The Immortal Feathered Ascendant

The writing is quite good, but the biggest problem is that there are too many branches of the protagonist's practice. There are 12 volumes in total. There are all kinds of messes, including refining weapons, alchemy, and talismans. It makes my scalp numb when I read it. But the number of words is up. If you can't finish writing this one, you can write another one.

The author is still awesome, but the number of subscriptions is even lower than eunuchs.

It is a mortal-style novel with good writing style and rhythm, and has the flavor of a classical fairy tale. One advantage is that it does not compromise the realm. Several retreats are used in the middle to pass through the repetitive practice time, and it is very smooth to read in one sitting. That's right. There are no immortal cultivators who have something different to do every day. Han Li has been in seclusion for fifty or sixty years. In addition, the character arc of the protagonist is not obvious at the beginning, but after the foundation is established and the map is changed, the writing becomes better and better. What is rare is that there is no life-and-death hostility, and the reactions to others are also very realistic. If you are a little poor, you will be alone, and if you are good, you will support the younger generations. Personally, I think it is on the same level as books like Tianhai Immortal Clan, Asking the Immortal Way, and High-Grade Golden Elixir, and is better than the Immortality Drawing Talisman.

Finally I came across a well-written novel. Most of the novels written by ordinary people are either nonsense or nonsense. Although there are traces of Dao Zheng Zheng, how many books do not have traces of others? Although it is not in the middle and late stages, in the early stage it can be ranked in the top ten of Xianxia personal rankings (a 13-year-old bookworm). I read the free chapters word by word and subscribed to one to post comments. But the author is very sorry. I don't follow books. I know everything I know. I've added it to my bookshelf and I'll see you in a year. (Do you have any recommendations for similar novels with 2 million words?)

The face is handsome and the spirit is restrained.

I have read more than 100 chapters. There are quite a few characters, but I have no impression after reading them. The female characters were lost halfway through the writing. The framework is quite large and there is a lot of content, but it does not advance the main plot. How many scenes have been written for the story of several monks? The author is wondering but he has been making various appearances. It is difficult to say what kind of person the protagonist is. After all, the personality is not distinctive. Hay +

I started reading the book from Chu Sheng, and I am following it with tens of thousands of words. I have read Chapter 68 so far. Slow-burning, with huge settings and lots of foreshadowing, it is a standard three-piece set for mortals. Let's talk about the advantages first: the writing is smooth, there is no forced pretentious plot, and it has a bit of a mortal flavor, with a sense of difference between immortals and mortals. It's just that the protagonist cultivates a little too fast. The essence of the mortal style is that when you are low-status in the early stage, you can easily become an invincible style if you level up too quickly. Let's talk about the shortcomings: the plug-in is a bit complicated, and you need to be proficient in many things. It still needs to be questioned whether the writing power is enough to write in the Mahayana period. In addition, there are too many female characters, but they all pass by briefly without any outstanding memories. Conclusion: The shortcomings do not hide the good points, you can keep watching it as food and fodder. I hope that the combat power will not collapse in the later period, and there will not be a plot where the protagonist is alone and pretends to be cool, and everyone else is mentally retarded. I hope that there will be other talented disciples who can interact with the protagonist, and even cheat the protagonist to create a sense of group portrait.

A simple title, a masterpiece of traditional immortality cultivation, a good pace, and the combat power is not broken. The protagonist's personality is a bit like Han Li, the villain does not talk too much nonsense, and there is not much plot to force his wits. It is a rare good book.

Not bad, I took the time to read it in the past two days. Maybe it's been too long since I've seen this kind of fairy tale. Although I always feel that something is wrong, it may be that the shadow of a mortal is deeper. But for a new author, the rhythm is well grasped.

The writing is good, but it always feels like it keeps advancing the plot, the climax points are too closely connected, and there is no good break. It would be better if the connection was more perfect ~