Beast-Taming Immortal Dynasty: I Can Design Evolutionary Forms

Bengbu has stopped writing. The same old sentimentalism and padding the word count, repeating the same things over and over again—even if it's the author's style, they should at least consider reader feedback. If this continues, the author will become like the goblin next door, heavily addicted and losing readers. And this author is even worse than that goblin, with severely stereotypical characters.

The author is such a predominantly artsy person; anyone who has read his books will remember him. It's the first time I've ever seen someone so artsy.

They ruined themselves. They said from the beginning that being sentimental was fine, but you can't just use sentimental storytelling in every chapter. It made everyone tired of watching, and the story didn't move forward. They played a good hand terribly.

The overall theme and plot are good, but the content is a bit weak. It includes too much pretentious, artsy stuff, and the early chapters are too depressing (making the protagonist suffer too much). The pacing is okay after it's released, so you can subscribe and check it out. As for monthly tickets, you should see how it goes later.

I've ordered dozens of chapters; it feels like watching a live-streaming sales event. Please support me, family! I have elderly parents and young children who need money and are crying for food. My father is injured; his back is killing him... Waaah... Waaah, my brother's back is hunched, and he can't afford to get married. It's so hard. For this family and my loved ones, I must be strong.

The author doesn't constantly write about sentimental reflections or wallow in sadness, nor does they exploit those emotions. Instead, they simply depict normal interactions between people and describe a different world. I think that's truly well-written and comfortable to read. Even if it's a bit padded, I wouldn't mind.

I'm so angry! I genuinely thought I'd found another great beast-taming novel, but what is this? It's like every single chapter is filled with Old Black's gratitude and his classmates' help. How many times did you even mention the senior's Wind Sparrow helping him find food? Is it really necessary? Every chapter is about gratitude; who are you trying to lecture?

It seems like beast taming, but it's actually all about human relationships and social dynamics. Four families control the path to mortal transformation, so what chance do ordinary people have for advancement or even a chance to rise above their circumstances? It's all about human relationships and social connections. 😅

Author, there is something wrong with the title of your book. It looks like a fast-paced Internet article and it attracts this kind of readers. No wonder it is disliked by people for being a literary youth. In fact, judging from the slow-paced article, there is nothing wrong with it.

Even if the protagonist doesn't have a girlfriend and isn't cheated on, his father can still be cheated on.