A Little Fox's Immortal Cult Handbook

Why did the plot become nondescript after the fox defeated the demons and attacked the city, completely devoid of the refreshing flavor from before. And the most important thing is, why the characters' language? I couldn't string together a plot in my mind, and it felt so sudden. They were all talking about the same thing, but each seemed to be talking about his own thing.

Since we are the protagonist of a fox, we have to ask a question: What does a fox call?

The last time there was such a cute animal, it was Sanhua Empress

There is already a picture in my mind. The little fox is lying on the roof, surrounded by a group of sparrows, quietly watching the people below. It has a full of weird and fairy flavor, which is much better than those officialdom and underworld cultivators that are purely utilitarian.

Very nice🙂

At first glance, the author seems to have been a fox. The description of the fox who has just awakened his intelligence is very cute, and his way of thinking is also weird. It is so weird that it makes people feel good. A section in the city describes how the person pretending to be a god when doing things for others is slightly different from the one in the mountains, but it also has a different charm. After all, he is a fox in the mountains and a human in the city (unfortunately, pretending to be a human still tastes like a fox (laughs)). The subsequent plot is not bad and it should be a good book worth reading (put a flag here).

After reading the comments, I thought it would collapse later after opening high and moving low. Fortunately, I started to read it after hesitating. In conclusion, it's a good read. I finished reading it in two days. It was very smooth. I was never bored throughout the whole process. I stayed up late to read it. During the process of reading, Duan's review didn't mention that it was broken, that it had a facial makeup, that it didn't look like a fox, that it had no aura, etc. It was just that it was very, very interesting to watch all the way through. It's rare to find good novels about monsters. Nowadays, they are all about killing monsters and upgrading or cultivating immortals in fantasy. There is no flavor of monsters at all, so if you like this type of novel, you can't miss it. I am not surprised at all about the plot of Peach God. How can you read a novel that has no outline, no main plot, no boss, and is all about daily life? Switching maps later is also very smooth. To be honest, I don't want to criticize the quality and performance. Not to mention that I don't see the shortcomings. Even if there are flaws, they are completely unexplained. How can I be willing to criticize? Anyway, it is highly recommended. As for the saying that aura is not like a fox, I just think that there are no such problems at all. I just started to become wise at the age of one, and I am only two years old now. In addition to practicing at the beginning, I entered the human world, came into contact with so many people, and fought against bosses. It is impossible that there is no growth and no change, right?

Before it was put on the shelves, I found a ghostwriter, but after it was put on the shelves, I talked nonsense. At first glance, you can tell that there is no outline and the writing style is mechanical. The character continuation is strong, but the plot is a mess.

There are naturally good and bad reviews, but the main ones here are the shortcomings. First: Can it still feel fresh? These chapters have new pictures, and I'm going back a little bit. I can't write anything that happens in one place. New scenes have freshness, while old scenes and old characters need character description and character depth. But foxes are cunning, bees are industrious, and rats are timid. What then? It's gone, it's all from Facebook. It gets boring after watching it for a long time. Now that I have opened a new picture, what should I do next? What happened to the City God's Temple has severely damaged the continuity of the story. If you want to write a road story smoothly, you will face the constraints of old characters. You can't write them, you can't carry them with you, and you can't forget them. How will you solve this problem? Second, can a fox still be unique? The fox is improving, but is reader hope improving? The fox in the front is so cute because he is a blank slate, just like Wukong who just came out of the mountain, he is born to be lovable. But if things continue like this, the fox has reached the "transition period" or even the "adult period". What is the difference between it and humans? Can it still be attractive? If there is no improvement, what is the difference between this fox and Silly Baitian? Thirdly, the story is not thick enough and there is too much blank space for explaining things. This is not a big problem for online articles, but you obviously have a tendency to unitize. If the story of a unit is not resolved, the fox will run from both ends. The unit structure will disappear while running. You need to consider more locations when writing. Is your writing strong enough to do this? For example, if the fox goes back because of something, will something happen to both parties during the process? Then the more I write, the more complicated it gets. After writing, I will open a new picture and then form a large and small unit Fourthly, I don't have much time to post purely based on my feelings, so the content has not been proofread. You can just treat me as a complaint. Feel free to express your different opinions. I will try my best to reply when I have time

Ten years ago, did you rescue a fox on the snowy mountain?