A Man of the Dao

I reckon many people will run away after the first chapter; the protagonist is even kinder than the Leshan Giant Buddha.

It's well-written and somewhat interesting, but I hope it focuses more on the plot. Some descriptions seem ornate, but upon closer reading, they are only partially grammatically correct. Skipping them completely won't affect the reading experience; in fact, skipping these redundant descriptions might make the reading smoother. The excessive use of quotations and pedantry is unnecessary.

I've come to support it. I hope the new book will focus less on preaching and more on the plot.

I saw a scene where the protagonist encountered a problem and visualized a monster he had killed. That's such a low-level approach. Even if you say it was due to perfect timing, location, and circumstances, you can't always be killing enemies much stronger than yourself. But if you don't kill enemies stronger than yourself, and the sources of your visualization skills are all weaker than you, then what's the point of visualization?

Lu Zu's nickname was Chunyang, and the two masters and apprentices were nicknamed Chunmang, right? Every time you say it consumes a lot, you will continue to fight in the blink of an eye? Did you learn sit-ups from Luffy? No matter what your state is, how many enemies are there at the enemy's home court, will you be done with it? No, buddy, your style is too open-minded, right? (The values ​​are very upright, which is really good, but is it too desperate?)

When you see the words of a sage, you can't hold back. If you don't cultivate your character and self-discipline in ordinary times, and just blurt things out, what's the use?

The Tang army is introduced every time the story begins, and so is the introduction of Duan Gong. The Six Heavens' Ancient Qi, this lineage, that lineage – basically, every new element takes up a large portion of a chapter to explain. This excessive amount of text slows down the plot's progression. I suggest making it more concise.

Fish is Liuge, Liuge is 12345, 12345 is young woman, and young woman is fish.

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Another one of these nonsensical introductions