Get to Work, Adventurers!

The boss died suddenly, and the next change is a bit urgent. If you don't want to find a job and have a more professional career, you can take risks. Look, the current methods can only defeat the goblins.

The first 13 or so chapters I feel are very good at 90 points, but the next dozen or so chapters are not very good at 70 points. The writing in the front is very good. I think the writing on family, sister, daily life, goblins, and making money is all very good. I think there is a bit of a gap later. A mage should first learn the small fireball trick. It is simple and crude. It can cause damage as well as deterrence. Seeing flowers in the water is a bit like a mirage. It sounds weak and requires more manipulation. It is difficult and has low power. I can't say that the protagonist is wrong about killing people. I feel a little confused. If you learn the small fireball, it may not be a deterrent if the small fireball is sacrificed. It requires a painful kill; the death of the eldest brother is cliche and boring; the protagonist's transition from daily life to adventure is hasty, and he has only learned two tricks in total; I don't like the female mage teammate of the protagonist's adventure, she talks too closely and I feel very unreliable; the golden finger appears too frequently and is annoying, and I also feel that the difficulty of unlocking is a bit low.

It looks okay, but it becomes confusing starting from chapter 15

You should see if you can become a mechanic. Then keep sorting out the mechanical things in your mind. The protagonist is on an adventure now, but what happens after the adventure is over? The conveniences enjoyed by the protagonist are all magic. But if you want to retire in the future, without modern technology and the Internet, it will almost feel very unaccustomed, so the protagonist should study technology more.

It's a pretty everyday and wonderful adventure life.

I was just passing by and I was the first to post.