The Atonement Vessel

The author's writing style is still very solid and that of a veteran author, but the reviews are very divisive. The following are all personal opinions The reason why the comment area expresses the division is because the protagonist's character shows the division. In the main world, the protagonist always chooses to construct a special maggot image in scenes of solving problems. In the scene, he always actively behaves like a maggot, not even to the extent of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, but to the point of moaning for no reason, which is not necessary. This is the case several times when he presented something to the city guard. Maybe he wanted to play the protagonist in Doomsday novels who doesn't care about face and only cares about actual interests, but he used too much force. Then the protagonist in the different world dungeon strikes hard and shows his ruthless nature, although the intended audience of this book is not a moral gentleman. But readers who can accept this ruthless style will most likely not want to see the protagonist acting like a maggot in the main world. Those who can accept the protagonist pretending to be a maggot and eating a tiger may not be able to accept the protagonist's ruthless attack from another world. People who can accept the protagonist's ruthless attacks may not be able to accept the protagonist's main world playing maggots and eating tigers. The charm of this protagonist is difficult to get up and down, and it's stuck.

I really can't bear the end of a benchmark for the apocalyptic wasteland flow. "Infected Body" really shocked me for a long time... Hei Da, come on, I hope to see the glory of the apocalyptic flow again! 😭

I used to like your book Infectious Body, but unfortunately I ran into Jingwang

In the finale, I was convinced that the protagonist of Wasteland had to eat other people's brains in order to level up.

The stepmother asked the guards to kill the protagonist. The protagonist used all the family property to bribe the sheriff in exchange for a chance to survive. After surviving, he drove the stepmother and the guards to the manor where the property was owned? Why, brother, people are going to kill you. Why don't you silence them but drive them away when you know you are back from the dead? ? ? I really can't understand it

It's a pity for Lao Hei. The infected body with peak creative power encountered a bad environment. Nowadays, blood cross types that are purely based on curiosity and selling sensory stimulation can appear openly on self-media platforms, and Lao Hei's creative power is no longer what it was back then.

It's like being sick. You just solve a crisis and feel like you have less troubles. You look for things to do everywhere. When you become a transcendent, you immediately prepare for the next stage. It's like someone is chasing you.

It's the first one or two chapters that catch people's attention, but there are too many unimportant details and there are too many paragraphs, which makes it look dizzying and unable to grasp the key points Old authors shouldn't, have they declined after not writing for several years?

😥As the title...

The rendering ability of the writing is very strong, covering the logical flaws and settings full of flaws. 😅 It also gives charm to the plain plot, making it attractive to watch. But there are more and more flaws, and the logic of the supporting characters has not been established. It feels like a waste of writing. If it had been written by a novice and the writing style matched the same plot, it would have been criticized a long time ago. It is a pity.

The protagonist is just like Ruozhi, he keeps pretending to be sweet, I almost vomited when I saw it

The "fight of wits" at the beginning is really too sweet 🙂

There is a huge loophole, and the protagonist's father leaves a legacy through various methods. In the end, he died, and his stepmother later killed his son. There was no backup plan in this regard. This is too unreasonable.

I don't understand what the main plot of this book is, so far I'm just watching the protagonist imitate reality to make money…

I read that the protagonist killed alien individuals with racial hatred based on the records in his notebook when they first met, and the scene clearly stated that the aliens were civilized, not wild ethnic groups such as Zerg. Only by setting the alien race as the enemy of mankind can the protagonist's behavior be justified. However, this also leads to two conjectures. One is that the alien ethnic groups have enmity with humans, but each ethnic group is composed of individuals. As long as the individuals themselves have no enmity, they can live in peace. If the protagonist later encounters a situation where humans and aliens coexist peacefully, won't his heart be unstable and everything will suddenly break out? The second is that after all, the source of information about the feud is the notes, and the memory during his lifetime does not have this knowledge. If the two tribes seek peace now. Who is the protagonist who kills people just based on the records in his notes? Obviously it only needs a slight modification to write that after the protagonist is discovered, the aliens will directly kill him and then fight back. There will be no hidden dangers in the future, whether there is hatred or peace.

After watching Black Age, I felt that the supporting character Huang He was too disgusting. You have to be smart when transmitting. As a result, the male and female protagonists were transported to different time and space, and the male protagonist struggled in the new world. The heroine was slowly transformed into a beetle by radiation in another world. From now on, I feel like the author is in a state of ecstasy, as if he was writing somewhere in a dream.

It can only be said that Xihuan is still half-dead as ever. The writing style of the old writer is very steady and ancient, and the rhythm is a bit too fast. The main problem seems to be that the introduction of the extraordinary system is too slow and there are not enough hooks to catch people. The idea of ​​decryption and promotion is okay, but the first promotion experience is very poor. There is no correlation between the answer and the decryption. The function of the answer obtained in advance is to say it and it is over. The process is quite boring.

What is it written about? The characters and plot are very fragmented.

No, charging starts at chapter 37? It happened that the money was so bad that I didn't dare to subscribe anymore, so I just slipped away.

The writing is solid, but the story isn't very interesting and engaging, and the protagonist lacks charisma.

The gold coins in the book have almost become the starting currency. The money that ordinary people spend to buy bread is not Zimbabwean currency, but it is enough.

They're all here for the infected. It's a pity.

I came here from Dian Niang's official account. Unexpectedly, it was the author of the book Host who came to replenish my ticket. I look forward to the release of the new book

Well written, worthy of being an experienced author

Without the pressure of core combat power, whether it is legion combat power or personal combat power, it is inexplicably and without any reason to be promoted and released at will, so it feels very scattered. The protagonist eats an insect and is resurrected, and then starts taking revenge. This part is normal. Then he started farming inexplicably. First he actively asked for land to grow, then he was forced to accept it, and then he went to another world to farm. There are no internal contradictions or mistakes that push the protagonist to farm. Lack of money is a problem, but in reality, in such chaotic medieval Europe, farming was the slowest way to make money. The protagonist's physical fitness is set to be able to lift about 3 tons of weight at the first level, and he has a bunch of strange skills at the second level. The third level has not been mentioned yet. The result is that the protagonist has basically no show of force except killing several Karami and the alien Karami with brute force along the way. Especially the second-level skill, which is said to be the core skill [Luck], actually has no special plot setting. The main function of this skill may be to cover up some intelligence-lowering logic that is difficult to handle and cannot be explained. As for the creation of the protagonist, it is basically "submissive to reality and aggressive on the Internet", which is a typical character creation of the fence-sitter. On the one hand, it describes that primate meat can be traded normally in the towns of the main world, and on the other hand, it says that the protagonist will not kill in the main world because he will be pursued, and then it is set that the protagonist will casually let 80,000 people disappear from the main world. On the one hand, it is said that the protagonist cannot explain the source of wealth, and on the other hand, it is exaggerated in various ways that the protagonist allocates resources to feed and clothe 80,000 people. The purpose of such a large-scale battle is not to overthrow the emperor, nor to hold power or make the world a better place, but to make money. The key is to make so much money without spending it, and continue to use it to send more people to other worlds for charity. Wealth is not linked to personal combat prowess, nor is it linked to power, and the protagonist is not allowed to appear in front of others. So what is the point of setting up such a concept of wealth? Personal combat power is basically useless in the main world. He pretends to be a grandson all the time. It is similar in the other world. Except for tearing up 5 people in front of the prisoners, he also pretends to be a grandson at other times. So I don't understand what kind of story the author wants to tell us. The whole article just keeps talking about cannibalism, and then says that there is no shortage of food in this main world. Then the emperor loved money, but when he took the money, he did not start a national war or overhaul the palace. It was really confusing.

The remnants of the old era🙂

I don't know when another urban fairy tale will be released. I read it when I was in junior high school.

It's guaranteed to be on the shelves!

Well written. The old author is just not the same 😰

The author writes quickly, ten pictures a day🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔