Reporting to the Motherland: I Transmigrated!

Children, there are no newcomers on the new book list 🙂

What the hell, why do I get less and less of this book the more I read it?

Recently, it has been on the new book list and several major recommendations, and there have been a lot of comments from gods and men. I need to explain a few sentences here I wrote a novel about the country's development of the world of Xianxia at the beginning of 21, and it was also the first high-quality, high-quality, and ten-thousand-book novel in the national Xianxia stream So some anthropomorphic creatures who use other platforms should stop. I copied my 21-year theme from you 2 4 or even 25 years... There are many authors on other platforms who are better than me in terms of performance and writing skills, but for the Juguoliu alone (especially the category of Xianxia Juguoliu), I didn't say that I copied certain books from a certain site, and I am considered to be well-educated. Now they are still labeling me, but Tiangang belongs to 😅😅😅

The bold author actually dares to write about the country in such a positive light, just wait for the report 🙂

What an awesome piece of mindless writing. I feel that the folds of the cerebral cortex have been smoothed out. 😭

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Is it true that patriotic themes are the answer?

It was really well written, but it was a pity that it was banned later.

Wow, there are little stories to read when I visit Station B in the middle of the night 🙂

I'm not star-chasing either. I'll give you whatever star you want... What star are you talking about? You said two bombs and one star? The fog is created, I really want this 😭

It only took me 0 seconds to guess that the only person with this connection on the site is the fisherman account. Come and try it too.

Is there any fish restaurant? This should be it, right?

Provincial version: a pretty good reserve fairy grass As of Chapter 43, this book is pretty good among Baoguo-flow novels, integrating elements of traveling between two worlds. As far as the foreshadowing has been laid so far, there are many operable plot directions, which can effectively eliminate the sense of separation caused by the plot development of the two worlds. The novelty and highlight of this book lies in the imagination at the beginning. At least this is the first time I have seen such a well-written story about the two worlds serving the country. The strength of this article lies in its description of national science and technology, which is enough for a technical novice like me. For readers who like this strong scientific and technological style, this book is a must-read and should not be missed. ps: It is strongly recommended to lose part of your brain when reading this kind of new book. If you insist on finding faults, there are endless loopholes in this kind of science and technology, organizational processes, etc. After all, it is a novel and not a thesis... If it doesn't work, it feels a bit boring. You can be a grassroots team in a parallel world, and the reading experience will be much better. I heard in the comment section that the author is a reincarnated Lao Den? In this way, there may be some guarantee in writing the outline. Maybe. It seems that the current chapters of the new book are all in the manuscript. As for the content of the description of science and technology, it can be seen that the author has made quite sufficient preparations, and overall his attitude is quite correct. This part of the knowledge reserve is also integrated quite well in the writing process. The author's careful and respectful choice of plot development can be given extra points in my opinion. I won't go into details about the advantages. If you are really a newbie and can write to this level, you are really a natural saint of Internet writing. This solid knowledge base fits perfectly with this style of serving the country. What you can see is this kind of high-level interest that seems to be understood but not understood. The disadvantage lies in the subsequent control of the plot. This problem occurred last time I saw a newcomer writing about the theme of serving the country. This is also a typical threshold for newcomers. The story and plot are not well connected, and it is difficult for newcomers to deal with transitional chapters. The drafting period will be very long, and it will be painful for readers to follow the update. But at least for now, it seems that the early stage of the new book is pretty good, it just depends on the follow-up. ps: The following paragraph is mainly written for the author. If you are not a newbie, the reincarnation of Lao Deng will directly ignore me and treat me as nonsense. It is really a pity that I have read the book before. … Looking at the introduction, the focus of this article (early stage?) May still be on the local earth. If it only limits the changes brought about by the interaction between the two worlds, it will be very difficult for newcomers to write, because Baoguo Liu is the highest level of the government that directly connects, and the upper level (immortal cultivation) information/resource perspective is limited to the protagonist. The development of the story will be very limited, and the routine of upgrading and changing maps commonly used in web novels does not work. If the local game is too awesome, the protagonist will appear to be dull and tool-oriented, and if the local game is too exaggerated and cannot help the protagonist, the original core cool points will become ineffective, and new "cool points" will need to be subsequently converted to maintain the core of enhanced attractiveness. If the author often reads online articles, it will be difficult to write using the classic fantasy upgrade flow. If the development is fast, the writing will not be long, and if the development is slow, it will be suspected of being slow and stuck in the plot. It will be difficult to grasp the scale, and it may even form new poisonous points. If you have your own ideas, don't worry about what I write below. Just write according to your own ideas. The most valuable thing for a new author is the newbie's whimsical ideas. But if not, there will be no outline of ideas in the follow-up. I will personally provide reference directions for several ideas based on existing documents. The first is to refer to the plot rhythm writing method similar to that of climbing the science and technology tree in historical texts. It can focus on technology laterally, with the protagonist interspersed with technical research, organization and management, and cross-border interaction, leading to new character plot needs and crises, using technological changes to promote social changes, and then transforming into a modern scientific cultivation of immortality. The second is to refer to the enclosure-style writing method similar to that in farming literature. The immortal cultivation technology is point-to-point, and the local conquering unlocks the gradual development of "farming" technology. Materials are transferred between the two worlds, or supplemented by the lotus-style opening of the map, the local opening of portals, and the numerical economic upgrade flow writing method of peaceful development. The third is a defense-style writing method similar to the Cultivation World's invasion of the earth. It is the most classic monster-fighting and upgrading flow, but the style does not seem to match well... If the Cultivation World is the focus of writing, the local earth can be used as a processor, changing the classic system flow writing method. It is a rhythm controller for plot-guided missions and a strength amplifier for the protagonist to increase his training resources. Specifically, if the local needs to release a task, the protagonist completes the task, solves the local problem, and the protagonist gets the reward and realizes it, or it can be written as a mall, the protagonist feeds local resources, and then the local through technical research and assembly line production, additional feedback to the protagonist more resources for cultivating immortals... In short, there are many directions that can be written, and the key directions of the world of immortality are easier to write. Local content can be directly embedded, and the details are moderate... Anyway, the author himself has set up this framework very well, and buried a lot of introductions. There are many key points that can be used as long-term main lines. For example, the local interpretation and integration of immortality technology, the development of the possibility of physical time travel, the development of local maps of the immortality world... Imagination writing is good at this, it opens up a good imagination, the plot of the story is naturally attractive, and you can read it with gusto even if the text is white. The brain itself has many, many things to write about... The premise is that you must have an outline, set long, medium and short-term goals, solve the emergency short-term goals in time, solve the mid-term goals of the branch lines in time, and solve the long-term goals of the main line bit by bit with double hidden lines and hidden points. . Hey, that's a bit long-winded. That's it.

I haven't read this kind of subject matter, what is the difference between it and Guoyunliu? 🙂

There is no such thing as time travel, it's just the protagonist's dying fantasy before he burps too much 😜

Judgment, malicious time travel! No filing for approval! No application form to fill out! No stamp or signature!

Are you a fishing girl

He actually admitted that he opened a trumpet account

I came here because of the reputation. The author's connections are so terrifying.

I haven't read the book yet, but I read the introduction and it said it's a new book by a newcomer? Do you dare to swear? It's not a newcomer. The sky was struck by lightning 😥😥😥

Why stand on the sword? Is Edgeworth flying on a skateboard? A bit low

There is no trace of hidden success here, Fish Girl.

I just came here because I heard Mr. Qian's signature. It doesn't matter whether he smokes or not.

We must kill those people's entrepreneurs

I always wonder when you can continue writing "Handbook of Conquest of Different Worlds", but I didn't expect to write another book of the same type. The original one was stopped. I hope this one can be finished well. I really like reading this type of book.

You told me it was this star 😭

Fish? Is it you? 🙂

It can be seen that the author wants to create a very reasonable world view, but there are still deficiencies in theoretical description. According to your writing style, you can read "Into Unscience" by the newbie Fishing Girl on this site, which should be fruitful 🙂. Dog head saves life. Jpg

Tragic, the author was sacrificed to heaven by Uncle Tong

So, fishing girl, what's the use of this vest (laughing)