Greedy Wolf from the Start, But I Didn't Tell You to Eat All the Enemies

Every time I see the protagonist's name, I can't help but think of Long Kui from the Legend of Sword and Fairy series.

When reading complicated books, don't nitpick the details and data; he's all about data. My assessment of him is that creativity is paramount, his ideas are incredibly imaginative, the beginning is tedious, the middle is exciting, but the ending lacks steam. So many years have passed, and I'm happy to see him release a new book. Let's see if there's been any change or improvement! Go, Lao Ma! He used to be called "Little Ma," now he's definitely "Old Ma." Hahaha

Dear artist, I'm sure you can guess my age by saying this. Having read so many books over the years, I'll just say this: the more realistic and relatable a book is, the better. It must be logical. I'm so tired of fabricated stories. I've recently flipped through many books, and even the top-ranked ones are nothing special. Why is "The Legend of the Mage" so good? Because it's realistic!

Chapter 28 was a bit disgusting. Hasn't he ever experienced the harsh realities of life? And this transmigrator is so arrogant, showing off his health bar means he can kill any god. Doesn't he even realize he's struggling to survive? Is it really necessary to write it like this?

This author... I really have a love-hate relationship with them. Their half-step ahead of the competition back then truly showed me what a terrible ending looks like.

What's this about Longkui being male? That feels so weird.

I've discovered that authors these days lack even basic logic and mathematical thinking before they start writing books! After reading the first chapter, I thought it was going to be an invincible story, but a dog almost killed him? His physical body has no strength?

The first few dozen, even a hundred chapters of your book were quite immersive. Why did it become less and less engaging as I read on? After reflecting on it, I realized that about 70% or more of the text so far is spent introducing, or rather, narrating as a storyteller about trivial things—mountains and rivers, various objects, weapons and armor, and so on.

Any experts out there who can come up with a way to trap this troublesome thing 😭😰 and force it to write, keep writing until it abandons a book, or even bankrupt it? If it's just sporadic writing, it won't feel any pressure.

I've read 200 chapters, it's so annoying! I didn't see anything in your synopsis, it's all just fighting, it's so frustrating, the theme and content don't match, I can't continue reading.