A Commonplace Occultist in a World of Mysticism

The writing quality is okay, but starting from the dream where the evil god comes, the writing is messy. I read it several times and I still don't understand the meaning. The future plot does not give readers a clear expectation. After reading it, I don't know what to say after reading it. There are many parts of the plot that I don't understand what it means, why the protagonist does what he does, and what he understands.

Investigation report: "Number" -753 Investigation target: "The Vulgar Warlock of the Occult World" - Male Protagonist - [Valentin Erfurt] Investigation Result: [Borrowing a Corpse to Resurrection] Judgment Basis: Abnormal Characteristics: A time-travel investigator, as the name suggests, is a profession that investigates and records the time-travel situations of time-travelers. It aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all worlds know in advance the time-travel situations of time-travelers in this world, and volunteers to provide observers with fast time-travel information inquiry services If there are any fallacies, I hope to correct them ——All Souls Feast Zhenjun Stay until September 1, 2026

For now, I think it might be more helpful for the protagonist to just find a way to die. You can refer to various mythological systems and various methods of death.

How to say it? The writing makes me feel weird, that is, the protagonist seems to have a sense of crisis, but he doesn't seem to have much sense of crisis. The organization's encounters make him feel a sense of crisis, but the actions of the protagonist make me feel that he has no sense of crisis at all.

If the male protagonist is so averse to having his free will manipulated or even just interfered with - which in itself is not a problem - then why is he so tolerant of the evil god? Isn't jumping and amplifying your emotions also an interference with free will?

The various magical settings are very good. But it feels a bit laborious to read. Sometimes when reading, you need to think very carefully and associate with the context to understand what the author is talking about. 😭 If this work could be made more relaxed, I feel it would be a very good work.

But if I write it in such a big way from the beginning, can I control it so that it doesn't collapse/cut?

My question now is, has it really been possible to reshape the original body under the power of dreams? Or is that just a special manifestation in a dream?

It's quite interesting, but sometimes I can't understand it.

Just passing by, I was the first one to post, and I follow you. I don't care about you.