiuliu Xianren, a literary practice cultivated in the late Qing Dynasty.

I knew it would collapse later

After reading Chapter 30, I felt comfortable with the plot and the writing rhythm was excellent. However, there were too many typos and incorrect sentences, which greatly affected my reading. I can't remember where it is now. For example, it's similar to: What Xiao Liu didn't expect was that this situation was unimaginable. Xiao Li raised the sharp sword high. Xiao Zhang took out a bunch of keys from his pocket and took them out This kind of sentence appeared many times. I remember that high school Chinese called this kind of bad sentence "mixed", right? After the author finished coding, he took a good look at it. No matter how good his writing was, he couldn't handle so many wrong sentences and typos. No matter how fragrant the rice is when it is stewed, it will hurt your teeth even if you eat it with sand.