Game of Thrones: The Dance of Dragons

I read two chapters and couldn't continue. It's too ridiculous. Everyone says Viserys is weak, but I never imagined they'd write a scene where his eldest son (the protagonist) kneels down to atone for his sins. It's outrageous. The Church's armed forces are long gone. Honestly, I don't know what to say about this.

This book is baffling; the Cult of the Seven was merely a plaything for the nobility during Westeros's time. By the way, with a main character, Otto wouldn't have acted so erratically, and no noble would have supported the second son; Westeros is all about the eldest son ruling. Is the author really not from a female-oriented fiction genre?

I feel that Alison's character has fallen apart. Actually, I could tell something was wrong just by reading the novel's synopsis. In fact, the synopsis itself is quite mindless and idiotic.

What a talent! How could someone write something like this: the king's son is imprisoned outside and left unattended?

Viserys was willing to kill Weimend for his eldest daughter; if he had an eldest son, what do you think he would do?

It feels like children playing house, a typical Tomato-style light novel. It lacks any sense of epic scale.

Author, are you really going to come up with this conspiracy theory? Honestly, it's completely unnecessary.

The opening sequence seems to lower the Hightoar family's IQ a bit. With a crown prince in their hands, why not brainwash him instead of him babbling on and on? Then, they could easily take him in as a retainer or adopted son. If their daughter becomes queen, Viserys will likely agree, and then they could easily train him into a Hightoar dog.

Why do you fanfiction authors like to change the names of characters from the original work so much? Even the author of "One Day King" did. My first thought was that the protagonist was Rennya's deceased brother from the original work, Emma's unnamed eldest son.

If possible, I'd like to see something else, a bunch of gluttons in fanfiction 😅