The Mountain Patrol Commandant

I've finished reading it, it's not bad, except for the two pictures about slaying demons by order, which are a bit awkward, it's okay, and then there's the mountain patrol captain, doesn't he have a salary? No reward? The mortality rate is so high and there is no reward? They are all saints, and the protagonist is there because he can get luck, so why are the others? I hope I can improve an entire department. You are not a mountain god. How can a mountain god still get incense?

The author is very good at telling stories, and the plot is eloquent and makes people immersed in it. The character development is also good. But there are two things I want to complain about: 1. The timeline is too rushed. There are more than 160 chapters in the first half of a month. The protagonist went from Qingshan to Jiannan Pass, to Baidi City, to Tianxiong Pass, to Jinguan City. He went to so many places, and there are many things in each place, but you only wrote it in more than half a month? And during this period, the protagonist broke through several realms in succession. The timeline is too rushed and feels fake. 2. The world view is very unreasonable. It is always said that local aristocratic families, gangs, and sects are holding back the government. These local people always collude with demons and human beings in an attempt to rebel. It felt wrong to just have an army fighting against demons. This is not a struggle between countries, nor a struggle between different ethnic groups. This is a struggle between races. Both demons and human demons are cannibals. When faced with inter-ethnic struggles, local forces do not help the army to fight the demons, but they want to collude with the demons to rebel?

The first one is okay, but the next hundred are really rubbish.

Your timeline is too suppressed. The protagonist has traveled across many new and old maps, and done countless things. As a result, it has only been half a year since the start. I have seen someone who overwhelms combat power and the protagonist, and this is the first time I have seen someone who overwhelms time 🙂

I personally think that L4 writers shouldn't write so well, and don't stop every time they get to the point of enjoyment. This will consume the readers' patience. You are not a master or a platinum player, and there are no readers to spend on you.

It has been hundreds of chapters now. Why did the court treat the mountain-cutting army like this? There has never been a line to explain why the court did this. Here is a clue. A chapter of clues about the situation in the court. It is better than seeing why the court is doing this now and how the soldiers guarding the mountain are treated like this.

With the density of monsters at the beginning, it is really incredible luck for a person to reach adulthood.

I don't know what I'm writing about. Everything happens as an afterthought. Every time I do something, I feel like I have to show off before I end it. But I can't stop it. It's not as good as the previous one. The whole book is just a show-off, and that's what makes it good-looking.

Now we have reached the stage where Musashi is not as good as a dog, and dragons and tigers are everywhere 🙂

There is a faint sense of pretending to be a literary youth, coupled with the narrative of rushing to be reincarnated, the plot is also a direct accumulation of a large number of events, and the pace is so fast that it becomes boring to read dozens of chapters.